Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct verb forms and more natural expressions. Also, avoid redundancy by combining similar ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students are not allowed to wear makeup or dye their hair in different colors, and everyone must wear a uniform.

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical mistakes and some unclear phrasing. Use linking words to connect ideas and express your opinion more clearly and naturally.

Ví dụ: I believe that having appropriate rules at school is beneficial because it helps students concentrate on their studies rather than getting distracted by playing.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but has grammatical errors and lacks clarity. Try to use correct sentence structures and provide more specific details to explain how the teacher helped you.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have a dedicated teacher who always supports me. For instance, she helps me improve in my weakest subject by explaining the topics in depth.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat confusing and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to express your opinion clearly with correct grammar and use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Ví dụ: I prefer having no additional rules because school should be a place for learning new things. However, since school is like a small society, it's important to teach students how to communicate with others.

× First, we cannot have a makeup, we cannot make our hair with different colors, and also we must to wear a uniform.

✓ First, we cannot have makeup, we cannot dye our hair different colors, and also we must wear a uniform.

The modal verb 'must' should be followed by the base form of the verb without 'to'. Also, 'makeup' is uncountable here, so 'a' is incorrect. 'Make our hair with different colors' is unnatural; 'dye our hair different colors' is correct.

× I think appropriate rules for students is good for them as at school.

✓ I think appropriate rules for students are good for them at school.

The subject 'rules' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, 'as at school' is awkward; 'at school' is sufficient.

× For example, she always helps me study my weakness subject to let me know more deeply.

✓ For example, she always helps me study my weakest subject to help me understand it more deeply.

The phrase 'weakness subject' is incorrect; it should be 'weakest subject'. Also, 'to let me know more deeply' is unnatural; 'to help me understand it more deeply' is clearer and correct.

× No, I think no more rules for school is enough because school is a place for students to learn, allows students to learn new things.

✓ No, I think no more rules for school are needed because school is a place for students to learn and allows them to learn new things.

The sentence has a run-on structure and subject-verb agreement issues. 'No more rules' is plural, so 'are' is correct. Also, two independent clauses should be connected properly with 'and'.

× However, I I think school is a place like a small so society.

✓ However, I think school is like a small society.

The sentence has a repeated word 'I' and awkward phrasing 'like a small so society'. The correct phrase is 'like a small society'.

× We need to also let students know how to communicate with others.

✓ We also need to let students know how to communicate with others.

The adverb 'also' is better placed before the main verb 'need' for natural English word order.