Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat long and contains some redundancy, such as 'So but if I need to talk about my previous experience'. Try to be more concise and directly answer the question. Also, avoid filler words and ensure your sentences are grammatically correct and natural.

Ví dụ: I am no longer a student as I graduated a few years ago. However, when I was at university, there were many rules, such as the requirement to be punctual for classes.

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and well-structured with relevant examples. To improve, try to use more varied vocabulary and linking words to enhance coherence, such as 'Moreover' or 'In addition'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe students would benefit from having more rules. Moreover, a structured environment fosters self-discipline, which helps students concentrate better and prepares them for their future careers.

Gợi ý: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors and incomplete sentences. Try to organize your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, and avoid repetition. Also, ensure your sentences are complete and grammatically correct.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a dedicated teacher at university named Mehmet Yatmas. He taught mechanical structural engineering and was very disciplined and supportive, which greatly helped us understand the subject.

Gợi ý: Your answer is well-structured and clear. To improve further, you could add linking words like 'Furthermore' or 'Additionally' to connect your ideas smoothly and include a specific example to support your opinion.

Ví dụ: Personally, I prefer having more rules at school because they create a disciplined environment. Furthermore, discipline helps develop good work habits, which are crucial for future success. For instance, clear rules about homework deadlines encourage students to manage their time effectively.

Gợi ý: Your answer provides relevant details but contains some awkward phrasing and minor errors, such as 'winner strict'. Try to use more natural expressions and avoid repetition. Also, ensure your sentences flow logically with linking words.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a very strict teacher at university who was also the faculty principal. For example, if a student was late, they were not allowed to enter the class, which encouraged punctuality and helped maintain discipline.

Gợi ý: Your answer is thoughtful and balanced. To improve, try to use linking words such as 'On the other hand' to better contrast your ideas and add a concluding sentence to summarize your opinion.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to work in a rule-free school because it could create a relaxed and flexible environment, reducing stress for teachers. For example, teachers might have more freedom to use creative methods. On the other hand, a lack of rules could make it difficult for students to stay focused, so some structure is still necessary.

× Actually, I'm not a student anymore because I've graduated a couple of years ago and I started working in a big company.

✓ Actually, I'm not a student anymore because I graduated a couple of years ago and I started working in a big company.

The present perfect tense ('I've graduated') is incorrectly used with a specific past time expression ('a couple of years ago'). The simple past tense ('I graduated') should be used to indicate a completed action at a definite time in the past.

× So but if I need to talk about my previous experience when I was in university, I would say yes, there were a lot of rules for students, for example, being on time.

✓ So, if I need to talk about my previous experience when I was at university, I would say yes, there were a lot of rules for students, for example, being on time.

The phrase 'So but' is redundant and awkward; using only 'So' or 'But' is appropriate. Also, the preposition 'in university' should be 'at university' to correctly indicate attendance at an institution.

× Yes, I had when I was in university that was a teacher named Mehmet Yatmas who was a dedicated professor for us.

✓ Yes, I had a dedicated teacher when I was at university; his name was Mehmet Yatmas.

The original sentence is awkward and unclear. The pronoun usage and sentence structure need correction for clarity and grammatical correctness. Also, 'in university' should be 'at university'.

× He was well disciplined and self dedicated person who is teaching me mechanical structural engineering for us and he helped us a lot to provide our.

✓ He was a well-disciplined and self-dedicated person who taught us mechanical structural engineering and helped us a lot.

The adjectives 'well disciplined' and 'self dedicated' need hyphens to form compound adjectives ('well-disciplined', 'self-dedicated'). The verb tense should be past ('taught') to match the past context. The phrase 'for us' is redundant and awkward, and the sentence ending is incomplete and unclear.

× He was well disciplined and self dedicated person who is teaching me mechanical structural engineering for us and he helped us a lot to provide our.

✓ He was a well-disciplined and self-dedicated person who taught us mechanical structural engineering and helped us a lot.

The preposition 'for us' is incorrectly used; 'taught us' is the correct form. Also, 'is teaching me' should be past tense 'taught us' to match the time frame.

× He was also principal of our faculty, so he was winner strict about following the rules.

✓ He was also the principal of our faculty, so he was very strict about following the rules.

The word 'winner' is incorrect here; it should be 'very' to indicate degree. Also, the definite article 'the' is needed before 'principal'.

× He was also principal of our faculty, so he was winner strict about following the rules.

✓ He was also the principal of our faculty, so he was very strict about following the rules.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'principal' to specify the position.