Part 1
Giám khảo
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Thí sinh
Yes, there are several rules in my school. For example, students are not allowed to talking, allowed allowed talking when they join meals or they are not allowed to disrupt their teacher on the class.
Giám khảo
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think more rules is very essential for students. Students in their ages are not allow them to rise to self restraint well so need rules to regulate their behaviors.
Giám khảo
Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?
Thí sinh
Yes, this teacher is my history teacher. He is a strong sense of humor and he really love the things that he he teaches. He really love love history and always explain, explain the complicated acknowledgement. Easy to ask to understand.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?
Thí sinh
I prefer have more rules at school. The more rules is very beneficial to students to regular their behavior and training their better habitats habits.
Giám khảo
Have you ever had a really strict teacher?
Thí sinh
Yes, this teachers, my Chinese teacher, she is so strict that we must complicate our homework every day. And you need to do its will.
Giám khảo
Would you like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school?
Thí sinh
No, I wouldn't you Free school means students there is not easy to regulate and most of them may not listen carefully what I see and it's hard to teach them.
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 你的回答中存在语法错误和重复用词,影响了表达的自然性和清晰度。建议注意动词形式的正确使用,避免重复,并且用更连贯的句子表达规则。
Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students are not allowed to talk during lessons, but they can talk quietly during meal times. Also, they must not disrupt the teacher in class.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,表达不够清晰。建议使用正确的时态和结构,明确表达观点,并用具体原因支持。
Ví dụ: Yes, I believe more rules are essential for students because at their age, they often lack self-discipline, so rules help regulate their behavior effectively.
Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和重复,表达不流畅。建议使用正确的动词形式,避免重复,并用连贯的句子描述老师的特点。
Ví dụ: Yes, my history teacher is very dedicated. He has a great sense of humor and loves the subject he teaches. He always explains complicated topics clearly, making them easy to understand.
Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误和用词不当影响表达。建议使用正确的语法结构,避免拼写错误,并具体说明规则的好处。
Ví dụ: I prefer having more rules at school because they help students regulate their behavior and develop better habits.
Have you ever had a really strict teacher?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误和表达不清晰。建议使用正确的动词和句子结构,清楚描述老师的严格程度和要求。
Ví dụ: Yes, my Chinese teacher is very strict. We have to complete our homework every day, and she expects us to follow her instructions carefully.
Would you like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,表达不连贯。建议使用完整句子,清晰表达观点,并用具体原因支持。
Ví dụ: No, I wouldn't like to work in a rule-free school because it would be difficult to manage students, and many might not pay attention, making teaching challenging.
× students are not allowed to talking, allowed allowed talking when they join meals or they are not allowed to disrupt their teacher on the class.
✓ students are not allowed to talk, allowed to talk when they join meals or they are not allowed to disrupt their teacher in the class.
动词不定式to后面应该接动词原形,不能用动名词形式。这里allowed后面应接to talk,而不是to talking。
× Yes, I think more rules is very essential for students.
✓ Yes, I think more rules are very essential for students.
主语more rules是复数,谓语动词应使用复数形式are,而不是is。
× Students in their ages are not allow them to rise to self restraint well so need rules to regulate their behaviors.
✓ Students at their age are not allowed to develop self-restraint well, so they need rules to regulate their behaviors.
原句中“allow them to rise”结构错误,且“in their ages”应为“at their age”。应使用被动语态allowed,且主语和宾语混淆。
× He is a strong sense of humor and he really love the things that he he teaches.
✓ He has a strong sense of humor and he really loves the things that he teaches.
“He is a strong sense of humor”错误,应该用“has a strong sense of humor”。动词love第三人称单数应加s。
× He really love love history and always explain, explain the complicated acknowledgement.
✓ He really loves history and always explains the complicated knowledge.
第三人称单数动词love和explain应加s。单词acknowledgement用错,应为knowledge。
× He really love love history and always explain, explain the complicated acknowledgement. Easy to ask to understand.
✓ He really loves history and always explains the complicated knowledge, making it easy to understand.
“Easy to ask to understand”表达不通顺,应改为“making it easy to understand”。
× I prefer have more rules at school.
✓ I prefer to have more rules at school.
动词prefer后应接不定式to have,而不是直接接动词原形。
× The more rules is very beneficial to students to regular their behavior and training their better habitats habits.
✓ More rules are very beneficial to students to regulate their behavior and train their better habits.
主语more rules是复数,谓语动词应使用复数形式are。单词regular应为regulate,habitats应为habits。
× Yes, this teachers, my Chinese teacher, she is so strict that we must complicate our homework every day.
✓ Yes, this teacher, my Chinese teacher, is so strict that we must complete our homework every day.
teacher单数形式,不能用teachers。动词complicate用错,应为complete。
× And you need to do its will.
✓ And you need to do it well.
its will用法错误,应为it well,表示“做得好”。
× No, I wouldn't you Free school means students there is not easy to regulate and most of them may not listen carefully what I see and it's hard to teach them.
✓ No, I wouldn't. A free school means students are not easy to regulate and most of them may not listen carefully, from what I see, and it's hard to teach them.
句子结构混乱,you Free school错误,应分开。缺少主谓一致,students后应接are。需要断句使表达清晰。