Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答不够完整且表达不自然。建议用完整句子回答问题，并且详细说明学校的规则。

Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students are not allowed to use their phones during class, and attendance is mandatory every day.

Gợi ý: 表达不清晰，语法错误较多。建议用更准确的句子表达观点，并解释原因。

Ví dụ: I believe having more rules can help students improve because rules guide our behavior and keep us focused on learning.

Gợi ý: 句子结构不完整，时态和语法错误。建议用完整句子描述老师的特点和经历。

Ví dụ: Yes, when I was in junior high school, I had a teacher who was very patient and always willing to help students.

Gợi ý: 表达不够清晰，缺少具体理由。建议明确表达偏好并说明原因。

Ví dụ: I prefer fewer rules at school because it allows me to feel more freedom and enjoy my studies with passion.

Gợi ý: 回答冗长且语法错误多，表达不自然。建议简洁描述老师的严格并说明感受。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a strict coach in high school who was very demanding, but his discipline helped me improve my skills.

Gợi ý: 表达不清楚且语法错误。建议用完整句子表达不愿意的原因。

Ví dụ: No, I would not like to work in a rule-free school because I believe rules are important for maintaining order and responsibility.

× Don't take the phone. Go to school. It's the first rule.

✓ Don't take phones. Go to school. It's the first rule.

这里的“phone”应使用复数形式“phones”，因为规则通常适用于所有手机，而不是单一的手机。

× I think the rule can make person be better than before because the rule is control everybody's think.

✓ I think the rule can make a person better than before because the rule controls everybody's thinking.

“person”前应加不定冠词“a”，表示泛指一个人；“is control”应改为“controls”，主谓一致；“think”应改为动名词“thinking”，表示思考的过程。

× Yeah, before I'm a junior high school kids and I saw a teacher, he's very patient on his job.

✓ Yeah, when I was a junior high school kid, I saw a teacher; he was very patient in his job.

“I'm”应改为过去时“I was”，表示过去的状态；“kids”应为单数“kid”，与主语一致；“he's”应改为过去时“he was”；“on his job”应改为“in his job”，表示在工作中。

× I don't want too many rules because I think I can get passion on my life.

✓ I don't want too many rules because I think I can have passion in my life.

“get passion”表达不自然，应改为“have passion”；“on my life”应改为“in my life”，表示在生活中。

× While I was a high school kid, I play on the basketball team and my coach is very angry.

✓ While I was a high school kid, I played on the basketball team and my coach was very angry.

描述过去的动作和状态，动词应使用过去时，“play”改为“played”，“is”改为“was”。

× He's a 55 years old people and he's very angry for anything and I think he's very bad.

✓ He's a 55-year-old person and he's very angry about everything, and I think he's very bad.

“people”是复数，指多人，单指一人应使用“person”；“55 years old”作为形容词时应写作“55-year-old”；“angry for anything”应改为“angry about everything”，表达更准确。

× No, I don't want to be because I have to get responsibility over there and but I don't want.

✓ No, I don't want to be because I have to take responsibility there, and I don't want to.

“get responsibility”表达不自然，应改为“take responsibility”；“over there”多余，简化为“there”；“and but”重复，应去掉“but”。