Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. To improve, use correct subject-verb agreement and clearer sentence structure. Also, avoid redundancy and be more concise.

Ví dụ: Yes, my school has several rules, such as wearing a uniform, being punctual, and attending all classes.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but incomplete and lacks a clear conclusion. Try to complete your thought and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: It depends; in primary school, more rules can help teach discipline and respect, but in high school, students benefit from more freedom to develop independence.

Gợi ý: Your answer is good but contains some awkward expressions and minor grammar mistakes. Use more precise vocabulary and correct word forms to sound natural.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe all my teachers are dedicated. It's inspiring to study with them because their patience motivates me to learn more.

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and relevant but could be improved by using linking words to connect ideas and by making sentences more concise.

Ví dụ: Honestly, I think our school has the perfect balance of rules; we have enough free time to pursue our interests while maintaining discipline.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to organize your ideas clearly, use correct grammar, and avoid awkward phrasing.

Ví dụ: Fortunately, I have never had a very strict teacher. I find it easier to learn when teachers are friendly and approachable.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but could be clearer and more concise. Avoid unnecessary phrases and clarify your comparison between the two types of schools.

Ví dụ: I don't want to be a teacher, but if I had to choose, I would prefer a regular school with rules because discipline helps students stay focused.

× Yeah, of course, as any school might also have, its rules is wearing uniform or being on time and not skipping classes.

✓ Yeah, of course, as any school might also have, its rules are wearing uniform, being on time, and not skipping classes.

The subject 'rules' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number. Also, the list of rules should be separated properly with commas and conjunctions for clarity.

× It depends. In primary school I guess so because students need to be taught discipline and how to listen to others, while in high school students who have more freedom.

✓ It depends. In primary school, I guess so because students need to be taught discipline and how to listen to others, while in high school, students have more freedom.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb in the second clause. Adding 'have' after 'students' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× I think in my school all teachers are dedicated and it's really cool when you have an opportunity to study with such people because you can see the patient behind their eyes and you want to learn more.

✓ I think in my school all teachers are dedicated and it's really cool when you have an opportunity to study with such people because you can see the patience behind their eyes and you want to learn more.

The word 'patient' is an adjective or noun meaning someone who receives medical care. The correct noun here is 'patience', which means the ability to wait calmly or endure difficulties.

× Honestly, I think that we have the perfect amount of rules at school because we have a lot of free time that we can dedicate to things that we like to do, but at the same time we stick to the discipline.

✓ Honestly, I think that we have the perfect amount of rules at school because we have a lot of free time that we can dedicate to things we like to do, but at the same time we stick to discipline.

The phrase 'stick to the discipline' is incorrect; 'discipline' is an uncountable noun here and does not need 'the'. Also, 'things that we like to do' can be simplified to 'things we like to do' for smoother flow.

× Fortunately now all my teachers since primary school were great and I'm really grateful for that because As for me it is much easier to learn information with not strict teacher but we were friendly type.

✓ Fortunately, all my teachers since primary school have been great and I'm really grateful for that because, as for me, it is much easier to learn information with a not strict teacher, but we were the friendly type.

The sentence has several issues: 'were' should be 'have been' to indicate experience up to now; 'As' should be lowercase and set off by commas; 'not strict teacher' needs an article 'a'; and 'we were friendly type' needs 'the' before 'friendly type' to specify the kind.

× But if I had to choose between rule 3 school and general school, I would choose general because the discipline there is better and students are more focused.

✓ But if I had to choose between a rule-free school and a general school, I would choose the general one because the discipline there is better and students are more focused.

The phrase 'rule 3 school' is unclear and likely a typo for 'rule-free school'. Also, articles 'a' and 'the' are needed before 'rule-free school' and 'general school' to specify the choices properly.