Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cevabınızda dilbilgisi ve kelime kullanımı açısından bazı hatalar var ve cümleleriniz tam olarak doğal değil. Ayrıca, cümleniz biraz karışık ve anlamı net değil. Daha açık ve doğal ifadeler kullanmalısınız. Örneğin, 'There were quite a few rules, such as wearing uniforms and being punctual.' gibi daha spesifik ve net ifadeler tercih edin.

Ví dụ: At my university, there are not many strict rules. However, when I was in primary and elementary school, students had to follow several rules, such as wearing uniforms and being punctual.

Gợi ý: Cevabınızda cümle yapısı ve anlam açısından eksiklikler var. Ayrıca, bazı ifadeleriniz anlaşılması zor ve eksik kalmış. Daha açık ve mantıklı cümleler kurmalısınız. Bağlaçlar kullanarak düşüncelerinizi daha iyi bağlayabilirsiniz.

Ví dụ: It depends on the school environment. For example, if students already have self-confidence, adding more rules might harm their confidence and mental health. However, for students who lack confidence or respect, more rules could help improve their behavior.

Gợi ý: Cevabınızda tekrar eden kelimeler ve gereksiz ifadeler var. Ayrıca, cümleleriniz biraz dağınık ve doğal değil. Daha akıcı ve net cümleler kurmaya çalışın. Örneğin, 'He was a passionate and supportive teacher who helped me feel confident.' gibi ifadeler kullanabilirsiniz.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a dedicated teacher in primary school who taught me for several years. He was passionate and supportive, which made me feel more comfortable and confident as a child.

Gợi ý: Cümle yapınızda dilbilgisi hataları ve anlam bozuklukları mevcut. Ayrıca, ifadeleriniz biraz karmaşık ve doğal değil. Daha basit ve doğru cümleler kurmalısınız. Bağlaçlar kullanarak düşüncelerinizi daha iyi organize edin.

Ví dụ: I prefer having more rules at school because many students lack self-confidence and respect for their peers. If the school enforces rules about morals and behavior, it can help students become more disciplined and respectful.

Gợi ý: Cevabınızda bazı dilbilgisi hataları ve anlamsal karışıklıklar var. Ayrıca, cümleleriniz biraz dağınık ve doğal değil. Daha açık ve düzgün cümleler kurmaya çalışın. Örneğin, 'He was not strict but very supportive and encouraged discipline.' gibi ifadeler kullanabilirsiniz.

Ví dụ: No, I have never had a really strict teacher. However, in primary school, I had a dedicated teacher who was very supportive and disciplined. He was not strict but always encouraged us to be disciplined and feel free.

Gợi ý: Cevabınızda dilbilgisi ve anlam açısından birçok hata var. Cümleleriniz karışık ve doğal değil. Daha açık, doğru ve mantıklı cümleler kurmalısınız. Ayrıca, düşüncelerinizi daha iyi bağlamak için bağlaçlar kullanmalısınız.

Ví dụ: To be honest, I would not like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school. Although rules may not affect my job choice, I am not passionate about teaching children. I believe having more rules at school helps maintain discipline.

× there were quite few rules students had to follow

✓ there were quite a few rules students had to follow

The phrase 'quite few' is incorrect; it should be 'quite a few' to indicate a considerable number. 'Few' alone implies scarcity, but 'quite a few' means many.

× Suggest varying a uniform or being punctual with these rules via.

✓ For example, students were required to wear uniforms and be punctual according to these rules.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. It lacks a subject and proper verb structure, making it difficult to understand. The correction provides a clear and complete sentence.

× Depends on students environment at school.

✓ It depends on the students' environment at school.

The original sentence lacks a subject and verb, making it a fragment. Adding 'It' as the subject and 'depends' as the verb completes the sentence. Also, 'students environment' needs a possessive apostrophe.

× If umm the students who have decreased the self-confidence or respectful respectfulness behaviors.

✓ If the students have decreased self-confidence or lack respectful behavior.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Decreased the self-confidence' is incorrect; it should be 'have decreased self-confidence' or 'lack self-confidence.' 'Respectful respectfulness behaviors' is redundant and awkward; 'lack respectful behavior' is clearer.

× Having a passionate teacher helped me to feel more comfortable and self confident as a child.

✓ Having a passionate teacher helped me to feel more comfortable and self-confident as a child.

'Self confident' should be hyphenated as 'self-confident' when used as an adjective.

× He was very passionate and a supportive person that you need to meet him umm Once Upon a time in your life.

✓ He was a very passionate and supportive person whom you need to meet once in your life.

The original sentence has awkward phrasing and incorrect pronoun use. 'That you need to meet him' is incorrect; 'whom you need to meet' is correct. 'Once Upon a time' should be 'once in your life' for proper idiomatic expression.

× I prefer having more rules at school because there are lots of students who are not already have being self-confidence and respectful to their peers.

✓ I prefer having more rules at school because there are many students who do not already have self-confidence and are not respectful to their peers.

The phrase 'not already have being self-confidence' is incorrect. It should be 'do not already have self-confidence.' Also, 'respectful to their peers' needs the verb 'are not' to be grammatically correct.

× If the student administration enforce the morals that students must follow during the days, it can provide being disciplined and respectful behavior.

✓ If the student administration enforces the morals that students must follow during the day, it can promote disciplined and respectful behavior.

'Student administration' should be preceded by 'the' and 'enforce' should be 'enforces' to agree with singular subject. 'During the days' is incorrect; 'during the day' is the correct phrase. 'Provide being disciplined' is awkward; 'promote disciplined' is better.

× when I was in the primary school, I had dedicated teacher.

✓ When I was in primary school, I had a dedicated teacher.

'Primary school' does not need 'the' before it. Also, 'dedicated teacher' needs an article 'a' before it.

× He was very supportive and disciplined person that I have never met before.

✓ He was a very supportive and disciplined person whom I had never met before.

Missing article 'a' before 'very supportive.' Also, 'that I have never met before' should be 'whom I had never met before' for correct relative pronoun and tense.

× He was not strict person, but he was always supported to us, uh, to being disciplined and to feel free.

✓ He was not a strict person, but he always supported us to be disciplined and to feel free.

Missing article 'a' before 'strict person.' 'Supported to us' is incorrect; it should be 'supported us.' 'To being disciplined' should be 'to be disciplined.'

× I wouldn't like to work as a teacher in Rule free school.

✓ I wouldn't like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school.

'Rule free school' needs to be hyphenated as 'rule-free school' and requires the article 'a' before it.

× It doesn't make a big difference as having rule or not to make a decision about my job because I'm not a passionate about teaching something to children.

✓ It doesn't make a big difference whether there are rules or not in making a decision about my job because I'm not passionate about teaching children.

The phrase 'as having rule or not' is incorrect; 'whether there are rules or not' is correct. 'I'm not a passionate' is incorrect; 'I'm not passionate' is correct. 'Teaching something to children' is awkward; 'teaching children' is better.

× Probably having more rules at the school as a teacher helped us getting a discipline.

✓ Probably having more rules at school as a teacher helps us get discipline.

'At the school' should be 'at school' unless referring to a specific school. 'Helped us getting' is incorrect; it should be 'helps us get.' 'A discipline' is incorrect; 'discipline' is uncountable here.