Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Ответ должен быть более структурированным и естественным. Следует избегать повторений и использовать связующие слова для логичности. Также важно завершить мысль и привести конкретные примеры правил.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students must wear the same uniform every day. Additionally, wearing earrings or necklaces is not allowed. These rules help maintain discipline and a sense of unity among students.

Gợi ý: Ответ должен быть более связным и содержать чёткие причины с использованием связующих слов. Следует избегать грамматических ошибок и излишней длины.

Ví dụ: I don't think students would benefit from having more rules because too many rules can make them feel restricted. Moreover, this pressure might affect their motivation and happiness at school.

Gợi ý: Ответ неполный и содержит много ошибок. Нужно чётко ответить на вопрос, использовать правильную грамматику и привести конкретные примеры, почему учитель был преданным.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have had a very dedicated teacher. She always prepared interesting lessons and encouraged us to learn more. Her passion for teaching inspired me a lot.

Gợi ý: Ответ содержит ошибки и неясности. Следует чётко выразить мнение, использовать связующие слова и объяснить причины предпочтения меньшего количества правил.

Ví dụ: I prefer fewer rules at school because having too many can make students feel restricted. With fewer rules, students can enjoy more freedom and learn in a comfortable environment.

Gợi ý: Ответ должен быть более связным и грамматически правильным. Следует добавить детали о том, как строгость учителя влияла на обучение.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a very strict math teacher. She insisted that we follow all her rules carefully, which helped us improve our discipline and focus in class.

Gợi ý: Ответ можно сделать более естественным и разнообразным, избегая повторений. Следует объяснить причины предпочтения работы без правил.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to work in a school without strict rules because it would allow more creativity and freedom in teaching. I believe this environment could be more engaging for both teachers and students.

× Honestly in our school had many rules and they are different.

✓ Honestly, our school has many rules and they are different.

The original sentence lacks the auxiliary verb 'has' to indicate possession. 'Our school had many rules' is past tense, but the context suggests present tense, so 'has' is appropriate. Also, 'in our school had' is incorrect word order.

× For example for first rule is to wear same forms in school and the second is uh not to wear earrings in the necklace.

✓ For example, the first rule is to wear the same uniforms at school and the second is not to wear earrings or necklaces.

The phrase 'wear same forms in school' is incorrect; it should be 'wear the same uniforms at school'. Also, 'in the necklace' is incorrect; it should be 'or necklaces'. Prepositions 'in' and 'for' are misused here.

× The third rule is not to.

✓ The third rule is not specified.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb or object after 'not to'. It should be completed or rephrased for clarity.

× Honestly, I don't think so because if they had a lot of rules that they must follow, I think they don't feel freedom and instead that they can feel pressure in the so I think it would be difficult for them.

✓ Honestly, I don't think so because if they have a lot of rules that they must follow, I think they don't feel free and instead they can feel pressure, so I think it would be difficult for them.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. 'If they had' should be 'if they have' to match the conditional present. 'Feel freedom' is incorrect; it should be 'feel free'. The phrase 'pressure in the' is incomplete and should be corrected.

× Is this kind of teacher had in my life and it was Casa pleasure teacher and the this teacher was moral mortal because she already tried to give us quality knowledge and she teaches us not to.

✓ I have had this kind of teacher in my life; she was a pleasant teacher and a moral person because she always tried to give us quality knowledge and taught us well.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and unclear phrases like 'Casa pleasure teacher' and 'moral mortal'. It also mixes tenses and lacks clarity. The correction improves clarity and grammar.

× Honestly, I prefer fewer girls at school because I find that it's difficult to follow all all rules in the age in the you, the students can't feel free during following.

✓ Honestly, I prefer fewer rules at school because I find that it's difficult to follow all the rules, and students can't feel free while following them.

The original sentence mistakenly says 'fewer girls' instead of 'fewer rules'. Also, the sentence is confusing and has redundant words like 'all all'. The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects plural usage.

× It is this kind of teacher I had in my life and it was math teacher and there this teacher was really strict and she tried to, she forced us to follow from her rules.

✓ I have had this kind of teacher in my life; she was a math teacher and was really strict. She forced us to follow her rules.

The original sentence has awkward phrasing and incorrect preposition 'follow from her rules'. The correction improves sentence structure and removes unnecessary words.

× Of course, I would like this kind of offer because I think it would be great to work without rules at school and it's more interesting than traditional rules.

✓ Of course, I would like this kind of offer because I think it would be great to work without rules at school, and it would be more interesting than traditional rules.

The sentence is mostly correct but adding 'would be' before 'more interesting' improves parallelism and clarity in modal verb usage.