Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally relevant but can be improved by correcting grammar and making it more natural. For example, use 'good hygiene' without 'a', and 'strict discipline is required' without 'also'. Try to avoid redundancy and make sentences clearer.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are several important rules at my school. For instance, students must maintain good hygiene, and strict discipline is enforced to ensure a productive learning environment.

Gợi ý: There are grammar mistakes and word choice errors. Use 'benefit from more rules' instead of 'get benefit from more roles'. Also, explain how more rules help students develop positively with linking words.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe students would benefit from more rules because they help create a structured environment, which encourages positive personal development.

Gợi ý: Improve subject-verb agreement ('teachers' and 'inspire'), and avoid vague phrases like 'desired work'. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have had many dedicated teachers at my school who inspire students to achieve their goals and support them in staying positive while completing assignments.

Gợi ý: Your answer is good but contains a small error: 'modality' should be 'morality' or 'conduct'. Also, ensure subject-verb agreement ('rules... encourage'). Use precise vocabulary and linking words.

Ví dụ: I prefer having more rules at school because they create a safe and disciplined environment. For example, clear rules about behaviour encourage students to develop good habits both personally and academically.

Gợi ý: Avoid redundancy ('when I was in 4th grade' and 'when I was a child'). Use correct prepositions ('strict with us'). Also, improve sentence flow with linking words.

Ví dụ: When I was in 4th grade, my class teacher was very strict with us and gave us plenty of homework. However, she helped me improve my grades significantly.

Gợi ý: Correct 'rural free school' to 'rule-free school'. Avoid filler words like 'uh'. Use clearer expressions such as 'out of control' instead of 'out of hands'.

Ví dụ: I would not like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school because students might become out of control and disobedient, which I find difficult to manage.

× I guess there are several important rules and regulations for students at my school. For example, students are expected to maintain a good hygiene and strict discipline is also required for the student.

✓ I guess there are several important rules and regulations for students at my school. For example, students are expected to maintain good hygiene and strict discipline is also required for the students.

The word 'hygiene' is an uncountable noun and does not need the article 'a'. Also, 'the student' should be plural 'the students' to match the context referring to all students.

× I believe that students can get benefit from more roles because they can develop themselves in a positive way.

✓ I believe that students can benefit from more rules because they can develop themselves in a positive way.

The phrase 'get benefit' is incorrect; the correct form is 'benefit'. Also, 'roles' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'rules'.

× Yes, in my school there are a lot of dedicated teacher who inspires each and every student to do their desired work and also help them to stay positive throughout their school works and assignments.

✓ Yes, in my school there are a lot of dedicated teachers who inspire each and every student to do their desired work and also help them to stay positive throughout their schoolwork and assignments.

The noun 'teacher' should be plural 'teachers' to agree with 'a lot of'. The verb 'inspires' should be 'inspire' to agree with plural subject 'teachers'. 'School works' is incorrect; the correct term is 'schoolwork'.

× For example, clear rules about modality and behaviour encourages students to develop good habits both personally and academically.

✓ For example, clear rules about morality and behaviour encourage students to develop good habits both personally and academically.

The word 'modality' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'morality'. Also, 'encourages' should be 'encourage' to agree with plural subject 'rules'.

× Back when I was in the 4th grade when I was a child, my class teacher used to be really strict to us and she would give us plenty of homework to do, but eventually she helped me to get better at my grades as well.

✓ Back when I was in the 4th grade as a child, my class teacher used to be really strict with us and she would give us plenty of homework to do, but eventually she helped me to get better grades as well.

The preposition 'to' is incorrect after 'strict'; the correct preposition is 'with'. Also, 'get better at my grades' is incorrect; it should be 'get better grades'.

× I personally would not like to work as a teacher in a rural free school because if I work there, uh, the students may be out of hands and maybe disobedient, which I really don't prefer.

✓ I personally would not like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school because if I work there, uh, the students may be out of hand and maybe disobedient, which I really don't prefer.

The phrase 'rural free school' is incorrect; it should be 'rule-free school'. The idiom is 'out of hand', not 'out of hands'.