Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cevabınızda gereksiz tekrarlar ve dolgu kelimeler (uh) çok fazla kullanılmış. Daha doğal ve akıcı bir cevap için doğrudan soruya yanıt verip, kısa ve net cümleler kurmalısınız. Ayrıca, cevap yapısını geliştirmek için konu cümlesi ve destekleyici detaylar ekleyin.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students must follow the curriculum strictly and attend all classes. These rules help maintain discipline and ensure effective learning.

Gợi ý: Cevabınızda düşüncelerinizi daha açık ve net ifade etmeye çalışın. Dolgu kelimeleri azaltın ve fikirlerinizi desteklemek için örnekler veya nedenler ekleyin. Ayrıca, bağlaçlar kullanarak cümleler arasında akıcılık sağlayabilirsiniz.

Ví dụ: I believe discipline is more important than having many rules. For instance, in the workplace, being disciplined helps people succeed. Therefore, focusing on discipline can be more beneficial for students.

Gợi ý: Cevabınızda belirsizlik ve tekrarlar var. Daha doğal ve etkili bir cevap için doğrudan soruya yanıt verin ve öğretmeninizin neden adanmış olduğunu açıklayan spesifik detaylar ekleyin.

Ví dụ: Yes, my mother was a very dedicated teacher. She always prepared her lessons carefully and helped students understand difficult topics. Her strict rules ensured a good learning environment.

Gợi ý: Cevabınızda cümle yapısı ve anlam netliği eksik. Daha açık ve mantıklı bir cevap için nedenlerinizi net ifade edin ve cümlelerinizi tamamlayın. Gereksiz tekrarları kaldırın.

Ví dụ: I prefer to have fewer rules at school because I already follow strict rules at home. Having fewer rules at school allows more freedom and creativity.

Gợi ý: Cevabınızda dolgu kelimeleri çok fazla ve cümleler tamamlanmamış. Daha doğal ve etkili bir cevap için dolgu kelimelerini azaltın, cümleleri tamamlayın ve nedenleri veya örnekler ekleyin.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had some strict teachers in high school, especially in physics and chemistry. They enforced strict rules to ensure we studied hard and understood the subjects well.

Gợi ý: Cevabınızda fikirleriniz net değil ve dolgu kelimeleri çok fazla. Cevabınızı daha açık ve mantıklı yapmak için düşüncelerinizi net ifade edin ve cümleleri tamamlayın. Bağlaçlar kullanarak cümleler arasında akıcılık sağlayın.

Ví dụ: No, I would not like to work in a school without rules. I believe that some rules are necessary to maintain discipline. However, education should also be modern and support students' self-esteem.

× In my country, we have, uh, we have some mandatories, uh, to, uh, follow, uh, uh, curriculums and, uh, these rules, uh, many people have to, uh, connect with these rules and.

✓ In my country, we have some mandatory rules to follow in the curriculum, and many people have to comply with these rules.

The word 'mandatories' is incorrectly used as a noun; 'mandatory' is an adjective. Also, 'curriculums' should be 'curriculum' or 'curricula' as plural. The phrase 'connect with these rules' is incorrect; 'comply with these rules' is appropriate. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× I'm not sure about rules, but discipline is very, uh, significant for, uh, another section of life. I try to say, uh, work area and other type of, uh, certain situations, uh, it's can be beneficial.

✓ I'm not sure about rules, but discipline is very significant in other areas of life. I mean, the work environment and other types of situations; it can be beneficial.

The phrase 'it's can be beneficial' is incorrect; 'it can be beneficial' is correct. Also, 'another section of life' should be 'other areas of life' for natural expression. Modal verb 'can' should not be combined with 'is'.

× Yes, I have, I had uh, I can say my mother, uh, who is a primary school, uh, teacher, uh, she is very, uh S very umm, strict, uh, rules.

✓ Yes, I have. I can say my mother, who is a primary school teacher; she is very strict.

The sentence is fragmented and contains filler words. 'Strict rules' is misplaced; it should describe the teacher as 'strict'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× I prefer a few rules at school because I used to follow mandatory and rules in family life because my family my family has strict rules in.

✓ I prefer a few rules at school because I used to follow mandatory rules in family life since my family has strict rules.

The phrase 'mandatory and rules' is incorrect; it should be 'mandatory rules'. The repetition 'my family my family' is an error. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× Yes, I had, uh, during my high school period, I had, uh, quite S strict, uh, teachers, especially in my, uh, subject, uh, is, uh, physic and chemi chemistry, this type of, uh.

✓ Yes, during my high school period, I had quite strict teachers, especially in my subjects, physics and chemistry.

The phrase 'quite S strict' is incorrect; 'quite strict' is correct. 'Physic and chemi chemistry' is a mispronunciation; correct terms are 'physics and chemistry'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× No, I don't prefer, umm, I don't like, uh, this type of strictive, uh, situations. I believe uh, free, uh, education, like, uh, up to date, uh, like, uh, follow up to date technology and umm, self-esteem.

✓ No, I don't prefer, um, I don't like this type of strict situation. I believe in free education, up-to-date technology, and self-esteem.

The word 'strictive' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'strict'. The phrase 'follow up to date technology' is awkward; 'up-to-date technology' is correct. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammar.