Part 1
Giám khảo
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Thí sinh
Obviously my school have lots of route like how to wear your uniforms and how to line with the classes so I think maybe it's benefit for the student.
Giám khảo
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Thí sinh
Obviously, I think student will benefit from the rules because when they went to the go to the society they their behavior is their behaviors will affect them their life.
Giám khảo
Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?
Thí sinh
Yes, my junior high school teacher is an English teacher also is our class chairman and he set up very lot of roots and every student listen to her and admire her.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?
Thí sinh
Obviously I prefer few routes at school, but I think school establish the route is benefit for us. So I think more route may be good for our student to control our behavior and speaking and our study.
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,如动词单复数不一致,且用词不准确(route应为rule)。建议注意语法基础,使用正确词汇,并且回答应更自然流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, my school has many rules, such as how to wear uniforms properly and how to line up before classes. I think these rules help students maintain discipline.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答语法混乱,表达不清晰,缺少连贯性。建议简化句子结构,使用连接词使表达更连贯,并注意时态和主谓一致。
Ví dụ: Yes, I believe students benefit from rules because when they enter society, their behavior will affect their lives.
Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在性别代词错误和词汇错误(roots应为rules),句子结构不完整。建议注意代词使用和词汇准确性,句子应更完整自然。
Ví dụ: Yes, my junior high school English teacher was very dedicated. She set many rules, and all students listened to and admired her.
Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中多次出现词汇错误(route应为rule),句子结构重复且不够连贯。建议加强词汇准确性,使用连接词使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: I prefer fewer rules at school because too many can be restrictive. However, some rules are necessary to help us control our behavior, communication, and studies.
× Obviously my school have lots of route like how to wear your uniforms and how to line with the classes so I think maybe it's benefit for the student.
✓ Obviously my school has lots of rules like how to wear your uniform and how to line up with the classes, so I think maybe it's beneficial for the students.
这里'school'是单数,谓语动词应使用单数形式'have'应改为'has'。'route'应为复数'rules',表示多条规则。'uniforms'改为单数'uniform',因为通常指校服整体。'line with the classes'应改为'line up with the classes',表示排队。'benefit'应改为形容词形式'beneficial'。'student'应为复数'students',表示多个学生。
× Obviously, I think student will benefit from the rules because when they went to the go to the society they their behavior is their behaviors will affect them their life.
✓ Obviously, I think students will benefit from the rules because when they go to society, their behavior will affect their lives.
'student'应为复数'students',因为指多个学生。'went to the go to the society'语序和时态错误,应改为'go to society',保持一般现在时。'they their behavior is their behaviors'重复且错误,应简化为'their behavior'。'them their life'应改为'their lives','life'复数形式。
× Yes, my junior high school teacher is an English teacher also is our class chairman and he set up very lot of roots and every student listen to her and admire her.
✓ Yes, my junior high school teacher is an English teacher and also our class chairman. He set up a lot of rules and every student listens to him and admires him.
'roots'应为'rules',表示规则。'very lot of'应改为'a lot of'。'listen'和'admire'应加第三人称单数形式's',因为主语是单数'he'。'her'应改为'him',因为指代男性老师。
× Obviously I prefer few routes at school, but I think school establish the route is benefit for us. So I think more route may be good for our student to control our behavior and speaking and our study.
✓ Obviously, I prefer fewer rules at school, but I think the school establishing rules is beneficial for us. So I think more rules may be good for students to control our behavior, speaking, and study.
'routes'应为'rules'。'few'改为'fewer',用于可数名词比较级。'school establish the route'语法错误,应改为'the school establishing rules'。'benefit'应为形容词'beneficial'。'student'应为复数'students'。句子中列举行为时应使用逗号分隔。