Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

× Of course for half hour high school students were forbidden to smoking, drinking whilst beers or others.

✓ Of course, for half an hour, high school students were forbidden to smoke, drink beer or others.

动词不定式to后面应接动词原形，而不是动名词形式。这里的forbidden后应接动词原形smoke和drink，而不是smoking和drinking。

× Yes, and we are ordered to wearing the school uniform.

✓ Yes, and we are ordered to wear the school uniform.

动词to后应接动词原形，不能用动名词形式wearing。

× Also, the schools make rules that we should speak louder.

✓ Also, the school makes rules that we should speak more loudly.

speak louder应改为speak more loudly，loudly是副词，修饰动词speak。

× sometimes they can't aware that their behavior can lead to serious out outcomes.

✓ sometimes they can't be aware that their behavior can lead to serious outcomes.

aware是形容词，不能直接跟动词，需用be aware结构。out是多余的，应去掉。

× So the rules help students to behavior in the right way.

✓ So the rules help students to behave in the right way.

behavior是名词，动词应使用behave。

× This is this can help them a lot for for their future.

✓ This can help them a lot for their future.

句中多余的this应去掉，保持句子简洁。

× She was not only passionate about teaching but also encouraged us to become responsible individuals and make contributions to the society.

✓ She was not only passionate about teaching but also encouraged us to become responsible individuals and make contributions to society.

contributions to后面不加定冠词the，society前不加the更自然。

× I think the current rules for high school students are sufficient because they help maintain order.

✓ I think the current rules for high school students are sufficient because they help maintain order.

此句无错误，保持原句。

× If we break broke one of them we will be punished.

✓ If we break one of them, we will be punished.

条件句中应使用一般现在时break，而不是过去式broke。

× Such as having to read aloud or write words repeatedly.

✓ For example, we have to read aloud or write words repeatedly.

句子不完整，应改为完整句子，使用for example引出例子。

× I think her help me improve my ability in.

✓ I think she helped me improve my ability.

her是宾格，主语应使用she；动词时态应与上下文一致，使用过去式helped。句尾in不完整，应去掉。

× Actually, I prefer to work as a teacher in a school that have rules, because if in your free school, students will not spend time on studying, they may focus on entertainment or computer games.

✓ Actually, I prefer to work as a teacher in a school that has rules, because if in your free school, students will not spend time studying, they may focus on entertainment or computer games.

school是单数，谓语动词应用has而不是have；spend time后接动词时用动名词形式studying。

× They will. They will because there's no rules to control them.

✓ They will, because there are no rules to control them.

there is/are结构中，rules是复数，应使用there are；句子断句不当，应合并为一句。