Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Jawaban Anda kurang jelas dan terdapat kesalahan tata bahasa serta penggunaan kosakata yang kurang tepat. Cobalah untuk membuat kalimat yang lebih singkat, jelas, dan gunakan tata bahasa yang benar. Hindari pengulangan dan pastikan jawaban langsung menjawab pertanyaan.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are many rules at my school, especially about the uniform. We have to wear the full uniform, and cheating during exams is strictly prohibited.

Gợi ý: Jawaban Anda cukup jelas namun tata bahasa dan struktur kalimat perlu diperbaiki agar lebih natural dan efektif. Gunakan kata penghubung untuk membuat kalimat lebih koheren dan tambahkan contoh atau alasan yang spesifik.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think students would benefit from having more rules because it helps them become more disciplined and focused, which reduces distractions in class.

Gợi ý: Jawaban Anda kurang tepat secara tata bahasa dan kurang spesifik. Hindari pengulangan yang tidak perlu dan berikan contoh konkret tentang bagaimana guru tersebut berdedikasi.

Ví dụ: I haven't had a very dedicated teacher, but one teacher always made sure we followed the rules strictly to maintain discipline in class.

Gợi ý: Jawaban Anda perlu diperbaiki dari segi tata bahasa dan penggunaan kosakata agar lebih alami. Jelaskan alasan Anda dengan lebih spesifik dan gunakan kata penghubung untuk memperjelas hubungan antar ide.

Ví dụ: I prefer to have more rules at school because they help students develop discipline and improve their focus during lessons.

Gợi ý: Jawaban Anda mengandung kesalahan tata bahasa dan kurang jelas. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih sederhana dan langsung, serta hindari kesalahan kata seperti 'real estate teacher' yang tidak sesuai konteks.

Ví dụ: I haven't had a very strict teacher, but some teachers often reminded us about the rules and warned us about the consequences of breaking them.

Gợi ý: Jawaban Anda kurang jelas dan tata bahasa perlu diperbaiki. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih singkat dan jelas, serta jelaskan alasan Anda dengan contoh yang spesifik.

Ví dụ: No, I would not like to work in a school without rules because it would be difficult to manage students who might misbehave without any discipline.

× Well there is a lot of rules at my school, especially about the uniform.

✓ Well there are a lot of rules at my school, especially about the uniform.

The subject 'a lot of rules' is plural, so the verb 'is' should be 'are' to agree in number.

× We so wear a full uniform and we're not allowed to cheating while next time there is a common rule at our school.

✓ We have to wear a full uniform and we're not allowed to cheat; also, there is a common rule at our school.

'So' is incorrect here; 'have to' expresses obligation. 'Allowed to cheating' should be 'allowed to cheat' because 'to' is followed by the base verb form.

× Well there is a lot of rules at my school, especially about the uniform.

✓ Well there are a lot of rules at my school, especially about the uniform.

'Rules' is plural, so 'there is' should be 'there are' to match plural subject.

× from more rules student could more discipline, more focus and not messing around.

✓ With more rules, students could have more discipline, more focus, and not mess around.

'Student' should be plural 'students' to agree with 'more rules'; also, 'could more discipline' is incorrect; 'could have more discipline' is correct.

× I haven't had a really dedicated teacher before, but I ever had a teacher that makes us always follow the rules.

✓ I haven't had a really dedicated teacher before, but I have had a teacher who always made us follow the rules.

'Ever' is incorrectly used; 'have had' is present perfect; 'makes' should be past tense 'made' to match past experience.

× I haven't had a really dedicated teacher before, but I ever had a teacher that makes us always follow the rules.

✓ I haven't had a really dedicated teacher before, but I have had a teacher who always made us follow the rules.

'That' should be 'who' when referring to people.

× They always tell us the rules, the rules and the rules.

✓ They always tell us the rules, the rules, and the rules.

Added commas for clarity; no grammatical number issue here.

× Well, I would say yes, I prefer to have more rules at our school.

✓ Well, I would say yes, I prefer to have more rules at our school.

No modal verb error; sentence is correct.

× It could bring positive side for students, especially for our disciplines and focus.

✓ It could bring positive benefits for students, especially for our discipline and focus.

'Positive side' is incorrect; 'positive benefits' or 'positive effects' is better. 'Disciplines' should be singular 'discipline'.

× Well, I haven't have a real estate teacher, but I ever have a teacher that tell us or remembering us about the rules about what should we do, what should we do not do and always warn us about a negative way.

✓ Well, I haven't had a really strict teacher, but I have had a teacher who told us or reminded us about the rules, about what we should do, what we should not do, and always warned us about negative consequences.

'Haven't have' is incorrect; should be 'haven't had'. 'Ever have' is incorrect; 'have had' is correct. 'Tell' should be past tense 'told'. 'Remembering us' should be 'reminded us'. Word order corrected for clarity.

× what should we do, what should we do not do and always warn us about a negative way.

✓ what we should do, what we should not do, and always warned us about negative consequences.

Corrected word order in indirect questions; 'warn us about a negative way' is awkward, replaced with 'warned us about negative consequences'.

× I would say not because being a teacher in a rural preschool are complicated work like all of students are messing around because there is no rules for them at school.

✓ I would say no because being a teacher in a rural preschool is complicated work since all the students are messing around because there are no rules for them at school.

'Would say not' is incorrect; 'would say no' is correct. 'Are complicated work' should be 'is complicated work' because 'work' is uncountable singular. 'All of students' should be 'all the students'. 'There is no rules' should be 'there are no rules'.