Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时应注意语法准确性，例如“be punctual”应改为“being punctual”，并且可以使用连接词使句子更流畅。此外，回答可以更具体，举例说明某些规则的具体内容。

Ví dụ: Yes, at my university, there are several important rules, such as wearing uniforms, being punctual for classes, and behaving politely towards teachers and classmates.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在词汇使用错误，如“straight”应为“stressed”，并且句子结构不够完整。建议使用连接词扩展理由，使表达更自然。

Ví dụ: I don't think having more rules would help because it might make students feel stressed and afraid of making mistakes.

Gợi ý: 句子结构不够自然，时态使用不当（如“dedicated”应为“dedicates”），并且表达可以更简洁。建议使用连接词并注意时态一致。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have met a professor at university who works very hard and dedicates all his free time to answering students' questions and solving their problems.

Gợi ý: 回答中有拼写错误（如“Rd.”应为“rules”，“con comfortable”应为“uncomfortable”），句子结构混乱，表达不清晰。建议简化句子，使用连接词，注意拼写和语法。

Ví dụ: Well, I prefer fewer rules at school because too many rules can make students feel uncomfortable. Fewer rules help keep students in line while giving them freedom to explore themselves.

Gợi ý: 回答中时态不一致（“I have”应为“I had”），语法错误（“don't like student chatting”应为“didn't like students chatting”），建议注意时态和主谓一致，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I remember in high school, I had a Chinese teacher who was very strict and didn't like students chatting during class. Even if we made a little noise, she would immediately shout at us.

Gợi ý: 回答中有拼写错误（“room for school”应为“rule-free school”），语法错误（“help teacher better educating student”应为“help teachers educate students better”），建议注意拼写和语法，使用连接词使表达更自然。

Ví dụ: Definitely not. Working in a rule-free school would be horrible because nothing would keep students in line. Schools must have regulations to help teachers educate students better.

× Yes, especially in university we have the regulations such as wearing uniforms, be punctual and behave politely.

✓ Yes, especially in university we have regulations such as wearing uniforms, being punctual and behaving politely.

在列举多个动词时，应该保持形式一致。这里的动词短语应全部使用动名词形式（-ing），以保持平行结构。

× I don't think more rules will help. It might make people feel straight and afraid of making mistake.

✓ I don't think more rules will help. It might make people feel stressed and afraid of making mistakes.

单词'straight'用错，应为'stressed'表示压力大；'making mistake'缺少复数，应为'making mistakes'。

× Yet I have met one professor in university who works so hard at the school that he dedicated all his free time in the class answering the students question and problems.

✓ I have met one professor at university who works so hard at the school that he dedicates all his free time in the class answering the students' questions and problems.

时态不一致，前半句用现在完成时，后半句应使用一般现在时；'students question'缺少所有格，应为'students' questions'。

× I have met one professor in university who works so hard at the school that he dedicated all his free time in the class answering the students question and problems.

✓ I have met one professor at university who works so hard at the school that he dedicates all his free time in the class answering the students' questions and problems.

'students question'应为复数所有格'students' questions'，表示多个学生的问题。

× Well, I believe that I prefer how fewer Rd. at school mentally because too many rules might make people feel strange and con comfortable, and fewer rule is OK to keep students in line then also give them freedom to explore themselves.

✓ Well, I believe that I prefer fewer rules at school mentally because too many rules might make people feel strange and uncomfortable, and fewer rules are OK to keep students in line and also give them freedom to explore themselves.

'fewer Rd.'应为'fewer rules'，'fewer rule'应为复数'fewer rules'，主谓一致需注意。

× Well, I believe that I prefer how fewer Rd. at school mentally because too many rules might make people feel strange and con comfortable, and fewer rule is OK to keep students in line then also give them freedom to explore themselves.

✓ Well, I believe that I prefer fewer rules at school mentally because too many rules might make people feel strange and uncomfortable, and fewer rules are OK to keep students in line and also give them freedom to explore themselves.

'con comfortable'是拼写错误，应为'uncomfortable'，形容词用来描述感受。

× Yeah I did. I remember back in high school I have a one Chinese teacher who is really strict and don't like student chatting during the class.

✓ Yeah, I did. I remember back in high school I had a Chinese teacher who was really strict and didn't like students chatting during the class.

'I have a one Chinese teacher'时态错误且冠词多余，应为过去时'had a Chinese teacher'；'don't like student'主谓不一致且单复数错误，应为'didn't like students'。

× Yeah I did. I remember back in high school I have a one Chinese teacher who is really strict and don't like student chatting during the class.

✓ Yeah, I did. I remember back in high school I had a Chinese teacher who was really strict and didn't like students chatting during the class.

描述过去的事情应使用过去时态，'have'和'don't'应改为'had'和'didn't'。

× Even though we just make a little small noise, she will immediately shout at us.

✓ Even though we just make a little noise, she will immediately shout at us.

'a little small noise'中'noise'是不可数名词，不能用'small'修饰，且'little'已表达少量，'small'多余。

× Definitely not working in the room for school might be horrible because nothing can keep student in line.

✓ Definitely not working in a rule-free school might be horrible because nothing can keep students in line.

'room for school'应为'rule-free school'，且表达否定时应用完整句式；'student'应为复数'students'。

× Definitely not working in the room for school might be horrible because nothing can keep student in line.

✓ Definitely not working in a rule-free school might be horrible because nothing can keep students in line.

'student'应为复数形式'students'，表示多个学生。

× he dedicated all his free time in the class answering the students question and problems.

✓ he dedicated all his free time to the class answering the students' questions and problems.

动词'dedicate'后应接介词'to'，表示将时间奉献给某事。