Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to be more precise and use correct sentence structures. Also, avoid redundancy and clarify what '2 pony regulation' means. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students must wear a compulsory uniform and apron every day. Additionally, there is a rule that each student should tie their hair into two ponytails if they have long hair.

Gợi ý: Your answer is repetitive and has grammatical mistakes. Try to express your opinion clearly and support it with reasons using linking words. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe students would benefit from having more rules because rules help maintain discipline in schools. Moreover, without rules, students might misbehave and face punishments from teachers.

Gợi ý: Your answer conveys the message but has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific about how the teacher helped you improve.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a very dedicated teacher named Sania who taught both mathematics and science. Since I was weak in these subjects, she explained the concepts clearly, which helped me score good marks in the board exams.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and unclear. Try to express your preference clearly and support it with reasons using appropriate linking words. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence flow.

Ví dụ: I prefer to have fewer rules at school because too many rules can make students feel restricted. However, some basic rules are necessary to maintain discipline and decorum.

Gợi ý: Your answer has grammatical errors and unclear phrases like 'punishes us with good bad marks'. Try to clarify your points and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have had a very strict maths teacher because I was weak in that subject. She taught us firmly and sometimes gave strict punishments to encourage us to study harder.

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical mistakes and redundancy. Try to express your opinion clearly with reasons and use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Ví dụ: No, I would not like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school because without rules, students might behave irresponsibly and do wrong things, which would make teaching difficult.

× Yes absolutely there are various rules in my institution as there was a rule of compulsory uniform and apron everyday in our school as well as there was a 2 pony regulation in my institution for every children.

✓ Yes absolutely there are various rules in my institution such as a rule of compulsory uniform and apron every day in our school as well as a 2 pony regulation in my institution for every child.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'was' instead of 'is' or 'are' to describe current rules, and 'every children' should be 'every child' because 'every' is followed by a singular noun. Also, '2 pony regulation' is unclear but assumed to be a rule name. 'Everyday' should be 'every day' as the phrase means 'each day'. Use 'such as' to list examples properly.

× Yes absolutely children would be go get more benefit from more rules as rules are very necessary for every children to maintain in A to maintain a good way in schools or institution as if they don't they would be punished by the teachers.

✓ Yes absolutely children would get more benefit from more rules as rules are very necessary for every child to maintain good behavior in schools or institutions; otherwise, they would be punished by the teachers.

The phrase 'would be go get' is incorrect; it should be 'would get'. 'Every children' is incorrect; 'every' requires a singular noun, so 'every child' is correct. 'Maintain in A to maintain a good way' is unclear and corrected to 'maintain good behavior'. Also, 'schools or institution' should be plural 'institutions' for consistency.

× Yes I have had a very dedicated teacher as she was a mathematic teacher but my math was very weak as well as science also.

✓ Yes I have had a very dedicated teacher as she was a mathematics teacher but my math was very weak as well as science.

'Mathematic' is incorrect; the correct noun is 'mathematics'. The phrase 'as well as science also' is redundant; 'as well as science' suffices. The past tense 'was' is correct here as it refers to past experience.

× But the teacher named Sania taught me two subjects very clearly and I score good marks in that board to subject.

✓ But the teacher named Sania taught me two subjects very clearly and I scored good marks in those board subjects.

'Score' should be past tense 'scored' to match the past context. 'That board to subject' is unclear and corrected to 'those board subjects' to indicate multiple subjects. 'Good marks' is acceptable but 'scored good marks' is the correct verb form.

× I prefer to have low and fewer rules at school because rules make children restricted as well as they are confined to the rules whereas rules should be only minimum whereas to maintain decorum of the school.

✓ I prefer to have fewer rules at school because rules make children feel restricted as they are confined to them; rules should be minimal to maintain the decorum of the school.

'Low and fewer rules' is incorrect; 'fewer' is used for countable nouns like 'rules'. 'Only minimum' is awkward; 'minimal' is better. The sentence structure is improved for clarity and correctness.

× Yes sure. I have a very strict teacher in maths as my math subject is very weak so the teacher taught us in a very strict manner and sometimes punishes us with with good bad marks.

✓ Yes sure. I have a very strict teacher in maths as my math subject is very weak so the teacher taught us in a very strict manner and sometimes punishes us with bad marks.

'With with' is a repetition error; one 'with' should be removed. 'Good bad marks' is contradictory; likely intended 'bad marks'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× No, I don't want to become a teacher in rural free school because there are many consequences of studying or teaching in a rule free school because students will be freely independent to do any wrong or wrong things as well.

✓ No, I don't want to become a teacher in a rule-free school because there are many consequences of studying or teaching in such a school; students will be freely independent to do wrong things.

'Rural free school' is likely a typo for 'rule-free school'. 'Rule free' should be hyphenated as 'rule-free'. 'Any wrong or wrong things' is redundant; 'wrong things' suffices. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correctness.