Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答不够清晰，语法和表达存在错误，且内容不够具体。建议回答时先明确回答问题，然后用简洁的句子补充具体细节，避免重复和语法错误。

Ví dụ: Yes, there are some rules at my school. For example, students are not allowed to have long hair, especially boys. I think these rules help maintain discipline.

Gợi ý: 表达不够连贯，语法错误较多，观点不够明确。建议先明确表达观点，然后用连接词补充理由，注意语法和词汇的准确使用。

Ví dụ: I think some rules are helpful for students because they create order. However, too many rules can make students feel uncomfortable and restrict their freedom.

Gợi ý: 回答内容较丰富，但语法和表达不够准确，句子结构混乱。建议使用更简单清晰的句子表达，注意时态和词汇的正确使用。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have had a very dedicated teacher. My tutor always helps me patiently whenever I have questions about my assignments.

Gợi ý: 表达不够流畅，语法错误较多，观点表达不够清晰。建议先明确表达观点，再用简洁句子补充理由，注意语法和词汇的准确性。

Ví dụ: Honestly, I prefer fewer rules at school. I believe schools should have only basic rules to guide students, not too many strict regulations.

Gợi ý: 回答内容混乱，语法错误严重，表达不清晰。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，注意人称和时态的正确使用。

Ví dụ: Yes, I remember a strict teacher in my primary school. She had short hair and often yelled at us, which made me dislike her.

Gợi ý: 表达不够连贯，语法和词汇使用不准确。建议先明确表达观点，再用连接词补充理由，注意句子结构和词汇的准确性。

Ví dụ: Yes, I want to be a teacher. I believe in a rule-free school, students can have more freedom to use their imagination and grow independently.

× Yeah, in my college there is basically not room for student, but in the junior high school or high school the the school limited students hair long for the boys and for the girls.

✓ Yeah, in my college there is basically no room for students, but in the junior high school or high school the school limits students' hair length for the boys and for the girls.

这里的room和student数量不匹配，应该用复数students；另外，limited用法错误，应为limits；students hair long表达不正确，应为students' hair length。

× Yeah, in my college there is basically not room for student, but in the junior high school or high school the the school limited students hair long for the boys and for the girls.

✓ Yeah, in my college there is basically no room for students, but in the junior high school or high school the school limits students' hair length for the boys and for the girls.

短语'room for student'中，'for'后应接复数students；'students hair long'缺少所有格，应为'students' hair length'。

× Yeah, most of all children do have benefits, some from the rules, but it has sometimes is too many limited.

✓ Yeah, most children do benefit from the rules, but sometimes there are too many limitations.

原句时态和表达不正确，'do have benefits'应改为'do benefit'；'it has sometimes is too many limited'结构混乱，应改为'sometimes there are too many limitations'。

× Yeah, most of all children do have benefits, some from the rules, but it has sometimes is too many limited.

✓ Yeah, most children do benefit from the rules, but sometimes there are too many limitations.

'too many limited'用法错误，'limited'是形容词，需用名词'limitations'来表达数量过多的限制。

× So I think students may maybe feel uncomfortable and after all it's not a good idea for school to settle down menus for students.

✓ So I think students may feel uncomfortable and after all it's not a good idea for the school to set down rules for students.

'may maybe'重复使用情态动词，需去掉一个；'settle down menus'表达错误，应为'set down rules'；'school'前缺少定冠词'the'。

× As a post student, my tutor helps me a lot and if I have any question about my paper day, he will ask the answer for me and he will teach me which is very patient and kind for him to use his time to help.

✓ As a postgraduate student, my tutor helps me a lot and if I have any questions about my paper, he will find the answers for me and he teaches me patiently and kindly, using his time to help.

'post student'应为'postgraduate student'；'any question'应为复数'any questions'；'ask the answer'用法错误，应为'find the answers'；'which is very patient and kind for him'结构不通顺，应改为'he teaches me patiently and kindly'。

× To be honestly I prefer there is a few rules for school to limited the children because I think schools should had the basic rules for children, not like like every every area of the student.

✓ To be honest, I prefer there to be a few rules at school to limit the children because I think schools should have basic rules for children, not like every area of the student.

'a few rules'前缺少'be'动词；'limited'应为动词原形'limit'；'should had'时态错误，应为'should have'；'like like every every'重复，应去掉重复词。

× To be honestly I prefer there is a few rules for school to limited the children because I think schools should had the basic rules for children, not like like every every area of the student.

✓ To be honest, I prefer there to be a few rules at school to limit the children because I think schools should have basic rules for children, not like every area of the student.

'should had'时态错误，情态动词should后应接动词原形'have'。

× Yeah, it make me remember of my primary school which the class of my my class, this this teacher of my class is very strict and I don't like her very much.

✓ Yeah, it makes me remember my primary school and my class; the teacher of my class was very strict and I didn't like her very much.

'it make'应为'it makes'；'remember of'错误，正确用法是'remember'后直接接宾语；'this this'重复，应去掉；时态应保持一致。

× He cut her short hair and he always yelling at us and sometimes they he even beat us.

✓ She had short hair and she was always yelling at us and sometimes she even beat us.

原句中性别代词混乱，老师应用'she'；'cut her short hair'表达不准确，改为'she had short hair'；'he always yelling'缺少助动词，应为'was always yelling'；'they he'重复且错误，应为'she'。

× Yeah. First of all, I want to be a teacher, but in college, which I think there will be free.

✓ Yeah. First of all, I want to be a teacher, but in college, I think it will be free.

'which I think there will be free'结构不完整，需改为'I think it will be free'，使句子完整通顺。

× And as a teacher, I think don't limited student imagination or what they want to do because they are they're still a child and he needs space to grow up, which I think less limited.

✓ And as a teacher, I think we shouldn't limit students' imagination or what they want to do because they are still children and they need space to grow up, so I think there should be less limitation.

'I think don't limited'语法错误，应为'I think we shouldn't limit'；'student imagination'应为复数所有格'students' imagination'；'they are they're still a child'主谓不一致，应为'they are still children'；'he needs'应为'they need'；'which I think less limited'表达不清，应改为'so I think there should be less limitation'。