Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, and use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences. For example, you can say: "Yes, my school had several rules to maintain discipline. For instance, students were required to wear uniforms, which helped promote equality. Additionally, proper behaviour was expected at all times to create a respectful environment."

Ví dụ: Yes, my school had several rules to maintain discipline. For instance, students were required to wear uniforms, which helped promote equality. Additionally, proper behaviour was expected at all times to create a respectful environment.

Gợi ý: Your answer lacks clarity and has grammatical mistakes. Use linking words such as 'for example' or 'moreover' to connect your ideas. Also, be specific about how rules benefit students. For example, you can say: "Yes, I believe more rules can benefit students. For example, uniform rules promote equality and reduce distractions. Moreover, good behaviour rules help students develop discipline, which benefits their future careers."

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe more rules can benefit students. For example, uniform rules promote equality and reduce distractions. Moreover, good behaviour rules help students develop discipline, which benefits their future careers.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. For example: "Yes, I was fortunate to have a dedicated teacher in high school. She was passionate about teaching and worked hard to help students succeed because she cared about their future."

Ví dụ: Yes, I was fortunate to have a dedicated teacher in high school. She was passionate about teaching and worked hard to help students succeed because she cared about their future.

Gợi ý: Your answer is a bit confusing and lengthy. Try to answer directly whether you prefer more or fewer rules, and explain your reason clearly with linking words. For example: "I prefer more rules at school because strict rules, such as fines for misbehaviour, encourage students to follow them. This helps maintain discipline and creates a better learning environment."

Ví dụ: I prefer more rules at school because strict rules, such as fines for misbehaviour, encourage students to follow them. This helps maintain discipline and creates a better learning environment.

Gợi ý: Your answer has good content but contains grammatical errors and is a bit long. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' properly, and keep sentences concise. For example: "Yes, my math teacher was very strict because he wanted all students to do well in exams. Therefore, he took extra classes, especially for students who struggled, and gave them additional work to improve."

Ví dụ: Yes, my math teacher was very strict because he wanted all students to do well in exams. Therefore, he took extra classes, especially for students who struggled, and gave them additional work to improve.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by clearer sentence structure and linking words. For example, use 'because' to explain reasons and avoid redundancy. You can say: "I would not like to work in a rule-free school because it would be difficult to maintain discipline. Without rules, teachers may find it challenging to guide students on right and wrong. Therefore, rules are essential in every school."

Ví dụ: I would not like to work in a rule-free school because it would be difficult to maintain discipline. Without rules, teachers may find it challenging to guide students on right and wrong. Therefore, rules are essential in every school.

× Yes, when I was in my school, there are several rules for the student to maintain the discipline and to follow the principal rules of the school like to be in a uniform which is important and essential for the student.

✓ Yes, when I was in my school, there were several rules for the students to maintain discipline and to follow the principal rules of the school, like wearing a uniform which is important and essential for the students.

The sentence uses 'are' which is present tense, but the context is past ('when I was in my school'), so 'were' should be used to match past tense. Also, 'student' should be plural 'students' to agree with 'several rules' applying to multiple students. 'To be in a uniform' is incorrect; it should be 'wearing a uniform' to express the action properly.

× Yes, when I was in my school, there are several rules for the student to maintain the discipline and to follow the principal rules of the school like to be in a uniform which is important and essential for the student.

✓ Yes, when I was in my school, there were several rules for the students to maintain discipline and to follow the principal rules of the school, like wearing a uniform which is important and essential for the students.

The word 'student' is singular but should be plural 'students' because the rules apply to multiple students. Consistency in number is important for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Moreover, the student should be in a proper manner and behave in a proper.

✓ Moreover, the students should behave in a proper manner.

The phrase 'be in a proper manner' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'behave in a proper manner'. Also, 'the student' should be plural 'the students' to refer generally. The sentence was incomplete and redundant, so it was corrected for clarity and correctness.

× Moreover, the student should be in a proper manner and behave in a proper.

✓ Moreover, the students should behave in a proper manner.

The singular 'student' should be plural 'students' because the statement refers to all students generally.

× Of course yes, following rules like rules of uniform which promote an emotions and equality between student.

✓ Of course yes, following rules like uniform rules promotes emotions and equality among students.

The phrase 'an emotions' is incorrect; 'emotions' is plural and should not have 'an'. Also, 'between student' should be 'among students' because it refers to more than two individuals. 'Rules of uniform' is better expressed as 'uniform rules'. Subject-verb agreement corrected with 'promotes' for singular subject 'following rules'.

× Of course yes, following rules like rules of uniform which promote an emotions and equality between student.

✓ Of course yes, following rules like uniform rules promotes emotions and equality among students.

The word 'student' is singular but should be plural 'students' because the equality is among multiple students.

× Additionally, if the student behave in a proper manners and have a good ethic, it also promote their future.

✓ Additionally, if the students behave in a proper manner and have good ethics, it also promotes their future.

'In a proper manners' is incorrect; it should be 'in a proper manner' (singular). 'Have a good ethic' should be 'have good ethics' as 'ethics' is plural and uncountable here. Subject-verb agreement corrected with 'promotes' for singular subject 'it'.

× Additionally, if the student behave in a proper manners and have a good ethic, it also promote their future.

✓ Additionally, if the students behave in a proper manner and have good ethics, it also promotes their future.

The verb 'behave' should be 'behave' for plural 'students', and 'promote' should be 'promotes' to agree with singular subject 'it'.

× Yes, I have been Fort fortunate to have a really dedicated teacher during my high school.

✓ Yes, I have been fortunate to have a really dedicated teacher during my high school.

