Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer needs to be clearer and more organized. Try to avoid repetition and use linking words to connect your ideas. Also, be specific about the rules and explain briefly why they exist.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students must follow a dress code, including specific hairstyles and uniform styles. These rules help maintain discipline and a neat appearance among students.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Use linking words to connect your ideas and explain how more rules can help students develop qualities like self-control and ethics.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe students would benefit from more rules because they can help develop important qualities such as self-control and personal responsibility. For instance, rules about punctuality teach students to manage their time effectively.

Gợi ý: Your answer is confusing and does not directly address the question. Try to answer clearly and provide reasons or examples if possible.

Ví dụ: No, I have not had a really dedicated teacher yet. However, I hope to meet one in the future who is passionate about teaching and helps students learn effectively.

Gợi ý: Your answer has repetition and grammatical errors. Try to express your opinion clearly and support it with reasons using linking words.

Ví dụ: I prefer fewer rules at school because too many rules can make students feel unhappy and restricted. Therefore, having only necessary rules helps create a better learning environment.

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by correcting grammar and adding linking words for clarity.

Ví dụ: No, I have not had a really strict teacher because most of my teachers are flexible and explain things clearly, which makes learning easier.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors. Try to clearly state your opinion and reasons, and avoid irrelevant details.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to work as a teacher in a school without many rules because it would create a relaxed environment. Also, teaching is a good job that helps me earn money to support myself.

× There are rules in in my school and for example for haircut and knee skirt and other hairstyle and uniform style and other rules have in my school but and they are in the restricted in my school.

✓ There are rules in my school, for example about haircuts, knee-length skirts, hairstyles, uniform styles, and other rules, and they are restricted in my school.

The original sentence has redundancy ('in in'), incorrect word order ('other rules have in my school'), and awkward phrasing ('they are in the restricted'). The correction clarifies the existence of rules and their restrictions using proper sentence structure and prepositions.

× I think most students get a benefit for example to to get principal or ethics or personal management in the two self-control and others it helps.

✓ I think most students benefit, for example, by learning principles, ethics, personal management, self-control, and other skills; it helps them.

The original sentence misuses 'get a benefit' and has unclear phrasing. The correction uses 'benefit' as a verb and clarifies the examples, improving clarity and grammatical correctness.

× No, because I am a ruler in the principle in the Prasarama management. So I'm not dedicated to which teacher.

✓ No, because I am a leader in the principal's office in Prasarama management, so I am not dedicated to any teacher.

The original sentence misuses 'ruler' instead of 'leader' and 'which teacher' instead of 'any teacher'. The correction fixes pronoun usage and word choice for clarity.

× I prefer few rulers at school because when the rulers have much, the student will be disliked at school. So it will it will it will be the fewer rules.

✓ I prefer fewer rules at school because when there are many rules, students will dislike school. So, there should be fewer rules.

The original sentence confuses 'rulers' (people) with 'rules' (regulations), and misuses quantifiers 'few' and 'much'. The correction uses the correct plural 'rules' and appropriate quantifiers 'fewer' and 'many'.

× No, I hadn't strict teacher because the most of the teachers are flexible and clear so there is no strict teacher.

✓ No, I haven't had a strict teacher because most of the teachers are flexible and clear, so there is no strict teacher.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'hadn't' instead of 'haven't had' for present perfect tense. The correction uses the correct present perfect form to indicate experience up to now.

× Yes, I like to work the teachers because to get money and earn for my personal thinkers or something like clothes, shoes and other. And the teacher is so perfect to teach the students. It is it will be unhappy and.

✓ Yes, I would like to work as a teacher to earn money for my personal needs, such as clothes, shoes, and others. Teachers are perfect for teaching students. Otherwise, it would be unhappy.

The original sentence has incorrect conjunctions and unclear phrasing ('work the teachers', 'personal thinkers', 'It is it will be unhappy and'). The correction clarifies intentions, corrects conjunctions, and improves sentence flow.