Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo
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Part 1
Giám khảo
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Thí sinh
There are quite few rules in my schools. The the rule the rules for dress code. There are rules for proper discipline. There are rules for language. There are rules for.
Giám khảo
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Thí sinh
Uh, not necessarily uh, how quite, uh, quite contrast, uh, from benefiting. I think more rules will restrict the students freedom. Umm, students will feel repressed or pressured due to the stricter rules. So I.
Giám khảo
Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?
Thí sinh
I know a mentor who is very dedicated towards his student. He helps the student in various cases. For instance, he once helped us student financially which was quite impressive of him to do that.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?
Thí sinh
Instead of having fewer or more rules, I prefer to have rules that are beneficial for the students. For instance, the students must have freedom to express their opinion.
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Part 1
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Your answer is incomplete and lacks clarity. Try to give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific examples. Avoid repetition and finish your sentences properly.
Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students must follow a dress code, maintain proper discipline, and use appropriate language while on campus.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains many hesitations. Try to organize your thoughts before speaking and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.
Ví dụ: I don't think more rules would benefit students because they might restrict their freedom. As a result, students could feel pressured and less motivated to learn.
Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: Your answer is good but can be improved by using more precise vocabulary and linking words to make it more coherent.
Ví dụ: Yes, I have a mentor who is very dedicated to his students. For example, he once helped a student financially, which showed his genuine care and support.
Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: Your answer is clear but can be enhanced by adding linking words and more specific reasons to support your opinion.
Ví dụ: I prefer having rules that benefit students rather than simply more or fewer rules. For instance, students should have the freedom to express their opinions, which encourages creativity and confidence.
Ngữ pháp
× There are quite few rules in my schools.
✓ There are quite a few rules in my school.
The phrase 'quite few' is incorrect; it should be 'quite a few' to indicate a considerable number. Also, 'schools' should be singular 'school' to match the context of the student's own school.
× The the rule the rules for dress code.
✓ The rules for the dress code.
The sentence is unclear and contains repetition. It should be corrected to 'The rules for the dress code' to properly indicate multiple rules related to dress code.
× He helps the student in various cases.
✓ He helps the students in various cases.
'Student' should be plural 'students' because the teacher helps multiple students, not just one.
× For instance, he once helped us student financially which was quite impressive of him to do that.
✓ For instance, he once helped us students financially, which was quite impressive of him to do.
'Student' should be plural 'students' to match 'us'. Also, a comma is needed before 'which' to separate the clauses.
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