Part 1
Giám khảo
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Thí sinh
There are many rules in my school for the students. For example, students must wear school uniform during school hours and I think these rules play a significant role in ruling students behavior and prism.
Giám khảo
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Thí sinh
Yes I do. I think this this rules are beneficial for students because this rules can create a positive learning environment and ask students to be more disciplined. Also sometimes they can also avoid some dangers like. Banning students to fight.
Giám khảo
Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have. My Senior High School teacher was really dedicated. She was really disciplined about time management, for example, she said. Strict rule about punctuality, which helped me picked up.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?
Thí sinh
I prefer have more rules at school because I think this rules at school play an important role in regulating our behaviors and sometimes this can help us be more.
Giám khảo
Have you ever had a really strict teacher?
Thí sinh
Yes I have. My Senior High School teacher was really strict, especially about the time management. For example, she set strict rules about punctuality that she even didn't allowed us to be late one minute.
Giám khảo
Would you like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school?
Thí sinh
To be honest, I would not like to work as a teacher in the Roof Free school because I think having some rules is necessary because these rules can create a positive learning environment and help students to be more disciplined and protect them.
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当,如“ruling students behavior and prism”表达不清晰,建议使用更准确的表达方式,并注意句子结构的完整性。回答应更自然流畅,避免冗余。
Ví dụ: There are many rules at my school. For example, students must wear a school uniform during school hours. I believe these rules help maintain discipline and create a good learning environment.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在重复词汇和语法错误,如“this this rules”,句子不连贯,且表达不够具体。建议使用连词使句子更流畅,并提供更具体的例子。
Ví dụ: Yes, I believe more rules can benefit students because they help create a positive learning environment and encourage discipline. For instance, rules that prevent fighting can keep students safe.
Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,如“she said. Strict rule about punctuality”不完整且不连贯,且“helped me picked up”用法错误。建议改进句子结构,使用连贯的表达,并注意时态和动词形式。
Ví dụ: Yes, I have. My senior high school teacher was very dedicated. She was strict about time management and had a strict rule about punctuality, which helped me improve my habits.
Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整,句子末尾缺少内容,且存在语法错误,如“prefer have”应为“prefer to have”,“this rules”应为“these rules”。建议完整表达观点,注意语法和句子完整性。
Ví dụ: I prefer to have more rules at school because I think these rules help regulate our behavior and sometimes help us become more responsible.
Have you ever had a really strict teacher?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,如“didn't allowed”应为“didn't allow”,句子结构不够自然。建议使用更准确的时态和表达方式,使句子更流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, I have. My senior high school teacher was very strict, especially about time management. For example, she set strict rules about punctuality and did not allow us to be even one minute late.
Would you like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中有拼写错误,如“Roof Free”应为“rule-free”,句子较长且重复“because”,建议简化句子结构,避免重复,并注意拼写。
Ví dụ: To be honest, I would not like to work in a rule-free school because I believe rules are necessary. They help create a positive learning environment, keep students disciplined, and protect them.
× I think these rules play a significant role in ruling students behavior and prism.
✓ I think these rules play a significant role in regulating students' behavior and prism.
这里应该使用动词的现在分词形式“regulating”来表示“调节”,而不是“ruling”。另外,students后面需要加所有格符号“'”表示“学生的行为”。
× I think this this rules are beneficial for students because this rules can create a positive learning environment and ask students to be more disciplined.
✓ I think these rules are beneficial for students because these rules can create a positive learning environment and ask students to be more disciplined.
“this rules”中“rules”是复数,应该用复数指示代词“these”而不是单数“this”。
× She was really disciplined about time management, for example, she said. Strict rule about punctuality, which helped me picked up.
✓ She was really disciplined about time management, for example, she set strict rules about punctuality, which helped me pick up.
“said”应改为“set”表示“制定规则”,且“helped me picked up”中“picked”应为动词原形“pick”,因为“help”后接动词原形。
× I prefer have more rules at school because I think this rules at school play an important role in regulating our behaviors and sometimes this can help us be more.
✓ I prefer to have more rules at school because I think these rules at school play an important role in regulating our behaviors and sometimes this can help us be better.
“this rules”应改为复数指示代词“these rules”,且“prefer have”应为“prefer to have”,最后“be more”不完整,应改为“be better”。
× she set strict rules about punctuality that she even didn't allowed us to be late one minute.
✓ she set strict rules about punctuality that she didn't even allow us to be late one minute.
“didn't allowed”中“allowed”应为动词原形“allow”,因为助动词“did”后动词用原形。
× I would not like to work as a teacher in the Roof Free school because I think having some rules is necessary because these rules can create a positive learning environment and help students to be more disciplined and protect them.
✓ I would not like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school because I think having some rules is necessary because these rules can create a positive learning environment and help students to be more disciplined and protect them.
“Roof Free school”应为“rule-free school”,这是拼写错误,不属于语法错误,但需纠正。