Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih alami serta jelas. Hindari kesalahan seperti penggunaan jamak yang salah dan kalimat tanya yang tidak tepat. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih terstruktur dan singkat.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are many rules at my school, especially about the uniform. For example, we must wear the full uniform, including shoes. Also, cheating during exams is strictly prohibited.

Gợi ý: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan kata sambung yang tepat untuk membuat kalimat lebih koheren. Gunakan kosakata yang lebih tepat dan hindari pengulangan kata yang tidak perlu.

Ví dụ: I think it depends on the situation. For example, having rules can help students stay disciplined and focused; however, too many rules might cause stress or pressure.

Gợi ý: Perbaiki pemilihan kata dan tata bahasa agar jawaban lebih jelas dan alami. Hindari kalimat yang tidak koheren dan gunakan kalimat yang langsung menjawab pertanyaan.

Ví dụ: No, I haven't had a really dedicated teacher. In my school, most teachers don't seem very committed to helping students.

Gợi ý: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan kata sambung yang tepat untuk membuat kalimat lebih terstruktur. Gunakan kosakata yang sesuai dan hindari kesalahan ejaan seperti 'roles' yang seharusnya 'rules'.

Ví dụ: I prefer to have more rules at school because they help students become more disciplined and stable. However, too many rules might make students feel pressured.

Gợi ý: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan buat kalimat yang lebih alami dan jelas. Hindari pengulangan yang tidak perlu dan gunakan kalimat yang langsung menjawab pertanyaan.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have had a very strict teacher. He always reminded us to follow the rules strictly.

Gợi ý: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan buat kalimat yang lebih jelas dan terstruktur. Gunakan kosakata yang tepat dan hindari kalimat yang membingungkan.

Ví dụ: No, I wouldn't like to work in a school without rules. Without rules, students might misbehave, and it would be harder to control them.

× Yeah, there is a lot of rules at our school, especially about the uniform.

✓ Yeah, there are a lot of rules at our school, especially about the uniform.

The subject 'rules' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number.

× We should wear a full uniform like sabuks shoes Sir.

✓ We should wear a full uniform like Sabuks shoes, Sir.

Proper nouns like 'Sabuks' should be capitalized. Also, a comma is needed before 'Sir' as a form of address.

× And we not allowed to cheating on the exam?

✓ And we are not allowed to cheat on the exam?

The modal verb 'are' is missing before 'not allowed', and the verb after 'allowed to' should be in base form 'cheat', not '-ing' form.

× For example, having a rules can help to stay disciplined and focus, but on the other hand maybe the student could have a stress or under pressure about the rules.

✓ For example, having rules can help to stay disciplined and focused, but on the other hand maybe the students could feel stress or be under pressure because of the rules.

'Rules' is plural so 'a' should be removed. 'Focus' should be 'focused' to match the adjective form. 'Student' should be plural 'students' to match context. 'Have a stress' is incorrect; 'feel stress' is better. 'Under pressure' needs 'be' before it. 'About the rules' is better as 'because of the rules'.

× No, I'm not. All of my teachers at my school are not dedicated for us.

✓ No, I'm not. All of my teachers at my school are not dedicated to us.

The correct preposition after 'dedicated' is 'to', not 'for'.

× They fear for his a lot, for his, all of students.

✓ They fear him a lot, all of the students.

'Fear for his' is incorrect; it should be 'fear him'. Also, 'all of students' should be 'all of the students'.

× I prefer have a more roles at school because it makes students more disciplined, stable but on the other hand maybe it could bring a negative side, for example like student will feel under pressure or something else.

✓ I prefer to have more rules at school because it makes students more disciplined and stable, but on the other hand maybe it could bring a negative side, for example, students will feel under pressure or something else.

'Roles' should be 'rules'. 'Prefer have' should be 'prefer to have'. 'Student' should be plural 'students'. Added 'and' between 'disciplined' and 'stable' for correct conjunction.

× Yes, I am. I have one really, really strict.

✓ Yes, I have. I have one really, really strict teacher.

'Yes, I am' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'Yes, I have'. Also, 'one really, really strict' is incomplete; it needs a noun like 'teacher'.

× He always told me about the rules.

✓ He always told me the rules.

The verb 'tell' is usually followed directly by the object without 'about' when referring to rules.

× We should see the rules.

✓ We should follow the rules.

'See the rules' is not idiomatic; 'follow the rules' is the correct phrase.

× We should do the rules, whatever.

✓ We should obey the rules, whatever.

'Do the rules' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'obey the rules'.

× No I'm not. Maybe it's make me complicated like there is a free school is there is no rule right?

✓ No, I'm not. Maybe it would make things complicated because a free school has no rules, right?

'It's make me complicated' is incorrect; it should be 'it would make things complicated'. Also, 'there is a free school is there is no rule' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'a free school has no rules'.

× Maybe the student are absolutely messing around, it's more harder to control them.

✓ Maybe the students are absolutely messing around; it's harder to control them.

'Student' should be plural 'students'. 'More harder' is incorrect; 'harder' alone is sufficient.