Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答不够清晰，语法和表达存在较多错误，建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题，并用连贯的语言表达观点。

Ví dụ: Yes, there are many rules at my school. For example, students have to follow the dress code and attend classes on time. However, we have some freedom, such as staying out until midnight.

Gợi ý: 回答内容较为简单，表达不够流畅，建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，并提供更具体的理由支持观点。

Ví dụ: I believe it depends on the students' age. For example, junior high students need more rules to help manage their behavior, but university students should have more freedom to develop independence.

Gợi ý: 回答不完整且表达混乱，建议简洁明了地描述老师的特点和具体事例，避免重复和语法错误。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a dedicated teacher named Ms. Sing at university. She taught me many useful skills and always encouraged me to work hard.

Gợi ý: 表达不够准确，语法错误较多，建议使用正确的句型表达观点，并举例说明规则如何影响创造力。

Ví dụ: I prefer fewer rules at school because strict rules can limit our creativity and personal growth.

Gợi ý: 回答重复且语法错误明显，建议简洁描述老师的严格表现，并说明对自己的影响。

Ví dụ: Yes, my junior high math teacher was very strict. She always encouraged me to practice more to improve my math scores.

Gợi ý: 回答不够连贯，表达不清楚，建议明确说明为什么想成为老师，并解释设计工作与教学的关系。

Ví dụ: Yes, I want to be a teacher in the future because it matches my major. Teaching in a rule-free school would allow me to be creative and apply my design skills.

× Yes, we have a lot of rules, but I think in my school we are the teacher.

✓ Yes, we have a lot of rules, but I think in my school we are the teachers.

这里“teacher”应为复数形式“teachers”，因为主语是“we”，表示复数，谓语对应的名词也应为复数。

× Give me a lot, give out, I'll ask a lot of freedom and we don't need to back to our school before 12 AM.

✓ They give us a lot, give out, I'll ask for a lot of freedom and we don't need to go back to our school before 12 AM.

“Give me”应为“give us”，因为主语是第三人称复数，宾语应为“us”。“ask a lot of freedom”应为“ask for a lot of freedom”，动词“ask”后需加介词“for”。“need to back”应为“need to go back”，动词“need to”后应接动词原形。

× I think this question is depends on the age of the students.

✓ I think this question depends on the age of the students.

“is depends”中“depends”已经是动词，前面不需要“is”，应直接用“depends”。

× Sometimes umm I think junior high school students need it to manage them there.

✓ Sometimes umm I think junior high school students need it to manage themselves there.

“manage them”中的“them”指代不明确，应该用反身代词“themselves”表示学生自己管理自己。

× But as an undergraduate I think umm the school need to give us more freedom.

✓ But as an undergraduate I think umm the school needs to give us more freedom.

主语“the school”是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加“s”，即“needs”。

× Yes, in my university I met a school called on called Sing and she's a really dedicated teacher for me.

✓ Yes, in my university I met a teacher called Sing and she's a really dedicated teacher for me.

“met a school”错误，应该是“met a teacher”，因为“school”是学校，不是人。

× She she teach me a lot of skills and she told me about about how to.

✓ She taught me a lot of skills and she told me about how to do things.

“teach”时态错误，应为过去式“taught”。“about about how to”重复且不完整，补充完整句子。

× I prefer have a few rooms at school I think, umm I think the rules will limited our our improvements and our our creative mind.

✓ I prefer to have fewer rules at school I think, umm I think the rules will limit our improvements and our creative minds.

“rooms”应为“rules”，且“a few”改为“fewer”表示可数名词的较少。动词“limited”应为原形“limit”，与will连用。复数名词“minds”更合适。

× Yes in my Junior School junior high school my my math teacher is very strict 1 and she always told me do more exercise and and and make more make make more score of math.

✓ Yes, in my junior high school my math teacher was very strict and she always told me to do more exercises and to get higher scores in math.

“is”应为过去式“was”，因为描述过去的情况。动词“told me do”应为“told me to do”，动词不定式需加“to”。“score”应为复数“scores”。

× Yes, yes, I would like to and I want to be a teacher in the future because umm for my for my major and I want to do more design work.

✓ Yes, yes, I would like to and I want to be a teacher in the future because of my major and I want to do more design work.

“because umm for my major”中“for”用法错误，应为“because of my major”，表示原因。

× So I think teacher is a better work for me to to do my design.

✓ So I think being a teacher is a better job for me to do my design.

“teacher”前应加“being a”表示职业身份，“work”应改为“job”，更符合语境。