Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để trở nên tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như số nhiều, thì động từ. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và sắp xếp ý một cách logic hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students are not allowed to dye their hair and must wear uniforms. Also, everyone is expected to keep the school clean and be polite. Smoking is strictly prohibited on campus.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Hãy trình bày ý kiến của bạn một cách cụ thể và có cấu trúc rõ ràng.

Ví dụ: I think schools should have some rules, but not too many. It is important to balance discipline with students' freedom. Too many rules might make students feel bored and unhappy.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lặp từ và nói rõ ràng về giáo viên tận tâm đó. Hãy thêm chi tiết cụ thể để câu trả lời sinh động hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have. My head teacher in high school was very dedicated. Although she taught literature, she supported my dream of studying fashion design. She always encouraged me to follow my passion.

Gợi ý: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và từ vựng, đồng thời trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi. Hãy tránh lỗi phát âm và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, rõ ràng để truyền đạt ý kiến của bạn.

Ví dụ: I prefer fewer rules at university. For example, some rules about dress code or activities during weekends can be too strict and limit students' freedom.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy trình bày ý một cách rõ ràng và có cấu trúc, sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a strict math teacher in secondary school. He gave us many exams and always expected us to complete them by the next day.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn không trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng về việc bạn có muốn làm giáo viên ở trường không có quy tắc hay không, và giải thích lý do cụ thể.

Ví dụ: I think rules are important in schools to help students learn and stay healthy. So, I would prefer to work in a school that has some rules rather than a rule-free school.

× There are so much many room in my school.

✓ There are so many rooms in my school.

The phrase 'so much many room' is incorrect because 'room' is countable and should be pluralized as 'rooms'. Also, 'much' is used with uncountable nouns, while 'many' is used with countable nouns. The correct phrase is 'so many rooms'.

× Second, student are wear uniform, are cleaning and polite all awake.

✓ Second, students wear uniforms, are clean and polite all the time.

The noun 'student' should be plural 'students' to agree with the plural verb 'are'. Also, 'wear' should not be preceded by 'are' in this context. 'Uniform' should be plural 'uniforms' to match 'students'. 'Are cleaning' is incorrect; it should be 'are clean'. 'All awake' is unclear and should be replaced with 'all the time' to express continuous politeness.

× Thirdly, a student do not do allow smoke.

✓ Thirdly, students are not allowed to smoke.

The phrase 'a student do not do allow smoke' is grammatically incorrect. 'A student' is singular but the sentence refers to a general rule, so 'students' plural is better. 'Do not do allow' is incorrect; the correct passive form is 'are not allowed'. 'Smoke' should be preceded by 'to' as in 'to smoke'.

× In my opinion, rule in the school have to have but not too much.

✓ In my opinion, rules in the school have to exist but not too many.

The noun 'rule' should be plural 'rules' to match the plural verb 'have'. 'Have to have' is awkward; 'have to exist' or 'should be' is better. 'Too much' is used with uncountable nouns; 'too many' is correct for countable nouns like 'rules'.

× We need the balance of making room to student listening and maintain in study.

✓ We need a balance between giving students room to listen and maintaining their studies.

'Room' here means 'space' and is singular, which is correct, but 'to student listening' is incorrect; it should be 'giving students room to listen'. 'Maintain in study' is incorrect; it should be 'maintaining their studies'.

× But the opposite side, if we have too much student feel uh boring and unhappy for that.

✓ But on the other hand, if we have too many students, they feel bored and unhappy because of that.

'Too much student' is incorrect; 'student' should be plural 'students' and 'too many' is used for countable nouns. 'Feel uh boring' is incorrect; it should be 'feel bored'. 'Unhappy for that' should be 'unhappy because of that'.

× Yes, I have she is my head teacher of my high school.

✓ Yes, I have had her as my head teacher in high school.

The sentence lacks proper past tense structure. 'I have she is' is incorrect; it should be 'I have had her'. Also, 'of my high school' should be 'in high school'.

× Even though she is literature teacher, she and she know I want to become I want to uh, studying at the still fashion designer, uh, university.

✓ Even though she is a literature teacher, she knows I want to become a fashion designer and study at university.

'Literature teacher' needs an article 'a'. 'She and she know' is incorrect; it should be 'she knows'. 'I want to uh, studying' is incorrect; it should be 'I want to study'. 'At the still fashion designer, uh, university' is unclear and should be simplified to 'study at university'.

× She still respect me and support me uh, learning art and.

✓ She still respects me and supports me in learning art.

'Respect' and 'support' need third person singular 's'. 'Support me uh, learning art and' is incomplete and incorrect; it should be 'supports me in learning art'.

× For me, I prefer fewer rooms in my university.

✓ For me, I prefer fewer rules in my university.

The word 'rooms' is incorrect in context; the student likely means 'rules'. 'Fewer' is correctly used with countable nouns like 'rules'.

× Uh, for example, my university have through a boy have to bear with all the weekend and sometime uh not allowed to dying bright hair, uh.

✓ For example, my university has a rule that boys have to stay on campus all weekend and sometimes are not allowed to dye their hair bright colors.

'My university have' should be 'my university has' (third person singular). 'Through a boy have to bear with all the weekend' is unclear; corrected to 'boys have to stay on campus all weekend'. 'Not allowed to dying' should be 'not allowed to dye'.

× Yes, I have strict teacher for example is he is my math teacher or secondary school and uh every day he gave me and my friend a lot of exam and he told us to do our exam on the next day finally.

✓ Yes, I have a strict teacher; for example, he is my math teacher in secondary school and every day he gives me and my friends a lot of exams and tells us to do our exams the next day.

'I have strict teacher' needs an article 'a'. 'Or secondary school' should be 'in secondary school'. 'He gave' should be present tense 'he gives' to match context. 'Friend' should be plural 'friends'. 'A lot of exam' should be 'a lot of exams'. 'Do our exam' should be 'do our exams'.

× Would you like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school?

✓ Would you like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school?

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× Now after all my sharing, I just say I feel school improve are important.

✓ Now, after all my sharing, I just want to say I feel school improvements are important.

The sentence structure is awkward. 'I just say I feel school improve are important' is incorrect. It should be 'I just want to say I feel school improvements are important'.

× Uh, it's help make student to become uh, to become better and better to lead learning, uh, knowledge and uh, stay healthy in their life.

✓ It helps students to become better and better, to lead learning, gain knowledge, and stay healthy in their lives.

'It's help' should be 'It helps' (third person singular). 'Make student' should be 'help students'. 'To become better and better to lead learning' is awkward; corrected to 'to become better and better, to lead learning'. 'Stay healthy in their life' should be 'stay healthy in their lives'.