Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在较多语气词和重复，影响流畅性。建议减少填充词，句子结构应更清晰，避免语法错误，如“schools don't allow us to eat when the class begins”应为“students are not allowed to eat during class”。

Ví dụ: Yes, there are many rules at my school. For example, students are not allowed to eat during class, and everyone must wear the school uniform.

Gợi ý: 回答中语气词较多，表达不够连贯。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并且表达更具体明确。

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe students would benefit from more rules because they are not adults yet. Rules help them behave properly and develop good discipline.

Gợi ý: 回答表达基本清楚，但句子未完整结束，且有重复。建议避免重复，句子完整且流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a very dedicated Chinese teacher in high school. He always spent his free time helping us and answering our questions to improve our skills.

Gợi ý: 回答中断句不当，语法错误较多。建议注意句子结构，避免断句错误，使用正确的语法表达观点。

Ví dụ: I prefer more rules at school because students' self-discipline is not strong yet. Rules help regulate their behavior.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“barely didn't allowed”不合适。建议使用正确时态和表达，避免双重否定。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a very strict math teacher in high school. He did not allow us to repeat the same mistakes and punished us strictly to help us remember.

Gợi ý: 回答中有重复和表达不够简洁的问题。建议避免重复，使用连贯的句子表达观点。

Ví dụ: I would not like to work in a rule-free school because students would likely behave badly and lack self-discipline, making teaching very difficult.

× For example, schools uh, uh, don't allow us to eat when the class begins and also with students need to wear the uniforms.

✓ For example, schools don't allow us to eat when the class begins, and students also need to wear the uniforms.

原句中“and also with students need to wear the uniforms”连接不当，导致句子结构混乱。应使用正确的连词“and”连接两个并列句，去掉多余的“with”。

× I would believe yes, students would benefit more because I think students, umm, are not adults.

✓ I believe yes, students would benefit more because I think students are not adults.

“I would believe yes”中“would”使用不当，表达确定态度时应使用一般现在时“believe”。

× He is my Chinese teacher and he spends he always spends his leisure time to teach us and answer our questions to make us more capable and.

✓ He is my Chinese teacher and he always spends his leisure time teaching us and answering our questions to make us more capable.

“spends his leisure time to teach”中介词使用错误，正确表达应为“spends time doing something”，即动名词形式。

× I prefer to have more rules at school. I mean that students. Self-discipline are still not well established so they need to rely on this rules to regulate them and let them behave themselves so.

✓ I prefer to have more rules at school. I mean that students' self-discipline is still not well established, so they need to rely on these rules to regulate themselves and behave properly.

“this rules”中“this”与复数名词“rules”不匹配，应使用“these”。另外，“students. Self-discipline”断句错误，应合并为“students' self-discipline”。

× Yes I do uh had a very strict teacher in my high school.

✓ Yes, I did have a very strict teacher in my high school.

“do had”时态混用错误，过去时应使用“did have”。

× he barely didn't allowed us to make the same mistake again.

✓ He barely allowed us to make the same mistake again.

“didn't allowed”中“allowed”应为动词原形“allow”，且“barely didn't allowed”表达矛盾，应改为“barely allowed”。

× And if we made the mistake again he will strictly punish us.

✓ And if we make the mistake again, he will strictly punish us.

条件句中表示将来结果的从句应使用一般现在时，“if we made”应改为“if we make”。

× I would not like to work as a teacher in a rule free school.

✓ I would not like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school.

“rule free”作为复合形容词修饰名词时，应使用连字符连接，变为“rule-free”。

× I suppose this rule free school students will behave very badly and behave and lack of self-discipline and the discipline is really bad.

✓ I suppose the students in this rule-free school will behave very badly and lack self-discipline; the discipline is really bad.

“this rule free school students”表达不清，应改为“the students in this rule-free school”。另外，“lack of self-discipline”中“lack”后不加“of”。

× So being the teacher in the school is very difficult.

✓ So being a teacher in the school is very difficult.

“being the teacher”暗示特指某个老师，语境应为泛指，故用不定冠词“a teacher”。