Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并且使用连词使表达更连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, there are many rules at my school. For example, we have to wear uniforms, are not allowed to cut our hair freely, and skipping classes is forbidden.

Gợi ý: 回答表达混乱，语法错误较多，建议先明确观点，再用具体理由支持，使用恰当的连接词。

Ví dụ: I don't think more rules always help students. Too many rules can make students feel restricted and limit their creativity.

Gợi ý: 回答中有重复和语法错误，建议简洁表达，明确描述老师的特点和具体行为。

Ví dụ: Yes, my senior high school head teacher was very strict. He required us to arrive five minutes earlier than the official start time.

Gợi ý: 回答不完整且表达不清，建议先明确观点，再用具体理由支持，避免语法错误。

Ví dụ: I prefer a moderate number of rules at school. Too many rules can make students feel restricted, but too few rules may lead to disorder.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰，建议简化句子，明确描述老师的严格行为。

Ví dụ: Yes, my senior high school head teacher was very strict. He made us arrive 55 minutes earlier than the official start time and did not allow breaks during recess.

Gợi ý: 回答表达不够流畅，建议使用更准确的词汇和连词，使观点表达更清晰。

Ví dụ: I wouldn't like to work in a completely rule-free school because it would be chaotic. Students might misbehave and skip classes whenever they want.

× we have to we wear a uniform and permit and cutting our hair is not allowed and also skipping class is forbidden too.

✓ we have to wear a uniform, and cutting our hair is not allowed, and also skipping class is forbidden.

这里“permit and cutting our hair is not allowed”中“permit”用法错误，应去掉。动名词形式“cutting”用法正确，表示禁止的行为。建议去掉多余的“permit”，使句子更通顺。

× I remember seeing students who would be banning would have been faced more from more rules.

✓ I remember seeing students who would have been banned or faced more rules.

“would be banning”用法错误，应为被动语态“would have been banned”。“faced more from more rules”表达不清，应改为“faced more rules”。这里涉及量词和被动语态的错误。

× If there are so many rules, students may feel constrained, like schools controlled every little things.

✓ If there are so many rules, students may feel constrained, like schools control every little thing.

“schools controlled”时态错误，应为一般现在时“schools control”。“every little things”中“things”应为单数“thing”，因为“every”后接单数名词。

× I think students should have some create a creativity ability, creative ability.

✓ I think students should have some creative ability.

“create a creativity ability”表达不正确，应改为“creative ability”，形容词修饰名词。重复使用“creative ability”不必要。

× it's it's my Senior High School head teacher who is really stricted and who is really strict

✓ it's my Senior High School head teacher who is really strict

“stricted”不是正确的形容词，正确形容词是“strict”。重复“it's”应去掉一个。

× he required us to go go go 5 minutes earlier than and schools.

✓ he required us to go 5 minutes earlier than school starts.

“go go go”重复错误，应只用一次“go”。“earlier than and schools”表达不正确，应为“earlier than school starts”。

× I think it should be right number not two more, not too fewer.

✓ I think it should be the right number, not too many, not too few.

“two more”应为“too many”，“too fewer”应为“too few”，这是量词使用错误。

× like school, country, every little things.

✓ like school controlling every little thing.

“country”在此句中不合适，且“every little things”应为“every little thing”。句子不完整，需补充动词。

× But if there are few rules, students.

✓ But if there are few rules, students may have more freedom.

句子不完整，缺少谓语和宾语，导致表达不清。需要补充完整句子。

× I had a really strange teacher is my Senior High School head teacher and he required us to get up earlier then and early, 55 minutes earlier than the school's official start time

✓ I had a really strict teacher, my Senior High School head teacher, and he required us to get up 55 minutes earlier than the school's official start time.

“strange”用词不当，应为“strict”。“earlier then and early”表达重复且错误，应简化为“55 minutes earlier”。

× he didn't allow us to have a rest during those break time.

✓ he didn't allow us to have a rest during those break times.

“break time”应为复数“break times”，因为指多个休息时间。

× I think I wouldn't because the completely real free school sounds like a nightmare

✓ I think I wouldn't because a completely rule-free school sounds like a nightmare.

“the completely real free school”表达错误，应为“a completely rule-free school”。“wouldn't”用法正确。

× the things are the things to free and maybe get chaotic and students may have misbehaved like they can skip class whenever.

✓ things would be too free and maybe get chaotic, and students may misbehave, like skipping class whenever they want.

“the things are the things to free”表达不通顺，应改为“things would be too free”。“misbehaved”时态错误，应为“misbehave”。句子结构需调整使其更通顺。