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Part 1

Giám khảo

Are there any rules for students at your school?

Thí sinh

Yes, there is many rules for student at my school. Umm an example for that is student have to arrive at school before 6:48 AM and if there if you come after that you you get pregnant by the teacher.

Giám khảo

Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?

Thí sinh

Ashley is this depends on the rules like it is really good for children and student if uh, the rules are have good impact on our school environment like umm, not uh, put the rubies into our environment and.

Giám khảo

Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?

Thí sinh

Yes, I have had a really dedicated teacher who is my chemistry teacher. She's usually find the best way for children for her student to remember her lesson and also make this lesson more interesting.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?

Thí sinh

I prefer to have fewer rules at my school because you know in Vietnam students are have too much rules. So I think that there are some rules that is not really necessary. So if you can cut up that, it is better and balance for the student.

Giám khảo

Have you ever had a really strict teacher?

Thí sinh

Yes, I have had a really strict teacher and however, I think that uh, strict people can make our students become more intelligent and gentle, so that's why I really kind of love strict teacher.

Giám khảo

Would you like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school?

Thí sinh

Actually, I don't want to work in that stuff squatter, because I think that's true is quite too important. And when we not have that rules, students will be really like a mess.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.5Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Are there any rules for students at your school?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp, ví dụ như "get pregnant by the teacher" là không đúng và gây hiểu nhầm. Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời tự nhiên, chính xác và tránh những lỗi ngữ pháp cơ bản. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và có cấu trúc tốt.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are many rules at my school. For example, students must arrive before 6:48 AM. If they are late, they may face penalties from the teachers.

Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?

Điểm: 35.0

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không chính xác như "put the rubies into our environment". Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ vựng phù hợp để làm rõ ý kiến của mình.

Ví dụ: I think it depends on the rules. If the rules help keep the school environment clean, like not littering, then they are beneficial for students.

Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời có ý chính rõ ràng nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp như "She's usually find" nên là "She usually finds". Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng thì đúng và câu trôi chảy hơn để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have had a really dedicated chemistry teacher. She usually finds the best ways to help students remember lessons and makes the classes very interesting.

Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời có ý kiến rõ ràng nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như "students are have too much rules". Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng và từ vựng phù hợp để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

Ví dụ: I prefer fewer rules at school because in Vietnam, students have too many rules. Some of them are unnecessary, so reducing them would create a better balance for students.

Have you ever had a really strict teacher?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời có ý kiến tốt nhưng cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ như "strict people" nên là "strict teachers" và tránh dùng từ không cần thiết như "uh". Bạn nên sử dụng câu trôi chảy và chính xác hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have had a really strict teacher. I believe strict teachers can help students become more disciplined and intelligent, so I appreciate them.

Would you like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp như "stuff squatter" và "that's true is quite too important". Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng, sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu hoàn chỉnh để truyền đạt ý kiến hiệu quả.

Ví dụ: Actually, I don't want to work in a school without rules because I think rules are very important. Without them, students might behave chaotically.

Ngữ pháp

Singular and plural issue

× Yes, there is many rules for student at my school.

Yes, there are many rules for students at my school.

The subject 'rules' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, 'student' should be plural 'students' to match the context.

Singular and plural issue

× an example for that is student have to arrive at school before 6:48 AM

an example for that is students have to arrive at school before 6:48 AM

The noun 'student' should be plural 'students' because it refers to all students in general.

Sentence structure errors

× if there if you come after that you you get pregnant by the teacher.

if you come after that, you will get punished by the teacher.

The original sentence is unclear and contains inappropriate content. The intended meaning is likely a consequence for being late, so it should be corrected to a proper sentence with clear meaning and correct structure.

Singular and plural issue

× Ashley is this depends on the rules like it is really good for children and student if uh, the rules are have good impact on our school environment like umm, not uh, put the rubies into our environment and.

Actually, it depends on the rules. It is really good for children and students if the rules have a good impact on our school environment, like not putting rubbish into our environment.

The sentence has multiple issues: 'student' should be plural 'students'; 'are have' is incorrect, should be 'have'; 'rubies' is a mispronunciation of 'rubbish'; sentence structure is fragmented and needs to be corrected for clarity.

Present tense issue

× She's usually find the best way for children for her student to remember her lesson and also make this lesson more interesting.

She usually finds the best way for her students to remember her lessons and also makes the lessons more interesting.

The verb 'find' should be 'finds' to agree with third person singular subject 'She'. 'Student' should be plural 'students'. 'Lesson' should be plural 'lessons' to match context. 'Make' should be 'makes' to agree with subject.

Singular and plural issue

× in Vietnam students are have too much rules.

In Vietnam, students have too many rules.

'Students' is plural, so 'are have' is incorrect; it should be 'have'. 'Too much' is used with uncountable nouns; 'rules' is countable, so 'too many' is correct.

Singular and plural issue

× there are some rules that is not really necessary.

there are some rules that are not really necessary.

The relative pronoun 'that' refers to 'rules' which is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'.

Sentence structure errors

× So if you can cut up that, it is better and balance for the student.

So if you can cut those, it would be better and more balanced for the students.

'Cut up that' is incorrect; 'cut those' is better for plural 'rules'. 'Balance' should be 'balanced' as an adjective. 'Student' should be plural 'students'.

Singular and plural issue

× I really kind of love strict teacher.

I really kind of love strict teachers.

'Teacher' should be plural 'teachers' to match the general statement.

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Actually, I don't want to work in that stuff squatter, because I think that's true is quite too important.

Actually, I don't want to work in that staff quarter, because I think rules are quite important.

'Stuff squatter' is a mispronunciation or incorrect phrase; likely meant 'staff quarter'. 'That's true is quite too important' is incorrect; should be 'rules are quite important' to convey meaning.

Sentence structure errors

× And when we not have that rules, students will be really like a mess.

And when we do not have those rules, students will be really like a mess.

Missing auxiliary verb 'do' in negative sentence. 'That rules' should be 'those rules' to match plural noun. Sentence structure corrected for clarity.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BestFinest; To the highest standard
BetterSuperior; More advantageous; To a higher standard
GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
InterestingAbsorbing
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
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