Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答不够自然，语法和用词有误，且表达不够清晰。建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题，并用连词连接细节，使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, we must follow the class schedule strictly and also respect the dormitory rules, especially when living with roommates.

Gợi ý: 表达不够清晰，语法错误较多，且内容重复。建议用更具体的理由支持观点，并避免重复。

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe more rules can help students develop discipline and good habits, which are important for their personal growth.

Gợi ý: 回答较为冗长且语法错误较多。建议简洁明了地表达，并用连词连接细节，使内容更具体。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have had several dedicated teachers. They always helped us whenever we faced difficulties in our studies.

Gợi ý: 回答不清晰，语法和表达混乱，难以理解。建议先明确观点，再用具体理由支持，并注意语法正确。

Ví dụ: I prefer to have clear and specific rules at school because they guide us to behave properly and help maintain order.

Gợi ý: 表达混乱，语法错误严重，且用词不当。建议简化句子，明确表达观点，并用具体例子支持。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a strict English teacher in college. Although strict, he helped me improve my English a lot, so I appreciated his teaching.

Gợi ý: 回答表达不够流畅，语法错误较多。建议用更连贯的句子表达观点，并具体说明原因。

Ví dụ: No, I wouldn't like to work in a rule-free school because it would be challenging to manage students without any rules, and teachers would need to pay more attention to maintain order.

× Of course I did.

✓ Of course I do.

这里是在回答关于学校规则的现状，应该使用一般现在时，表示习惯或事实，而不是过去时。

× we need to follow the rule of the scheduled and the classes we need to have

✓ we need to follow the rules of the schedule and the classes we need to have

rule和scheduled应使用复数形式rules和schedule，表示多条规则和时间表。

× observe the dometry rules with our dormitory, with our roommate.

✓ observe the dormitory rules in our dormitory, with our roommate.

observe rules后应使用介词in表示在宿舍内遵守规则，with our roommate表示和室友一起。

× I think it they are because a rule can shape one's heart and mental to be the better man

✓ I think they are because a rule can shape one's heart and mind to be a better person

it they are结构错误，应去掉it；mental用词不当，应改为mind；the better man改为a better person更通顺。

× and it can shape the man's behavior and mental and do things right.

✓ and it can shape a person's behavior and mind to do things right.

mental用作名词时应为mind；the man's改为a person's更通用。

× Yes, truly I have in my different learnings period, period.

✓ Yes, truly I have had different learning periods.

句子结构混乱，重复使用period，应简化为have had different learning periods。

× I have made a lot of teacher and some of them are very dedicated in our study and everything.

✓ I have had a lot of teachers and some of them are very dedicated to our study and everything.

teacher应为复数teachers；made a lot of teacher用法错误，应为have had a lot of teachers；dedicated后应接介词to。

× some of them are very dedicated in our study and everything.

✓ some of them are very dedicated to our study and everything.

dedicated后应接介词to，表示对学习的投入。

× When we come across some difficulty or anything they will help.

✓ When we come across some difficulties or anything, they will help.

difficulty应使用复数difficulties，表示多种困难。

× I think the rule is need to be specific or will have our to help us to do something.

✓ I think the rules need to be specific or will help us to do something.

rule应为复数rules；is need to be错误，应为need to be；will have our不通顺，改为will help us。

× So we need to cap the worst one and add that add to help one.

✓ So we need to remove the worst ones and add rules to help us.

句子结构混乱，cap the worst one不明确，改为remove the worst ones更清晰；add that add to help one表达不通顺，改为add rules to help us。

× Yes I did in my college I have a English teacher who are really straight with our English daddy so but I think this is very helpful to my learn English learning.

✓ Yes, I did. In my college, I had an English teacher who was really strict with our English study, but I think this was very helpful to my English learning.

时态应统一为过去时；a English应为an English；who are应为who was；straight应为strict；English daddy应为English study。

× So I like like the teacher and be thankful he's sweet.

✓ So I like the teacher and am thankful he is kind.

重复like like应去掉一个；be thankful应改为am thankful；sweet用来形容人不合适，改为kind更恰当。

× No, I don't want to because it will be more difficult to be as teacher in in such a real free school.

✓ No, I don't want to because it would be more difficult to be a teacher in such a rule-free school.

表达假设情况时，should用would更合适；as teacher应为a teacher；real free school应为rule-free school。

× I we need to put more attention to the student.

✓ We need to pay more attention to the students.

put attention不常用，改为pay attention；to the student应为to the students，复数形式。