Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to use correct sentence structures and avoid repeating words unnecessarily. Also, provide more specific examples with linking words to make your answer coherent.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For instance, students are not allowed to run in the corridors, and they must always show respect to their teachers. These rules help maintain discipline and a positive learning environment.

Gợi ý: Your answer has good ideas but contains grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe having more rules would benefit students by promoting discipline. For example, since some students do not listen to their teachers nowadays, additional rules could encourage them to follow instructions more carefully.

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but a bit repetitive and lacks coherence. Try to avoid repeating words like 'really' and clarify your points with linking words. Also, provide more specific details about the teacher's dedication.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a very dedicated teacher who focused on helping me prepare for my health exam. She was patient and explained difficult topics clearly, which greatly improved my understanding.

Gợi ý: Your answer has good content but contains grammatical errors and incomplete sentences. Use correct verb forms and complete your ideas. Also, use linking words to connect your points logically.

Ví dụ: I prefer having more rules at school because many students nowadays do not listen to their teachers and lack discipline. Therefore, implementing and enforcing rules can help improve students' behaviour and learning environment.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but has grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use singular/plural forms correctly and improve sentence structure. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a very strict teacher who taught me computer science. She was strict about punctuality and did not tolerate students arriving late to class, which helped maintain discipline.

Gợi ý: Your answer expresses your opinion but contains grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Use correct sentence structures and avoid filler words like 'Uh'. Also, use linking words to explain your reasons clearly.

Ví dụ: No, I would not like to work in a school without rules because rules are essential for maintaining order. Without them, the class would be difficult to control, and students might not listen to their teachers.

× Yes, there were many rules for students in my school.

✓ Yes, there are many rules for students in my school.

The question is in present tense asking about current rules, so the answer should also be in present tense. Using 'were' indicates past tense which is incorrect here.

× For example, should students should not run here and there, students should not insult their teachers and many more.

✓ For example, students should not run here and there, students should not insult their teachers, and many more.

The modal verb 'should' is repeated unnecessarily. The correct usage is to use 'should' once before the verb phrase. Also, the sentence needs proper conjunctions and commas for clarity.

× Yes, I believe if more rules are there, it would be more beneficial for students to be disciplined.

✓ Yes, I believe if there are more rules, it would be more beneficial for students to be disciplined.

The phrase 'if more rules are there' is incorrect. The correct structure is 'if there are more rules' to properly use 'there be' construction.

× For example, students doesn't listen to teachers nowadays, so giving rules to them will help them to stick on their.

✓ For example, students don't listen to teachers nowadays, so giving rules to them will help them to stick to them.

The subject 'students' is plural, so the verb should be 'don't' instead of 'doesn't'. Also, the phrase 'stick on their' is incorrect; it should be 'stick to them'.

× I believe to have more rules at schools because nowadays the students doesn't listen to their teachers and they are not in disciplined manner.

✓ I believe in having more rules at schools because nowadays the students don't listen to their teachers and they are not disciplined.

The plural subject 'students' requires the verb 'don't' instead of 'doesn't'. Also, 'in disciplined manner' is incorrect; it should be 'disciplined'. Additionally, 'believe to have' is incorrect; 'believe in having' is correct.

× Yes, I had a really strict teachers at my school and she used to teach me computer subject and she was very strict towards her rules like she doesn't like if children are coming late to their class.

✓ Yes, I had a really strict teacher at my school and she used to teach me computer subject and she was very strict about her rules, like she didn't like if children came late to their class.

The word 'teachers' should be singular 'teacher' to match 'she'. Also, 'doesn't like' should be in past tense 'didn't like' to match the past context. 'Are coming' should be 'came' for past tense consistency.

× Uh, no, I would not like to work as a teacher in the Rolfi school because rules are very important for students nowadays.

✓ Uh, no, I would not like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school because rules are very important for students nowadays.

The phrase 'the Rolfi school' is incorrect; it should be 'a rule-free school' as per the original question context. Also, 'Rolfi' seems to be a typo for 'rule-free'.

× It the class would be very under controlled.

✓ The class would be very uncontrolled.

The sentence structure is incorrect. 'It the class' is wrong; it should be 'The class'. Also, 'under controlled' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'uncontrolled'.

× If the rules are not there, they will not listen to their teacher.

✓ If the rules are not there, they will not listen to their teachers.

Since 'they' refers to multiple students, 'teacher' should be plural 'teachers' to maintain agreement.