Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is a bit long and somewhat unclear due to redundancy and grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences more concise and clear, and avoid vague phrases like 'and etcetera'. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, my school has several rules to ensure safety and a positive environment. For example, students must wear uniforms, avoid smoking, and treat others politely. Bullying is strictly prohibited to maintain respect among students.

Gợi ý: Your answer has some unclear phrases and grammatical mistakes. Try to express your opinion clearly and support it with specific examples. Use linking words like 'for example' and 'therefore' correctly to improve coherence.

Ví dụ: I think having too many rules is not helpful because students often ignore them. For example, some students at my school smoke despite the rules. Therefore, adding more rules might not change their behavior.

Gợi ý: Your answer is confusing and contains repetition and grammatical errors. Try to answer directly and clearly, and avoid contradicting statements. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Ví dụ: I have not had a very dedicated teacher because all my teachers are kind and understanding. They allow us to feel comfortable as teenagers, so I don't think any teacher stands out as especially dedicated.

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical errors and could be more organized. Use correct grammar and linking words to make your opinion clear and coherent.

Ví dụ: I prefer fewer rules at school, especially regarding clothing and makeup. Also, I think teachers should not be too strict because we are teenagers and need some freedom.

Gợi ý: Your answer contains contradictory and confusing statements, such as calling teachers 'terrible' but also 'sweet'. Avoid contradictions and clarify your ideas. Use proper grammar and avoid repetition.

Ví dụ: I have never had a very strict teacher. All my teachers are understanding and allow us to feel comfortable during lessons.

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and well-structured but contains some minor grammatical errors. Try to use more varied vocabulary and check sentence structure for accuracy.

Ví dụ: I would not like to work in a rule-free school because without clear rules, students may not respect teachers' authority. This could lead to a chaotic classroom where students do not pay attention or follow instructions, which would hinder learning and teaching.

× my school also has rules for students for their safety and good environment, like wearing uniform, no smoking, all for our help on also being polite, not being rude, the bullying isn't accepted and etcetera.

✓ my school also has rules for students for their safety and a good environment, like wearing uniforms, no smoking, all to help us also be polite, not rude, bullying isn't accepted, etc.

The sentence has singular and plural issues: 'wearing uniform' should be 'wearing uniforms' because 'uniform' is countable and plural here. Also, 'good environment' needs an article 'a' before it. 'The bullying isn't accepted' should be 'bullying isn't accepted' without 'the' as it refers to bullying in general. 'All for our help on also being polite' is awkward and corrected to 'all to help us also be polite' for clarity and correctness.

× all for our help on also being polite, not being rude, the bullying isn't accepted and etcetera.

✓ all to help us also be polite, not rude, bullying isn't accepted, etc.

The phrase 'all for our help on also being polite' incorrectly uses 'our help on'. It should be 'all to help us also be polite' to correctly express the purpose. Also, 'and etcetera' is redundant; 'etc.' alone suffices.

× monies do not ignore the regulations and smoke disputed restrictions.

✓ many do not ignore the regulations and smoke despite restrictions.

'Monies' is incorrect here; likely intended 'many' (people). 'Smoke disputed restrictions' is incorrect; should be 'smoke despite restrictions'. 'Despite' is the correct preposition to indicate ignoring restrictions.

× smoke disputed restrictions.

✓ smoke despite restrictions.

The preposition 'disputed' is incorrect here; the correct preposition is 'despite' to indicate that smoking happens in spite of restrictions.

× Therefore, I believe that simply adding more rules might not improve students behavior.

✓ Therefore, I believe that simply adding more rules might not improve students' behavior.

The phrase 'students behavior' lacks the possessive apostrophe; it should be 'students' behavior' to indicate behavior belonging to students.

× I prefer to have less rules about our clothing, about makeup.

✓ I prefer to have fewer rules about our clothing, about makeup.

'Rules' is countable, so 'fewer' should be used instead of 'less' which is for uncountable nouns.

× and the it's not really good to have so many rules.

✓ and it's not really good to have so many rules.

The phrase 'and the it's' contains an unnecessary 'the' before 'it's' which should be removed.

× because in my schools we have really understanding and terrible teachers who let us be comfortable at lessons, They let us sneak sometimes, they let us not to do homework, and they're really sweet.

✓ because in my school we have really understanding and terrible teachers who let us be comfortable at lessons. They let us sneak sometimes, they let us not do homework, and they're really sweet.

'Schools' should be singular 'school' to match context. 'Let us not to do homework' is incorrect; 'let' is followed by base verb without 'to', so 'let us not do homework' is correct. Also, the sentence was a run-on and corrected with a period.

× I don't think I would like to work as a teacher in rural free school because I believe that without the clear rules, students might not respect the teachers authority.

✓ I don't think I would like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school because I believe that without clear rules, students might not respect the teacher's authority.

'Rural free school' is a typo; should be 'rule-free school'. 'The clear rules' should be 'clear rules' without 'the' for general statement. 'Teachers authority' needs possessive apostrophe: 'teacher's authority'.

× without the clear rules, students might not respect the teachers authority.

✓ without clear rules, students might not respect the teacher's authority.

When speaking generally, 'clear rules' does not need 'the'. Also, 'teachers authority' needs possessive form 'teacher's authority'.