Part 1
Giám khảo
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Thí sinh
Yes, there are many rules in my school and it is very important because they can ensure students safety.
Giám khảo
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Thí sinh
Absolutely, because the rules and the regulations not only help to ensure student safety but also maintain discipline. For example, student are not allowed to run in the hallways to prevent accidents.
Giám khảo
Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?
Thí sinh
Yes, I had a really dedicated teacher last semester and he had a very strict regulation and the attendance rule.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?
Thí sinh
Yes, I prefer to have more rules at school because that regulations can motivate me to perform better and. Learning more in the.
Giám khảo
Have you ever had a really strict teacher?
Thí sinh
Yes, this semester I have a chemistry teacher who is very strict and he has many rules about homework deadlines and class attendance regulations.
Giám khảo
Would you like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school?
Thí sinh
To be honest, I'm not interested in being a teacher at all because my dream is be being a doctor and help people indeed in need.
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法有误,且表达不够自然。应注意主谓一致和冠词使用,同时避免重复表达。
Ví dụ: Yes, there are many rules at my school, and they are very important because they ensure students' safety.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答较好,但有语法错误,如单复数不一致。建议注意细节表达,使内容更具体。
Ví dụ: Absolutely, because rules not only ensure students' safety but also help maintain discipline. For example, students are not allowed to run in the hallways to prevent accidents.
Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答不够清晰,表达不自然。应明确说明老师的特点,并用复数形式描述规则。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a really dedicated teacher last semester who enforced strict rules, especially regarding attendance.
Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答语法错误较多,句子不完整。建议练习完整表达观点,避免语法错误。
Ví dụ: I prefer to have more rules at school because they motivate me to perform better and learn more effectively.
Have you ever had a really strict teacher?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: 回答较好,但可以使用更多连接词使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, this semester I have a very strict chemistry teacher who enforces many rules about homework deadlines and class attendance.
Would you like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误,表达不够自然。建议注意动词形式和词序。
Ví dụ: To be honest, I'm not interested in being a teacher because my dream is to become a doctor and help people in need.
× Yes, there are many rules in my school and it is very important because they can ensure students safety.
✓ Yes, there are many rules in my school and they are very important because they can ensure students' safety.
这里的主语是复数的“rules”,所以谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”。另外,“students safety”缺少所有格,应改为“students' safety”。
× Absolutely, because the rules and the regulations not only help to ensure student safety but also maintain discipline.
✓ Absolutely, because the rules and the regulations not only help to ensure student safety but also maintain discipline.
此句中“rules and regulations”是复数,谓语“help”和“maintain”正确,无需改动。此句无语法错误。
× For example, student are not allowed to run in the hallways to prevent accidents.
✓ For example, students are not allowed to run in the hallways to prevent accidents.
“student”应为复数形式“students”,因为主语是复数,谓语“are”也对应复数。
× Yes, I had a really dedicated teacher last semester and he had a very strict regulation and the attendance rule.
✓ Yes, I had a really dedicated teacher last semester and he had very strict regulations and attendance rules.
“regulation”和“rule”应使用复数形式“regulations”和“rules”,因为通常有多条规定和规则。
× Yes, I prefer to have more rules at school because that regulations can motivate me to perform better and. Learning more in the.
✓ Yes, I prefer to have more rules at school because those regulations can motivate me to perform better and learn more.
“that regulations”应改为“those regulations”,指示代词需与复数名词一致。句子末尾不完整,应合并“Learning more”到主句中。
× Yes, this semester I have a chemistry teacher who is very strict and he has many rules about homework deadlines and class attendance regulations.
✓ Yes, this semester I have a chemistry teacher who is very strict and he has many rules about homework deadlines and class attendance regulations.
此句语法正确,无需修改。
× To be honest, I'm not interested in being a teacher at all because my dream is be being a doctor and help people indeed in need.
✓ To be honest, I'm not interested in being a teacher at all because my dream is to be a doctor and help people indeed in need.
“my dream is be being a doctor”中“be being”用法错误,应改为不定式“to be”。
× To be honest, I'm not interested in being a teacher at all because my dream is be being a doctor and help people indeed in need.
✓ To be honest, I'm not interested in being a teacher at all because my dream is to be a doctor and to help people indeed in need.
句子结构不完整,“help people indeed in need”表达不清,应加“to”使动词不定式结构完整。