Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo
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Part 1
Giám khảo
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Thí sinh
Yes, there are many rules for students in my school. In in my country many school have many rules for students because they can limited their naughty behavior and build them into a better person.
Giám khảo
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Thí sinh
I think maybe yes, because students can learn what to do and what can do from rules. Umm, so they can build their characteristic more better and more healthier.
Giám khảo
Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?
Thí sinh
Yes, I had a really dedicated teacher who is my English teacher when I was at primary school. She is very beautiful and umm she is kind to every student. Even though the student is naughty or umm in a bad grade, she will teach them all.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?
Thí sinh
Frankly speaking, I prefer to have fewer rules because there are some rules are not necessary and also limited children's growth such as some girls cannot have long hair because they think they are they are attracted from.
Giám khảo
Have you ever had a really strict teacher?
Thí sinh
Yeah, sure. When I was at my middle school, I have a strict teacher, which is who is my math teacher and also my monitor, our teacher's monitor.
Giám khảo
Would you like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school?
Thí sinh
Frankly speaking I would not like to work as a teacher in the roof free school because some teacher may under depressed by some naughty students or their hard handling fam family parents. So I don't think Rufri can benefit.
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Part 1
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“can limited”应为“can limit”，且句子结构重复。建议简化句子，避免重复，并使用更准确的时态和词汇。
Ví dụ: Yes, there are many rules at my school. These rules help students behave properly and develop good habits.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，如“what can do”应为“what they can do”，“more better”应为“better”，“more healthier”应为“healthier”。建议使用正确的比较级形式，并避免口头语“umm”。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think more rules can help students understand what is acceptable and improve their behavior and character.
Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答内容较丰富，但存在语法错误和口头语“umm”。建议去除口头语，改进时态一致性，并增加连接词使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a dedicated English teacher in primary school. She was kind to all students, even those who were naughty or had low grades, and she always helped them.
Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，句子结构混乱，表达不清晰。建议简化句子，明确表达观点，并避免重复和不完整的句子。
Ví dụ: I prefer fewer rules because some are unnecessary and restrict students' freedom, like rules about girls' hair length.
Have you ever had a really strict teacher?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答中时态错误和句子结构混乱，表达不清晰。建议使用正确时态，简化句子结构，并明确说明老师的身份。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a strict math teacher in middle school who was also our class monitor.
Would you like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在严重语法错误和拼写错误，如“roof free school”应为“rule-free school”，“under depressed”应为“be depressed”，“fam family parents”表达不清。建议注意拼写和语法，表达清晰完整。
Ví dụ: I would not like to work in a rule-free school because teachers might feel stressed dealing with naughty students and difficult parents, which is not beneficial.
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