The word 'Fort' is a typo and should be removed to correct the sentence. The tense 'have been' is correct here as it refers to past experience continuing to present.

× She was passionate about her passion as well as she want her student to succeed in their career so she work hard on the student work week specially because she want.

✓ She was passionate about her subject as well as she wanted her students to succeed in their careers, so she worked hard on the students' work weekly, especially because she wanted.

'Passionate about her passion' is redundant; it should specify the subject. 'Want' and 'work' should be in past tense 'wanted' and 'worked' to match past context. 'Student' should be plural 'students'. 'Work week' is unclear; 'worked on the students' work weekly' is clearer. The sentence was incomplete and corrected for clarity.

× She was passionate about her passion as well as she want her student to succeed in their career so she work hard on the student work week specially because she want.

✓ She was passionate about her subject as well as she wanted her students to succeed in their careers, so she worked hard on the students' work weekly, especially because she wanted.

'Student' should be plural 'students' because it refers to multiple students. 'Career' should be plural 'careers' to match 'students'.

× She was passionate about her passion as well as she want her student to succeed in their career so she work hard on the student work week specially because she want.

✓ She was passionate about her subject as well as she wanted her students to succeed in their careers, so she worked hard on the students' work weekly, especially because she wanted.

The verbs 'want' and 'work' should be in past tense 'wanted' and 'worked' to maintain consistency with the past tense context.

× Yes, I feel that most of the student who do not follow the rules, there must be a strict rule regarding who are breaking the rules like finance penalty about not following a particular rule or misbehaving in the school.

✓ Yes, I feel that most of the students who do not follow the rules, there must be a strict rule regarding those who are breaking the rules, like financial penalties for not following a particular rule or misbehaving in the school.

'Student' should be plural 'students' to agree with 'most of'. 'Who are breaking' should be 'those who are breaking' for clarity. 'Finance penalty' is incorrect; it should be 'financial penalties'.

× Yes, I feel that most of the student who do not follow the rules, there must be a strict rule regarding who are breaking the rules like finance penalty about not following a particular rule or misbehaving in the school.

✓ Yes, I feel that most of the students who do not follow the rules, there must be a strict rule regarding those who are breaking the rules, like financial penalties for not following a particular rule or misbehaving in the school.

The pronoun 'who' should be 'those who' to correctly refer to the people breaking the rules.

× Yes, I feel that most of the student who do not follow the rules, there must be a strict rule regarding who are breaking the rules like finance penalty about not following a particular rule or misbehaving in the school.

✓ Yes, I feel that most of the students who do not follow the rules, there must be a strict rule regarding those who are breaking the rules, like financial penalties for not following a particular rule or misbehaving in the school.

The phrase 'about not following' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'for' when referring to penalties related to an action.

× In that case, the student may prefer and may behave in a good manner.

✓ In that case, the students may prefer and may behave in a good manner.

'Student' should be plural 'students' to refer generally to all students.

× I will remember that my math teacher was very strict because he wanted every student to score good in boards, so he always take extra classes of the student, mostly the student who are weak in the math, he focused more on them and give extra work to them.

✓ I remember that my math teacher was very strict because he wanted every student to score well in the board exams, so he always took extra classes for the students, mostly the students who were weak in math; he focused more on them and gave extra work to them.

'Will remember' is incorrect for past event; 'remember' is correct. 'Score good' should be 'score well' as 'well' is the adverb. 'Take' and 'give' should be past tense 'took' and 'gave'. 'Student' should be plural 'students'. 'Who are weak' should be 'who were weak' to match past tense.

× I will remember that my math teacher was very strict because he wanted every student to score good in boards, so he always take extra classes of the student, mostly the student who are weak in the math, he focused more on them and give extra work to them.

✓ I remember that my math teacher was very strict because he wanted every student to score well in the board exams, so he always took extra classes for the students, mostly the students who were weak in math; he focused more on them and gave extra work to them.

The preposition 'of' is incorrect in 'extra classes of the student'; it should be 'extra classes for the students'.

× I will remember that my math teacher was very strict because he wanted every student to score good in boards, so he always take extra classes of the student, mostly the student who are weak in the math, he focused more on them and give extra work to them.

✓ I remember that my math teacher was very strict because he wanted every student to score well in the board exams, so he always took extra classes for the students, mostly the students who were weak in math; he focused more on them and gave extra work to them.

'Student' should be plural 'students' to refer to multiple students. 'Who are weak' should be 'who were weak' to maintain past tense.

× I will remember that my math teacher was very strict because he wanted every student to score good in boards, so he always take extra classes of the student, mostly the student who are weak in the math, he focused more on them and give extra work to them.

✓ I remember that my math teacher was very strict because he wanted every student to score well in the board exams, so he always took extra classes for the students, mostly the students who were weak in math; he focused more on them and gave extra work to them.

'Will remember' implies future, but the context is past experience, so simple present 'remember' is appropriate.

× I feel that being a teacher in a rule free school may be difficult to maintain the discipline and maybe it is hectic for the teachers to who guide the student about good and bad.

✓ I feel that being a teacher in a rule-free school may be difficult to maintain discipline and maybe it is hectic for the teachers who guide the students about good and bad.

'Rule free' should be hyphenated as 'rule-free'. The phrase 'for the teachers to who guide' is incorrect; it should be 'for the teachers who guide'. 'Student' should be plural 'students'.

× I feel that being a teacher in a rule free school may be difficult to maintain the discipline and maybe it is hectic for the teachers to who guide the student about good and bad.

✓ I feel that being a teacher in a rule-free school may be difficult to maintain discipline and maybe it is hectic for the teachers who guide the students about good and bad.

'Student' should be plural 'students' because it refers to multiple students.