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Part 1

Giám khảo

Are there any rules for students at your school?

Thí sinh

Class of course Izzy and an Eunice for us to follow in my school because they all are good way for us students to do well and not only our day love but also our study so as if they are very necessary.

Giám khảo

Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?

Thí sinh

It depends on how much the rules exactly. I think is not very sure. I'm not very sure because more rulers may make children feel stressful, but proper rulers will make us feel confident.

Giám khảo

Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?

Thí sinh

Ah yes, of course. And actually I have. I have meant a lot of teachers. They all are very delicate to their careers, not only about learning but also to carry their students.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?

Thí sinh

I think fewer rules may cultivate children's curiosity and confidence. It will provide a more harmonious atmosphere for students to develop. So I prefer a few rules.

Giám khảo

Have you ever had a really strict teacher?

Thí sinh

Yes, one of my one of my Chinese teacher is very strict to us. When I was at a prime primary school they asked us to do very much school works and can't bear with make mistake.

Giám khảo

Would you like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school?

Thí sinh

No, I don't want. I think Dora is important not just for students but also it's a good method for teachers to improve themselves. So I think ruler is very important and necessary.

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.5Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Are there any rules for students at your school?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题,建议简化句子结构,使用正确的词汇和语法,避免冗长和重复。可以先直接回答问题,再用一两句具体说明规则的重要性。

Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules at my school. They help students behave well and focus on their studies, which is very important for our success.

Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 回答表达不够流畅,语法和词汇使用不准确。建议明确表达观点,使用连接词使句子连贯,并用具体理由支持观点。

Ví dụ: I think it depends on the number of rules. Too many rules can make students feel stressed, but appropriate rules can help us feel confident and focused.

Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 回答中词汇使用错误(如'delicate'应为'dedicated'),句子结构混乱。建议使用正确词汇,简洁表达,并具体说明老师的敬业表现。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have had many dedicated teachers. They care deeply about teaching and always support their students both academically and personally.

Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答较为清晰,但句子稍显简单。建议增加连接词使表达更流畅,并用具体例子或理由丰富内容。

Ví dụ: I prefer fewer rules because they can encourage children's curiosity and confidence. This creates a more harmonious environment where students can develop better.

Have you ever had a really strict teacher?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,表达不清晰。建议简化句子,使用正确时态和词汇,明确描述老师严格的具体表现。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a strict Chinese teacher in primary school. She gave us a lot of homework and did not tolerate mistakes.

Would you like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 回答中词汇错误严重(如'Dora'应为'rules'),句子结构混乱。建议先明确表达观点,再用具体理由支持,注意词汇准确性。

Ví dụ: No, I would not like to work in a school without rules. Rules are important because they help students learn discipline and help teachers manage the class effectively.

Ngữ pháp

Singular and plural issue

× Class of course Izzy and an Eunice for us to follow in my school because they all are good way for us students to do well and not only our day love but also our study so as if they are very necessary.

Of course, there are rules for us to follow in my school because they are all good ways for us students to do well, not only in our daily life but also in our study, so they are very necessary.

原句中“Class of course Izzy and an Eunice”不通顺,且“good way”应为复数形式“good ways”,因为指多个规则。需要将句子结构调整为正确表达规则的存在和作用。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Class of course Izzy and an Eunice for us to follow in my school because they all are good way for us students to do well and not only our day love but also our study so as if they are very necessary.

Of course, there are rules for us to follow in my school because they are all good ways for us students to do well, not only in our daily life but also in our study, so they are very necessary.

原句中“our day love”应为“our daily life”,且“us students”用法不当,应明确表达“for us students”。需要正确使用代词和词组表达。

Incorrect use of quantifiers

× It depends on how much the rules exactly.

It depends on how many rules there are exactly.

“rules”是可数名词,应该用“how many”而不是“how much”。“how much”用于不可数名词。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I think is not very sure.

I think I am not very sure.

句子缺少主语“I”,导致句子不完整。需要补充主语以使句子完整。

Singular and plural issue

× more rulers may make children feel stressful, but proper rulers will make us feel confident.

more rules may make children feel stressed, but proper rules will make us feel confident.

“rulers”指“统治者”,应为“rules”(规则)。另外,“stressful”形容事物,“stressed”形容人感到压力,需用“stressed”。

Past tense issue

× I have meant a lot of teachers.

I have met a lot of teachers.

“meant”是“mean”的过去式,意思是“意味着”,应使用“met”表示“遇见”。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× They all are very delicate to their careers, not only about learning but also to carry their students.

They are all very dedicated to their careers, not only about teaching but also caring for their students.

“delicate”意思是“精致的”,应为“dedicated”(敬业的)。“carry their students”表达不当,应为“caring for their students”(关心学生)。

Singular and plural issue

× one of my one of my Chinese teacher is very strict to us.

One of my Chinese teachers is very strict with us.

“one of my”后应接复数名词“teachers”。“strict to us”应为“strict with us”。

Past tense issue

× When I was at a prime primary school they asked us to do very much school works and can't bear with make mistake.

When I was in primary school, they asked us to do a lot of schoolwork and couldn't bear making mistakes.

“prime primary school”表达不当,应为“primary school”。“very much school works”应为“a lot of schoolwork”(不可数名词)。“can't bear with make mistake”应为“couldn't bear making mistakes”,动词形式和时态需调整。

Modal verb usage

× No, I don't want.

No, I don't want to.

“want”后应接动词不定式“to”或宾语,单独使用“want”不完整。

Singular and plural issue

× So I think ruler is very important and necessary.

So I think rules are very important and necessary.

“ruler”是“统治者”或“尺子”,应为“rules”(规则),且主谓一致应使用复数形式“are”。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
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