Part 1
Giám khảo
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Thí sinh
Yeah, of course there are many rules. At my school, for example, you are not allowed to wear any hats inside of the school building and you are not allowed to smoke in the classroom.
Giám khảo
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Thí sinh
Yeah, of course I think some of the rules will help the students to study in a safe and respectful environment, but it doesn't mean the more the better. Yeah, if some the the students also want want.
Giám khảo
Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?
Thí sinh
Unfortunately, I didn't have a really dedicated teacher. Sometimes they are even late for their classes and they just want to finish their job. They don't think about that. Different students are at different levels need.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?
Thí sinh
In my opinion I think the students should have less rules at school because then all students will get more self-discipline and it will also create a good study environment for the students brain to develop.
Giám khảo
Have you ever had a really strict teacher?
Thí sinh
Umm, I have never had a really strict teacher. Maybe it's because I always doing very well with all my subjects. Only one teacher was stricter than others. He uh, he asked me to get punishment.
Giám khảo
Would you like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school?
Thí sinh
Yeah, absolutely. I would like to work as a teacher in a real free school because my personality is that kind of person. I dislike all the rules. I prefer people to have their own character characteristics and use their imagination and motivation at most.
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: Förbättra svaret genom att göra det mer naturligt och effektivt. Undvik upprepningar och använd mer varierat ordförråd. Ge också en tydligare struktur med en huvudmening följt av specifika exempel.
Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For instance, students are prohibited from wearing hats inside the building and smoking is strictly forbidden in classrooms.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Förbättra svaret genom att undvika upprepningar och otydligheter. Strukturera svaret tydligare med en huvudidé och förklara den med specifika skäl eller exempel. Använd sammanbindande ord för bättre flyt.
Ví dụ: I believe that some rules are necessary to maintain a safe and respectful environment, but having too many can be counterproductive because it may restrict students' freedom and creativity.
Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: Förbättra svaret genom att göra det mer sammanhängande och grammatiskt korrekt. Använd tydliga meningar och ge specifika exempel för att stödja din åsikt. Undvik oklara uttryck och upprepningar.
Ví dụ: Unfortunately, I have not had a very dedicated teacher. Some teachers were often late and seemed more focused on finishing their work than helping students, even though students have different learning needs.
Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: Förbättra svaret genom att använda mer naturligt språk och förklara dina idéer tydligare. Använd kopplingsord för att göra svaret mer sammanhängande och ge konkreta exempel.
Ví dụ: I prefer fewer rules at school because it encourages students to develop self-discipline. This freedom can create a positive learning environment that supports students' mental growth.
Have you ever had a really strict teacher?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Förbättra svaret genom att undvika tvekande ord och grammatiska fel. Ge en tydligare och mer detaljerad beskrivning av din erfarenhet med en strikt lärare.
Ví dụ: I have never had a very strict teacher, possibly because I perform well in my subjects. However, one teacher was stricter than the others and once asked me to accept a punishment for a mistake.
Would you like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Förbättra svaret genom att använda mer formellt och naturligt språk. Strukturera svaret med en tydlig huvudidé och stödjande detaljer. Undvik upprepningar och otydliga uttryck.
Ví dụ: Yes, I would love to work in a school without strict rules because I value individuality. I believe that allowing students to express their personalities and use their creativity and motivation leads to better learning outcomes.
× Maybe it's because I always doing very well with all my subjects.
✓ Maybe it's because I am always doing very well with all my subjects.
The sentence is missing the auxiliary verb 'am' before the present participle 'doing'. In English, the present continuous tense requires the verb 'to be' plus the '-ing' form of the main verb. The correct form is 'I am doing'.
× Yeah, if some the the students also want want.
✓ Yeah, if some of the students also want to.
The phrase 'some the the students' contains repeated words and lacks the preposition 'of' which is necessary when using 'some' with a plural noun. Also, the verb 'want' is repeated unnecessarily. The corrected phrase is 'some of the students also want to'.
× Different students are at different levels need.
✓ Different students are at different levels of need.
The original sentence lacks the preposition 'of' to connect 'levels' and 'need'. The phrase 'levels need' is incorrect; it should be 'levels of need' to express varying degrees of necessity or ability among students.