Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cevabınız doğal ancak bazı dilbilgisi hataları ve tekrarlar var. Cümlenizi daha akıcı ve doğru yapmak için, gereksiz tekrarları azaltmalı ve dilbilgisi kurallarına dikkat etmelisiniz. Ayrıca, daha spesifik örnekler vererek cevabınızı zenginleştirebilirsiniz.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For instance, students must wear uniforms and are not allowed to have long nails or hair. These rules are quite strict to maintain discipline and a neat appearance.

Gợi ý: Cevabınızda dilbilgisi hataları ve anlam belirsizlikleri mevcut. Daha net ve doğru cümleler kurmaya çalışmalısınız. Ayrıca, düşüncelerinizi desteklemek için daha açık ve mantıklı nedenler sunmalısınız.

Ví dụ: No, I don't think more rules would help. My school already has many rules, some of which seem unnecessary because students already understand what is appropriate, like not wearing crop tops. Too many rules might make students feel restricted.

Gợi ý: Cümlenizde dilbilgisi ve kelime kullanımı hataları var. Ayrıca, cevabınız çok kısa ve belirsiz. Daha doğru zaman kullanımı ve daha açık ifadelerle cevabınızı geliştirmelisiniz.

Ví dụ: I have never had a really dedicated teacher myself, but I have heard that some teachers are very committed and passionate about their work.

Gợi ý: Cevabınızda bazı dilbilgisi hataları ve tekrarlar var. Daha akıcı ve doğru cümleler kurmaya çalışmalısınız. Ayrıca, nedenlerinizi daha açık ve mantıklı şekilde ifade edin.

Ví dụ: I prefer fewer rules at school because many of the current rules seem unnecessary. At our age, we understand what is appropriate and can manage ourselves responsibly.

Gợi ý: Cevabınızda dilbilgisi ve kelime kullanımı hataları var. Ayrıca, cümleleriniz biraz karışık. Daha net ve doğru ifadeler kullanarak cevabınızı geliştirebilirsiniz.

Ví dụ: No, I haven't had a very strict teacher, but I know some teachers at my school are very strict. For example, students are not allowed to wear hoodies unless they have the school logo, which I find a bit strange.

Gợi ý: Cevabınızda anlam belirsizliği ve dilbilgisi hataları var. Daha net ve mantıklı cümleler kurmalısınız. Ayrıca, nedenlerinizi daha açık ifade ederek cevabınızı güçlendirebilirsiniz.

Ví dụ: No, I wouldn't like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school because my dream job is to be an economist. Teaching has never interested me, so the school's rules don't affect my decision.

× we can never have a long nails or long hair

✓ we can never have long nails or long hair

The phrase 'a long nails' incorrectly mixes singular article 'a' with plural noun 'nails'. The article 'a' should be removed to correctly refer to plural 'nails'.

× some of them is unnecessary

✓ some of them are unnecessary

The subject 'some of them' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number.

× I have never get a teacher like that

✓ I have never got a teacher like that

The verb 'get' should be in past participle form 'got' after 'have never' to form the present perfect tense correctly.

× I never seen that one

✓ I have never seen that one

The verb 'seen' requires an auxiliary verb 'have' to form the present perfect tense; 'never seen' alone is incorrect.

× I prefer to have a fewer rules at the school

✓ I prefer to have fewer rules at the school

The quantifier 'fewer' is used with countable plural nouns without the article 'a'. 'A fewer rules' is incorrect.

× the things that we are, the things that we have in our school is the unnecessary rules

✓ the things that we are, the things that we have in our school are unnecessary rules

The subject is plural ('things'), so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, 'the unnecessary rules' should be 'unnecessary rules' without 'the' for generalization.