Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“their insurance of students safety”应为“they ensure students' safety”。建议简化句子结构，避免口头语“uh”，并注意主谓一致和所有格的正确使用。

Ví dụ: Yes, there are many rules at my school. Sometimes they make me feel uncomfortable, but I understand that they are important because they ensure students' safety.

Gợi ý: 回答中有重复使用“because”，且“students safety”应为“students' safety”，“help”应为“helps”。建议使用连接词如“not only... but also...”时注意句子结构，避免重复，并注意主谓一致。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think more rules would benefit students because they not only ensure students' safety but also help maintain order. For example, the rule about wearing uniforms helps create a sense of equality among students.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，如“who is really dedicated the long semester”表达不清晰，且出现重复词“I he”。建议简洁明了地表达，避免语法错误。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a dedicated teacher last semester who had very strict attendance rules.

Gợi ý: 回答中断句不完整，口头语较多，如“Umm”和“uh”，且时态不一致。建议避免口头语，使用完整句子，并保持时态一致。

Ví dụ: I prefer to have more rules at school because they motivate me to attend classes regularly, improve my learning, and perform better.

Gợi ý: 回答较为清晰，但“students performance academically”应为“students' academic performance”，且句子可以更流畅。建议注意所有格的使用，并适当使用连接词。

Ví dụ: Yes, this term I have a chemistry teacher who has clear guidelines about attendance and behavior, and he is very serious about students' academic performance.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误严重，如“not even in a least paced interested”应为“not at all interested”，“to being”应为“to be”，“my dream is become a intravenous”表达不正确。建议学习正确表达兴趣和职业梦想的句型。

Ví dụ: To be honest, I am not interested in being a teacher at all because my dream is to become a doctor.

× Absolutely, there are a lot of kinds of rules in my school and uh, sometimes they make me uncomfortable but I know sometimes their insurance of students safety.

✓ Absolutely, there are a lot of kinds of rules in my school and uh, sometimes they make me uncomfortable but I know sometimes they ensure students' safety.

原句中使用了“their insurance of students safety”，这里“insurance”用法错误，应为“ensure”表示“确保”，且“students safety”缺少所有格，应为“students' safety”。

× Yes, I do, because the rules are important because they not only ensure students safety but also maintain the order.

✓ Yes, I do, because the rules are important because they not only ensure students' safety but also maintain order.

“students safety”缺少所有格，应为“students' safety”；“maintain the order”中“the”不必要，通常说“maintain order”。

× For example, the rule about wearing uniforms help create a sense of equality among students.

✓ For example, the rule about wearing uniforms helps create a sense of equality among students.

主语是单数“the rule”，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“helps”，这里是主谓一致错误。

× Yes, I had a teacher who is really dedicated the long semester and I he had really strict attendance rules.

✓ Yes, I had a teacher who was really dedicated the long semester and he had really strict attendance rules.

句中时态不一致，既然是过去时态，应该用“was”而不是“is”；另外“and I he”多余，应删去“I”。

× Yes, I had a teacher who is really dedicated the long semester and I he had really strict attendance rules.

✓ Yes, I had a teacher who was really dedicated during the long semester and he had really strict attendance rules.

缺少介词“during”来表示时间段，且句子中多余的“I”导致结构混乱。

× I prefer to have more regulations at school because. Umm, by these rules, I was more motivated to attend classes regularly and improve my learning and, uh, perform better in school.

✓ I prefer to have more regulations at school because, umm, these rules motivate me to attend classes regularly, improve my learning, and perform better in school.

前半句用现在时态表达偏好，后半句不应用过去时“was”，应保持时态一致用现在时。

× Yes, I have this term. I have a chemistry teacher who has clear guidelines about attendance and behaviors and he's really serious about students performance academically.

✓ Yes, I have this term. I have a chemistry teacher who has clear guidelines about attendance and behavior and he's really serious about students' performance academically.

“behaviors”通常用不可数名词“behavior”；“students performance”缺少所有格，应为“students' performance”。

× To be honest, I'm not even in a least paced interested to being a teacher in in any kind of school because my dream is become a intravenous.

✓ To be honest, I'm not even in the least bit interested in being a teacher in any kind of school because my dream is to become an intravenous nurse.

“in a least paced interested”表达错误，应为“in the least bit interested”；“interested to being”应为“interested in being”；“in in”重复；“my dream is become a intravenous”缺少不定式“to”，且“intravenous”用词错误，应为“intravenous nurse”（静脉注射护士）。