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Part 1

Giám khảo

Are there any rules for students at your school?

Thí sinh

Yes, in China students always need to follow some retested rules. For example, students need to wear uniform when they study in the school. Additionally, students can't use mobile phone. If there are any teachers to find that, they will take away them.

Giám khảo

Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?

Thí sinh

Actually, I suppose it depends on situation. For example, students will create a good characters if they follow some stranded rules such as respecting teachers and classmates, but sometimes if they umm.

Giám khảo

Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?

Thí sinh

Definitely yes. I had a Chinese teacher when I was in primary school who was very dedicated because she always prepared interesting lessons for students and sometimes she often gave me extra material.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?

Thí sinh

When I was a child or youngest, I prefer to have fewer roads at school. It will let me feel free and creative to play with classmates, but now I think roles are necessary.

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Are there any rules for students at your school?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 你的回答中存在语法错误和用词不当,如'retested rules'应为'regular rules','wear uniform'应为'wear a uniform','can't use mobile phone'应为'can't use mobile phones'。建议注意单复数和冠词的使用,同时句子结构需要更自然流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, in China, students always need to follow some regular rules. For example, they have to wear a uniform when attending school. Additionally, students are not allowed to use mobile phones during class, and if teachers find them using phones, they will confiscate them.

Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 回答不完整且表达不清晰,存在语法错误,如'create a good characters'应为'develop good character','stranded rules'应为'strict rules'。建议完整回答问题,避免语无伦次,使用正确的词汇和句型。

Ví dụ: Actually, I think it depends on the situation. For example, students can develop good character if they follow strict rules like respecting teachers and classmates. However, too many rules might limit their creativity and freedom.

Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 回答较好,但存在重复表达,如'always'和'sometimes'同时使用,且句子可以更简洁自然。建议避免重复,使用连贯的连接词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: Definitely yes. When I was in primary school, I had a Chinese teacher who was very dedicated because she always prepared interesting lessons and often gave me extra materials to help me learn better.

Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在词汇错误,如'roads'应为'rules','youngest'用法不当。建议注意词汇准确性,句子结构应更自然,表达观点时使用适当的时态和连接词。

Ví dụ: When I was a child, I preferred to have fewer rules at school because it made me feel free and creative when playing with classmates. However, now I think rules are necessary to maintain order and discipline.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× in China students always need to follow some retested rules

in China students always need to follow some strict rules

这里'retested'是拼写错误,应该是'strict',表示严格的规则。需要使用正确的形容词来修饰名词。

Incorrect use of the definite article

× students need to wear uniform when they study in the school

students need to wear a uniform when they study in school

'uniform'是可数名词,单数时前面需要加冠词'a',且通常说'wear a uniform'。此外,'in school'更自然,表示在学校期间。

Singular and plural issue

× students can't use mobile phone

students can't use mobile phones

'mobile phone'应使用复数形式'mobile phones',因为指的是学生们的手机,不是单一的一个手机。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× If there are any teachers to find that, they will take away them

If any teachers find that, they will take them away

'to find that'结构错误,应为'find that';'take away them'中宾语代词位置错误,应为'take them away'。

Present tense issue

× Actually, I suppose it depends on situation

Actually, I suppose it depends on the situation

'situation'前缺少定冠词'the',表示特指某种情况。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× students will create a good characters if they follow some stranded rules such as respecting teachers and classmates

students will develop good character if they follow some standard rules such as respecting teachers and classmates

'create a good characters'中'characters'应为不可数名词'character',且不加冠词;'stranded'拼写错误,应为'standard',表示标准的规则。

Sentence structure errors

× but sometimes if they umm

but sometimes, if they...

句子不完整,缺少后续内容,建议补充完整句子或删除不完整部分。

Past tense issue

× she always prepared interesting lessons for students and sometimes she often gave me extra material

she always prepared interesting lessons for students and sometimes gave me extra material

'sometimes'和'often'重复使用,且'gave'是过去式,符合上下文时态,去掉多余的'often'使句子更通顺。

Singular and plural issue

× When I was a child or youngest, I prefer to have fewer roads at school

When I was a child or youngest, I preferred to have fewer rules at school

'roads'应为'rules',符合上下文语境;'prefer'应使用过去时'preferred',因为描述过去的情况。

Present tense issue

× It will let me feel free and creative to play with classmates

It lets me feel free and creative to play with classmates

此句描述现在的情况,应该用一般现在时'lets',而不是将来时'will let'。

Singular and plural issue

× but now I think roles are necessary

but now I think rules are necessary

'roles'应为'rules',表示规则,符合上下文语境。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

ExtraAdditional; Exceptionally; In addition; Addition; Walk-on
FreeWithout charge; Unencumbered by; Vacant; Independent; On the loose
GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
InterestingAbsorbing
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