Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo
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Part 1
Giám khảo
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Thí sinh
Yes, our students have to come back to our dormitories before 11:00 in the evening. If we pass the time over three times, the school will punish us.
Giám khảo
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Thí sinh
No, I don't think students need more rules because I think it is like a striction to our creativity.
Giám khảo
Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?
Thí sinh
Yes, I remember that the English teacher in my junior high school, she was so kind and she not only teach us knowledge about English but also care about our development of persona.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?
Thí sinh
Well, I prefer to a school which have less rules to their students. For example, if there are too much, too many rules to confine our students life, I think we won't feel satisfied.
Giám khảo
Have you ever had a really strict teacher?
Thí sinh
Yes, when I was in my in the primary school, I remember that my Chinese teacher is really was was really strict. To punish punished us if we can not.
Giám khảo
Would you like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school?
Thí sinh
Actually not. Some students are so noisy. So I think the school need to make proper rules to regulate the student and.
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Part 1
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误，如“pass the time over three times”应为“exceed the curfew more than three times”。建议使用更自然的表达，并补充具体细节，使回答更完整。
Ví dụ: Yes, students must return to their dormitories before 11:00 PM. If they break this rule more than three times, the school imposes penalties such as detention or warnings.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中“striction”应为“restriction”，且表达不够自然。建议用更准确的词汇表达观点，并举例说明为什么规则会限制创造力。
Ví dụ: No, I don't think more rules are necessary because they can restrict students' creativity and freedom to explore new ideas.
Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 语法错误较多，如“teach”应为“taught”，“persona”应为“personality”。建议注意时态和词汇准确性，并丰富细节。
Ví dụ: Yes, my junior high English teacher was very kind. She not only taught us English but also cared about our personal development and encouraged us to build confidence.
Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 语法和表达不够准确，如“prefer to a school which have less rules”应为“prefer a school that has fewer rules”。建议简洁明了表达观点，并用连贯的句子。
Ví dụ: I prefer a school that has fewer rules because too many restrictions can make students feel unhappy and limit their freedom.
Have you ever had a really strict teacher?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答语法混乱，句子不完整。建议练习完整句子表达，注意时态和句子结构。
Ví dụ: Yes, my Chinese teacher in primary school was very strict. She would punish us if we did not complete our homework on time.
Would you like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整，句子未结束。建议完整表达观点，并使用连接词使句子连贯。
Ví dụ: Actually, I would not like to work in a rule-free school because some students can be very noisy, so proper rules are necessary to maintain order.
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