Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答不够清晰，表达不自然且有语法错误。建议简洁明了地回答问题，避免使用口头语“umm”，并正确表达规则内容。

Ví dụ: Yes, at my high school, students must wear uniforms, be punctual, and behave politely.

Gợi ý: 语法错误较多，表达不够准确。建议使用复数形式“rules”，并改进句子结构，使表达更自然流畅。

Ví dụ: No, I don't think more rules would help because they might make students afraid of making mistakes.

Gợi ý: 语法和时态错误较多，表达不够连贯。建议使用正确的时态和词汇，清晰描述老师的特点和行为。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a dedicated professor at university who was passionate about teaching and always shared detailed knowledge about design.

Gợi ý: 表达不清晰，词汇使用错误（如“rooms”应为“rules”），句子结构混乱。建议简化句子，正确使用词汇，并清楚表达观点。

Ví dụ: I prefer fewer rules because some rules help keep order, but too many rules can be stressful and make me afraid of breaking them.

Gợi ý: 语法错误较多，表达不够自然。建议使用正确的时态和句型，避免重复和冗余。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a strict Chinese teacher in high school who did not allow any noise in class and would shout if we disturbed her, which made us feel embarrassed and stressed.

Gợi ý: 语法和表达错误较多，句子不连贯。建议使用正确的时态和单复数形式，表达更自然。

Ví dụ: I have never thought about that, but I would prefer to work in a school with regular rules because rules help keep students in order and make teaching easier.

× Well surely especially in high school we have the rules such as wearing uniform, umm they punctured and also be polite.

✓ Well, surely especially in high school we have rules such as wearing uniforms, punctuality, and also being polite.

uniform 应该用复数形式 uniforms，因为指的是多件校服；punctured 是错误单词，正确应为 punctuality（守时）；be polite 应改为 being polite，保持形式一致。

× Well, I definitely don't think so, mainly because more rule might make people afraid for making mistake.

✓ Well, I definitely don't think so, mainly because more rules might make people afraid of making mistakes.

rule 应用复数 rules，因为指多条规则；afraid 后面应接介词 of 而非 for；mistake 应用复数 mistakes，表示多次错误。

× Definitely. I remember when I in the university, I have met one professor who is fascinating about teaching.

✓ Definitely. I remember when I was in the university, I met one professor who was fascinated by teaching.

过去时间点应使用过去时态，I in the university 应改为 I was in the university；have met 改为 met；is fascinating about teaching 应改为 was fascinated by teaching，表达教授对教学的热情。

× I'm always passionate about telling us all the detailed knowledge in design.

✓ He was always passionate about teaching us all the detailed knowledge in design.

passionate about 后面应接动名词或名词，telling us 不合适，应改为 teaching us；另外，句子主语应为教授 he，而非学生 I。

× I prefer half few rooms, mainly because umm, we still need some room to make people in line but not too many which will make me feel stressful and afraid I might break the rule.

✓ I prefer fewer rules, mainly because, umm, we still need some rules to keep people in line but not too many which will make me feel stressed and afraid I might break the rules.

rooms 应为 rules，语义错误；half few 不合适，应改为 fewer；room 应为 rules；stressful 是形容词，描述事物，描述人的感受应为 stressed；rule 应用复数 rules。

× She doesn't want us make any kind of noise in the class.

✓ She doesn't want us to make any kind of noise in the class.

want 后面接动词时应加不定式 to make，而非直接动词原形。

× If we did, she was shouting at us make us feel shamed and stressful.

✓ If we did, she shouted at us and made us feel ashamed and stressed.

过去时态应统一，was shouting 改为 shouted；make us feel shamed 应改为 made us feel ashamed；stressful 是形容词，描述事物，描述人的感受应为 stressed。

× Well, I never think of that.

✓ Well, I have never thought of that.

never think of 应用现在完成时 have never thought，表示从过去到现在的经历。

× I believe I would rather work in the school which have the regular rules.

✓ I believe I would rather work in a school which has regular rules.

school 前应加不定冠词 a；which 指代单数 school，谓语动词应为 has；the regular rules 改为 regular rules 更自然。

× Mainly because rule keep people in line which make teacher easily to teaching.

✓ Mainly because rules keep people in line which makes teaching easier for teachers.

rule 应为复数 rules；make teacher easily to teaching 结构错误，改为 makes teaching easier for teachers，表达更准确。