Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to use correct grammar and avoid redundancy. Make your answer more concise and clear by correcting errors and structuring your response logically. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain the purpose of the rules with specific details, using linking words to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are rules at my school, especially for younger children. These rules help students learn discipline and maintain order, which is important because young children often want to do whatever they like.

Gợi ý: Focus on clarity and grammar. Avoid vague phrases like 'I have my own kit now' which is unclear. Use linking words like 'however' to contrast ideas and provide a balanced opinion with specific reasons.

Ví dụ: I think more rules can help students behave better; however, too many rules might limit their creativity because they cannot try new things freely.

Gợi ý: Improve grammar and complete your sentences. Use clear and correct structures to express your ideas. Provide specific examples of how the teacher was dedicated and how it helped you, using linking words to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a dedicated teacher in high school. He was knowledgeable and understood our thoughts, which helped me a lot because he didn't just impose strict rules but encouraged us to think independently.

Gợi ý: Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Be clear about your opinion and support it with specific reasons. Use linking words like 'because' and 'however' to make your answer coherent.

Ví dụ: I prefer fewer rules, especially unnecessary ones, because children should have the freedom to explore new ideas and find different ways to do things. However, important rules that protect society should remain.

Gợi ý: Complete your sentences and avoid filler words like 'you know'. Use correct grammar and provide specific examples to explain why the teacher was strict and how it affected you.

Ví dụ: Yes, I remember my teacher in year one was very strict, probably because I was young. She didn't allow me to do everything I wanted, which made me feel restricted at the time.

Gợi ý: Improve sentence structure and grammar. Avoid repetition and clarify your points. Use linking words like 'because' and 'therefore' to explain your reasons clearly.

Ví dụ: No, I wouldn't like to work in a rule-free school because young children need rules to guide their behaviour. Without rules, they might act disrespectfully or even harm themselves or others, making it unsafe.

× Yes, there are always a rules at school, especially for younger children.

✓ Yes, there are always rules at school, especially for younger children.

The word 'rules' is plural, so the article 'a' which is singular is incorrect here. The correct form is to use 'rules' without 'a' to match the plural noun.

× We know at that age we likes to do what we want, but rules are setting set there to help us to learn how to discipline and keep the order.

✓ We know at that age we like to do what we want, but rules are set there to help us learn discipline and keep order.

The verb 'like' should be in the base form 'like' to agree with the plural subject 'we'. Also, 'are setting set' is incorrect; it should be 'are set'. Additionally, 'to learn how to discipline and keep the order' is better expressed as 'learn discipline and keep order' for clarity and correctness.

× Actually, I'm always thinking about this because I have my own kit now.

✓ Actually, I always think about this because I have my own kid now.

The phrase 'I'm always thinking' is awkward here; 'I always think' is more appropriate to express habitual thought. Also, 'kit' is a typo and should be 'kid'.

× On the one hand, it can help them to learn how to behave themselves in a good way, but on the other hand, I think it's kind of limited their creativity, you know, because so many rules sitting there, which means they cannot do all the things they like.

✓ On the one hand, it can help them learn how to behave well, but on the other hand, I think it kind of limits their creativity, you know, because there are so many rules, which means they cannot do all the things they like.

The reflexive pronoun 'themselves' is unnecessary after 'behave'. 'Behave well' is the correct expression. 'It's kind of limited' should be 'it kind of limits' to use the correct verb form. 'So many rules sitting there' is incorrect; it should be 'there are so many rules'.

× Yes, fortunately I had one teacher when I was in my high school.

✓ Yes, fortunately I had one teacher when I was in high school.

The phrase 'in my high school' is unnatural; the correct expression is 'in high school' without 'my'.

× He was a great teacher and not only be knowledgeable and also he knows what we are think what we were thinking.

✓ He was a great teacher and was not only knowledgeable but also knew what we were thinking.

The phrase 'not only be knowledgeable' is incorrect; it should be 'was not only knowledgeable'. Also, 'he knows what we are think what we were thinking' is incorrect; it should be 'he knew what we were thinking' to maintain past tense and correct verb form.

× You know, that helps me a lot because he doesn't just blindly limit our behaviors and he always.

✓ You know, that helped me a lot because he didn't just blindly limit our behaviours and he always...

The sentence is incomplete but correcting tense to past is necessary to match previous sentences. 'Behaviors' is more commonly spelled 'behaviours' in Australian English. The conjunction 'and he always' needs completion but is left as is due to incomplete original.

× Oh, I prefer less for those rules are not necessary, which won't won't harm the society.

✓ Oh, I prefer fewer rules because those that are not necessary, which won't harm society, should be cancelled.

'Less' is used with uncountable nouns; 'rules' is countable, so 'fewer' is correct. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correctness. 'Won't won't' is a typo and corrected to 'won't'. 'The society' is incorrect; 'society' without 'the' is correct.

× Personally, I still remember my teacher in year one or two and they are very, you know, strict probably just because I was a little kid and then they kind of don't didn't allow to I do all the things I like.

✓ Personally, I still remember my teacher in year one or two and they were very, you know, strict probably just because I was a little kid and they kind of didn't allow me to do all the things I liked.

The verb tense should be past 'were' to match the past context. 'Don't didn't' is incorrect; 'didn't' is correct. 'Allow to I do' is incorrect; it should be 'allow me to do'. 'I like' should be past tense 'I liked' to maintain consistency.

× No, definitely not because especially if you work for a work with the young children, they don't, They didn't have the rule to limit it their behavior.

✓ No, definitely not because especially if you work with young children, they don't have rules to limit their behaviour.

The phrase 'work for a work with' is incorrect; it should be 'work with'. The sentence mixes present and past tense incorrectly; 'don't have' is appropriate here. 'They didn't have' is past tense and inconsistent. 'The rule' should be plural 'rules' to match context. 'It their behavior' is incorrect; 'their behaviour' is correct.

× They may do something disrespectful or even harmful behavior and what can you do?

✓ They may do something disrespectful or even harmful behaviour, and what can you do?

'Behavior' should be 'behaviour' in Australian English. The sentence is otherwise correct but needs a comma before 'and' to separate clauses.