Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo
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Part 1
Giám khảo
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Thí sinh
I guess in my country depends from university to university. For example, in some of them it is undoubted that a student should attend all the lectures and seminars. However, in my university in my PT, it is not uh like this.
Giám khảo
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Thí sinh
I don't think that if a student have less flexibility, he or she will be more encouraged in getting knowledge. So I only think that drawbacks will dominate will outweigh the positives.
Giám khảo
Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?
Thí sinh
Yes, I had a really good teacher who dedicated a lot of his free time for us as a student. He teached us programming languages and structures. On the first year of our bachelor degree, he spent nights with us. Really.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?
Thí sinh
I think that balance is the key to success. So they should be no, umm, no more rules that we really need. For example, it will not enforce students to gain more knowledge at all.
Giám khảo
Have you ever had a really strict teacher?
Thí sinh
Of course, I had a very strict teacher when I was a child. Uh, she was our English teacher in my first school. She taught us from uh, 5th to 7th year of school. And uh, she was so strict, she asked us to learn pages of English text.
Giám khảo
Would you like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school?
Thí sinh
Actually, I did something like this. I took part in the teaching, uh, mathematics, advanced mathematics, uh, in particular in the school which is, uh, remote. I personally, uh, finished that school about 7 years ago and now I return to the mentor and really no rules exist there. And it is.
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Part 1
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: Ваш ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткую структуру. Следует использовать более точные выражения и избегать слов-паразитов, чтобы ответ звучал естественно и понятно.
Ví dụ: In my country, rules vary between universities. For instance, some require students to attend all lectures and seminars. However, at my university, attendance is not strictly enforced.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и повторения. Рекомендуется строить предложения более чётко и использовать связующие слова для логичности.
Ví dụ: I don't believe that having more rules helps students learn better. In fact, less flexibility might discourage them, so the disadvantages outweigh the benefits.
Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: В ответе есть ошибки в грамматике и словообразовании. Следует использовать правильные формы глаголов и более связные предложения.
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a dedicated teacher who spent a lot of his free time helping us. He taught programming languages and data structures. During our first year, he often stayed late to support us.
Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: Ответ содержит неуверенные выражения и повторения. Рекомендуется формулировать мысли чётко и использовать связующие слова для плавности речи.
Ví dụ: I believe balance is important. Therefore, schools should have only necessary rules because extra rules do not motivate students to learn more.
Have you ever had a really strict teacher?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: В ответе много слов-паразитов и повторений. Следует избегать их и строить предложения более связно и естественно.
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a very strict English teacher during my primary school years. She required us to memorize many pages of English text, which was quite challenging.
Would you like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Ответ содержит много пауз и неоконченных мыслей. Рекомендуется говорить более связно, избегать повторов и использовать полные предложения.
Ví dụ: Actually, I have experience teaching advanced mathematics at a remote school I graduated from seven years ago. There were almost no rules, which made the environment very flexible.
Ngữ pháp
× I guess in my country depends from university to university.
✓ I guess in my country it depends on university to university.
The correct preposition to use with 'depends' in this context is 'on', not 'from'. The phrase should be 'depends on university to university' to indicate variation between universities.
× He teached us programming languages and structures.
✓ He taught us programming languages and structures.
The past tense of 'teach' is 'taught', not 'teached'. Using the correct past tense form is necessary for grammatical accuracy.
× I don't think that if a student have less flexibility, he or she will be more encouraged in getting knowledge.
✓ I don't think that if a student has less flexibility, he or she will be more encouraged in getting knowledge.
The subject 'a student' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' instead of 'have' to agree in number.
× I had a really good teacher who dedicated a lot of his free time for us as a student.
✓ I had a really good teacher who dedicated a lot of his free time to us as students.
The preposition 'for' should be 'to' when indicating the recipient of dedication. Also, 'student' should be plural 'students' because it refers to multiple people including the speaker.
× He dedicated a lot of his free time for us as a student.
✓ He dedicated a lot of his free time to us as students.
The correct preposition after 'dedicated' is 'to', not 'for'. Also, 'students' should be plural to match the group.
× I personally, uh, finished that school about 7 years ago and now I return to the mentor and really no rules exist there.
✓ I personally finished that school about 7 years ago and now I return as a mentor and really no rules exist there.
The phrase 'return to the mentor' is incorrect; it should be 'return as a mentor' to indicate the role the speaker has now.
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