Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答较长且有些重复，表达不够简洁自然。建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，同时注意语法和用词准确。

Ví dụ: One important rule at my school is that students are not allowed to use their phones on campus at any time.

Gợi ý: 回答表达了观点，但句子结构稍显复杂且有语法错误。建议使用更简洁的句子，并用连接词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: I believe that having fewer rules helps students be more creative because freedom and flexibility are important in learning.

Gợi ý: 回答内容具体，但句子较长且有语法错误。建议分句表达，注意时态和主谓一致，使表达更自然。

Ví dụ: Yes, my current class teacher is very dedicated. He not only teaches the subject well but also shares valuable insights about life and society.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，句子过长。建议简化句子，注意单复数和时态，使用恰当词汇。

Ví dụ: I prefer fewer rules at school because I am an active learner who enjoys participating in many activities. Too many rules would limit my learning style.

Gợi ý: 回答中出现了词汇错误（如'refrigerating'），表达不清晰。建议使用准确词汇，简洁表达，避免模糊和错误。

Ví dụ: Yes, I once had a very strict teacher during exams. She would check our pockets and not allow us to sit comfortably.

Gợi ý: 回答表达清晰，但句子较长且有些重复。建议简化句子结构，使用连接词使表达更流畅自然。

Ví dụ: I would not like to teach in a school with almost no rules because it would be hard to manage students and keep the class organized.

× The top restriction that came into my mind immediately would be that still the students are not allowed to use phone within the school and the regulation is applied all time in the school campus and just students are not allowed to take out their phone and use them.

✓ The top restriction that came into my mind immediately would be that students are still not allowed to use phones within the school, and the regulation is applied all the time on the school campus; students are simply not allowed to take out their phones and use them.

此句中“phone”应使用复数形式“phones”，因为指的是学生使用的手机的泛指，且后文用复数代词“them”指代手机，需保持一致。

× I would definitely hold an opposite idea as I think freedom and flexibility is one of the most important values in academic study and I think the absence of excessive rules would benefit student by enhancing creativity.

✓ I would definitely hold an opposite idea as I think freedom and flexibility are two of the most important values in academic study, and I think the absence of excessive rules would benefit students by enhancing creativity.

“freedom and flexibility”是复数主语，谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”。“student”应为复数“students”，因为指的是一般学生群体。

× he doesn't focus solely on the subject he teach, but he also would share his core insight and ideas about life and society.

✓ he doesn't focus solely on the subject he teaches, but he also shares his core insight and ideas about life and society.

主语“he”为第三人称单数，谓语动词“teach”应加-s变为“teaches”。“would share”改为一般现在时“shares”，与前半句时态保持一致。

× Having fewer restriction in the campus will definitely hit my point of interest as I regard myself as a dynamic learner and I am very enthusiastic in engaging in various activities and actions and I thinks having excessive rules would limit my style of learning.

✓ Having fewer restrictions on the campus will definitely hit my point of interest as I regard myself as a dynamic learner and I am very enthusiastic about engaging in various activities and actions, and I think having excessive rules would limit my style of learning.

“restriction”应为复数“restrictions”，因为指多个限制。介词“in the campus”应改为“on the campus”。“I thinks”中“thinks”应为第一人称单数形式“think”。

× I am very enthusiastic in engaging in various activities and actions

✓ I am very enthusiastic about engaging in various activities and actions

“enthusiastic”后应接介词“about”，表示对某事物充满热情，而非“in”。

× I have had experience with a very rigorous tutor during an exam and she was known for her aggressive style of refrigerating and she would check our pockets and not allow us to sit in a more comfortable position.

✓ I had experience with a very rigorous tutor during an exam, and she was known for her aggressive style of proctoring; she would check our pockets and not allow us to sit in a more comfortable position.

“have had”改为一般过去时“had”，因为描述过去的具体经历。单词“refrigerating”错误，应为“proctoring”（监考）。

× she would check our pockets and not allow us to sit in a more comfortable position.

✓ she would check our pockets and not allow us to sit in more comfortable positions.

“a more comfortable position”应改为复数“more comfortable positions”，因为指多个人的坐姿。

× Being a tutor within a campus with minimal restrictions would not appeal to me as I think having very few rules would fail to limit the students behaviour and that could be very hard to control the organization within the class.

✓ Being a tutor within a campus with minimal restrictions would not appeal to me, as I think having very few rules would fail to limit the students' behaviour, and that could make it very hard to control the organization within the class.

“could be very hard to control”表达不够准确，改为“could make it very hard to control”更符合英语习惯。学生行为“students behaviour”应加所有格“students' behaviour”。