Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答有些重复和不够连贯，建议减少口头语如“like”和“yeah”，并且用更自然的表达方式描述规则。可以尝试用连接词使句子更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For instance, students are not allowed to eat in class, must keep quiet during lessons, and are required to submit homework before the deadline.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议理清观点，使用正确时态和主谓一致，并用连接词清楚区分正反两方面。

Ví dụ: I believe more rules have both positive and negative effects. On the one hand, rules can help students focus and learn better; on the other hand, too many rules might limit their social skills and ability to connect with others.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在发音和用词错误，如“dead”应为“dedicated”，“delicate”用词不当。建议用准确词汇表达，并避免重复和犹豫。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have had a very dedicated teacher. For example, my junior high school science teacher often stayed after class to explain topics and even gave me small gifts, which made me feel very supported.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，如“Fear rules”应为“fewer rules”，建议简洁明了表达观点，并用具体理由支持。

Ví dụ: I prefer fewer rules because I value freedom. For example, some rules like not allowing breakfast in class are unreasonable since we have little time in the morning.

Gợi ý: 回答内容具体，但表达不够连贯且有语法错误。建议用更自然的句子结构描述经历，并避免重复。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a strict math teacher in high school. Once, when I made a mistake in class, he shouted at me and told me to leave, which I felt was unfair.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议理清思路，使用正确的语法和连词，具体说明负面影响。

Ví dụ: No, I wouldn't like to work in a rule-free school because without rules, students might not pay attention in class, skip homework, or leave early, which would negatively affect learning.

× Yeah, absolutely. Yes. For example, like we can't eat any food or anything in the class and we must be quiet in the class and finish the homework before the deadline.

✓ Yeah, absolutely. Yes. For example, we can't eat any food or anything in the class, and we must be quiet in the class and finish the homework before the deadline.

句子中“like”用法不当，属于多余词汇，应删除以使句子更简洁流畅。

× Yes, all the teacher are very, uh, dead, uh, dedicated for, for example, in the junior high school, my science teacher after class, he told me some knowledge about science and gave me some gift and uh, uh, it read me very well. So I think she's very, uh, delicate.

✓ Yes, all the teachers are very, uh, dedicated. For example, in junior high school, my science teacher after class told me some knowledge about science and gave me some gifts, and he treated me very well. So I think he's very, uh, dedicated.

“teacher”应为复数形式“teachers”，表示所有老师；“gift”应为复数“gifts”；“it read me very well”语法错误，应为“he treated me very well”；“she's”与前文“he”指代不一致，应统一为“he”。

× Well, I think it had positive and negative effect. For the positive, they, they can help rules can help students understand knowledge better and help them to study better.

✓ Well, I think it has positive and negative effects. For the positive, rules can help students understand knowledge better and help them study better.

“had”应为现在时“has”，因为谈论的是普遍事实；“effect”应为复数“effects”；“they, they can help rules can help”重复且语法混乱，应简化为“rules can help”；“help them to study”中“to”可省略。

× And for the negative, uh, if they go to society, they can't, uh, connect better with people and doesn't have any community.

✓ And for the negative, if they go to society, they can't connect well with people and don't have any sense of community.

主语“they”对应的谓语动词应为复数形式“don't have”，而非“doesn't have”；“connect better”搭配不当，应为“connect well”；“any community”表达不准确，应为“any sense of community”。

× Yes, in my high school my maths teacher I I don't like him. I think in the class I calculate the wrong number and he shouted with me and kicked my leg and said get out.

✓ Yes, in my high school, my maths teacher—I don't like him. I think in class I calculated the wrong number, and he shouted at me, kicked my leg, and said, 'Get out.'

“calculate”应为过去式“calculated”；“shouted with me”错误，应为“shouted at me”；“get out”作为直接引语应加引号。

× I think no, because uh rule free school has some negative effect. Like like students, uh doesn't learning in the class and do any homework. They maybe eat uh, they maybe uh, get out class early.

✓ I think no, because a rule-free school has some negative effects. For example, students don't learn in class or do any homework. They may eat, and they may get out of class early.

“doesn't learning”错误，应为“don't learn”；“maybe”用作副词应为“may”；“get out class”缺少介词，应为“get out of class”；“effect”应为复数“effects”；“rule free”应加连字符“rule-free”。