Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but could be more concise and natural. Avoid redundancy like repeating 'I believe' and clarify your points with better sentence structure. Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students are required to keep their hair short and beards shaved. This is because the school prefers a neat and uniform appearance among students.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains repetition and grammatical errors. Try to express your opinion clearly and support it with reasons using linking words. Avoid repeating phrases and ensure your sentences are grammatically correct.

Ví dụ: I don't think students benefit from having more rules because it can increase their stress. Moreover, if students dislike the rules, they may feel unhappy at school, which affects their learning experience.

Gợi ý: Your answer lacks clarity and contains hesitations and grammatical mistakes. Try to give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details. Use correct verb tenses and avoid filler words like 'uh'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a very dedicated teacher in 11th grade. He had been teaching for over 15 years and always made sure every student understood the lessons clearly.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating similar ideas and use linking words to connect your points smoothly.

Ví dụ: I prefer having fewer rules at school because it reduces stress for me and other students. When there are too many rules, it can make the school environment more stressful.

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but could be improved by avoiding repetition and making sentences more fluent. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide a clearer explanation.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a strict teacher in middle school who taught Hindi. Since I was weak in the subject, she was very strict with me and other students, which made many students dislike her.

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear but can be more natural and concise. Avoid filler phrases like 'you know' and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: No, I would not like to work in a rule-free school because managing students who act freely without rules would be very stressful and challenging.

× So in my school particularly, they need my beard to be shaved and the hair to be short.

✓ So in my school particularly, they need my beard to be shaved and my hair to be short.

The sentence incorrectly omits the possessive pronoun 'my' before 'hair', which causes confusion between singular and plural possession. Adding 'my' clarifies that the hair belongs to the speaker, maintaining consistency with 'my beard'. This is a singular and plural issue because 'hair' is singular and needs the correct possessive pronoun.

× You know, they don't like people, the students with long hair and long beard as well.

✓ You know, they don't like people, the students with long hair and long beards as well.

The word 'beard' should be plural 'beards' because it refers to multiple students each having a beard. This is a singular and plural issue where the noun must agree in number with the subject it describes.

× I don't believe, I don't believe students might benefit from getting more rules from the school as they might be more stressful for the students they don't like.

✓ I don't believe students would benefit from getting more rules from the school as they might be more stressful for the students who don't like them.

The modal verb 'might' is incorrectly used with 'don't believe'. 'Would' is more appropriate to express hypothetical situations. Also, the sentence lacks clarity with missing relative pronoun 'who' and object 'them'. This is a modal verb usage issue.

× So I believe they don't benefit from the rules from the school, but they might be benefit to the students.

✓ So I believe they don't benefit from the rules from the school, but they might benefit the students.

The phrase 'might be benefit' is incorrect; the correct form is 'might benefit'. This is a modal verb usage issue where the modal verb 'might' should be followed by the base form of the verb without 'be'.

× Well, yes, uh, of course, I had a 1 teacher from 11th or 12th grade I believe, uh, he was very dedicated in his teachings.

✓ Well, yes, uh, of course, I had a teacher in 11th or 12th grade, I believe, uh, he was very dedicated in his teachings.

The phrase 'a 1 teacher' is incorrect; 'a teacher' is correct. Also, 'from 11th or 12th grade' should be 'in 11th or 12th grade' to indicate the time period. This is a past tense and sentence structure issue.

× He almost taught for like 15 or 6.

✓ He taught for about 15 or 16 years.

The phrase 'almost taught for like 15 or 6' is unclear and grammatically incorrect. The past tense verb 'taught' is correct, but the quantifier and numbers are confusing. Correcting to 'about 15 or 16 years' clarifies the meaning. This is a past tense and quantifier issue.

× I don't think, I think much more like of the years he have been teaching children's.

✓ I don't think, I think he has been teaching children for many more years.

The sentence has multiple errors: 'he have' should be 'he has' (subject-verb agreement), 'children's' is incorrect possessive form and should be 'children' (plural noun), and the sentence structure is awkward. This is a singular and plural issue and subject-verb agreement issue.

× So I believe it's much dedicated.

✓ So I believe he is very dedicated.

The adjective 'dedicated' needs a subject and correct form. 'Much dedicated' is incorrect; 'very dedicated' is the correct adverb-adjective combination. This is an incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs issue.

× As a student, I prefer having less rules as they might cause less stress to me and to the other students.

✓ As a student, I prefer having fewer rules as they might cause less stress to me and to the other students.

'Less' is used with uncountable nouns, while 'fewer' is used with countable nouns like 'rules'. This is a singular and plural issue involving quantifiers.

× So when you when we get more rules, it might cause to be more stressful as well.

✓ So when we get more rules, it might cause more stress as well.

The phrase 'cause to be more stressful' is incorrect; 'cause more stress' is the correct expression. The preposition 'to' is unnecessary here. This is an incorrect use of prepositions issue.

× She was teaching me a language called Hindi and I was pretty weak in it.

✓ She was teaching me a language called Hindi, and I was pretty weak at it.

The preposition 'in' is less appropriate than 'at' when referring to skill level in a language. This is an incorrect use of prepositions issue.

× So the students didn't like that teacher as well.

✓ So the students didn't like that teacher either.

The phrase 'as well' is less appropriate at the end of negative sentences; 'either' is preferred. This is an incorrect use of conjunction/adverb issue.

× Actually my answer would be no because it would be much stressful to me for handling such students.

✓ Actually, my answer would be no because it would be very stressful for me to handle such students.

The adjective 'stressful' should be preceded by 'very' instead of 'much'. Also, 'for handling' should be 'to handle'. This is a modal verb usage and incorrect use of prepositions issue.

× You know like in a free school the students want like they will act freely according to their will, so it will be very difficult to manage them as well.

✓ You know, in a free school, the students want to act freely according to their will, so it will be very difficult to manage them as well.

The sentence has redundant and incorrect use of 'like' and missing commas. Removing unnecessary 'like' and adding commas improves clarity. This is an incorrect use of conjunction and sentence structure issue.