Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答不够自然且有语法错误，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地回答问题，避免重复和语法错误。

Ví dụ: At my high school, there were some rules, such as girls needing to keep their hair short. However, at university, there are fewer strict rules for students.

Gợi ý: 语法和表达不准确，逻辑不清晰。建议使用正确的语法结构，清楚表达观点，并用连接词使句子连贯。

Ví dụ: I think younger children under 12 need more rules because they lack self-control. However, older students should have more freedom to develop independence.

Gợi ý: 回答较为自然，但有语法错误和重复词汇。建议注意语法时态和避免重复，同时丰富细节。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a dedicated art teacher at university. She was very knowledgeable and always gave us creative ideas to start our design projects.

Gợi ý: 表达不流畅且语法错误较多。建议简洁表达观点，使用正确语法，并补充具体理由。

Ví dụ: I prefer fewer rules at school because university students are adults. Having fewer rules can encourage creativity and independence.

Gợi ý: 语法和表达不准确，句子结构混乱。建议使用正确的时态和单复数形式，表达更清晰。

Ví dụ: No, I haven't had a very strict teacher. Most of my teachers were patient, knowledgeable, and friendly, and they inspired me to learn.

Gợi ý: 表达不清晰且有重复词汇，语法错误较多。建议简洁明了地表达观点，使用连接词使句子连贯。

Ví dụ: I wouldn't like to work in a school without rules because rules help children control their behavior and prevent harm. Without rules, teaching would be difficult.

× And I don't remember there are many schools for student in university, but I remember that when I studied at median high school, girls, uh, need to cut their hair in a short way.

✓ And I don't remember there are many schools for students in university, but I remember that when I studied at median high school, girls, uh, need to cut their hair in a short way.

student 应该用复数 students，因为这里指的是多个学生。

× And I don't remember there are many schools for student in university, but I remember that when I studied at median high school, girls, uh, need to cut their hair in a short way.

✓ And I don't remember there are many schools for students at university, but I remember that when I studied at median high school, girls, uh, need to cut their hair in a short way.

在表示“在大学”时，应该用介词 at 而不是 in。

× It depends on what kind of children is it.

✓ It depends on what kind of children it is.

句子结构错误，应该是 'what kind of children it is'，children 是复数，语序需要调整。

× If the children are in in under 12 they need more new rules because they are land of self-control but higher age they need more free.

✓ If the children are under 12, they need more new rules because they lack self-control, but older children need more freedom.

children 是复数，表达年龄时用 under 12，不用 in under 12；'land of self-control' 应为 'lack self-control'；'higher age' 应改为 'older children'；'need more free' 应改为 'need more freedom'。

× I met her at my my university and she is uh, knowledgeable and always give us some creative idea to start our design project.

✓ I met her at my university and she is, uh, knowledgeable and always gives us some creative ideas to start our design project.

主语 she 是第三人称单数，谓语动词 give 应该加 s 变为 gives；ideas 应该用复数。

× No, I don't have very strict teacher, but I have some patient and knowledgeable teacher and all of teacher I met, they dress very friendly and can teach real knowledge to me and inspire my knowledge.

✓ No, I don't have a very strict teacher, but I have some patient and knowledgeable teachers and all of the teachers I met, they dress very friendly and can teach real knowledge to me and inspire my knowledge.

teacher 应该用单数时加冠词 a；patient 应该用复数 patients；all of teacher 应该是 all of the teachers。

× No, I don't have very strict teacher, but I have some patient and knowledgeable teacher and all of teacher I met, they dress very friendly and can teach real knowledge to me and inspire my knowledge.

✓ No, I don't have a very strict teacher, but I have some patient and knowledgeable teachers and all of the teachers I met, they dress very friendly and can teach real knowledge to me and inspire my knowledge.

patient 应该是形容词 patient，表示有耐心的，不能用复数形式。

× No, I don't have very strict teacher, but I have some patient and knowledgeable teacher and all of teacher I met, they dress very friendly and can teach real knowledge to me and inspire my knowledge.

✓ No, I don't have a very strict teacher, but I have some patient and knowledgeable teachers and all of the teachers I met, they dress very friendly and can teach real knowledge to me and inspire my knowledge.

all of teacher 应该是 all of the teachers，缺少定冠词 the。

× No, I don't have very strict teacher, but I have some patient and knowledgeable teacher and all of teacher I met, they dress very friendly and can teach real knowledge to me and inspire my knowledge.

✓ No, I don't have a very strict teacher, but I have some patient and knowledgeable teachers and all of the teachers I met, they dress very friendly and can teach real knowledge to me and inspire my knowledge.

they 指代不清，应该明确指代 teachers。

× I don't like to be a roof roof free school because I think, uh, maybe rules will make children control their behavior and don't hurt each other and I think it's hard to to teach them.

✓ I don't like to work at a rule-free school because I think, uh, maybe rules will help children control their behavior and not hurt each other and I think it's hard to teach them.

roof roof free school 是错误表达，应该是 rule-free school；动词搭配用 work at a school；make children control 应改为 help children control；don't hurt 应改为 not hurt。