Part 1
Giám khảo
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Thí sinh
Of course, there are many rules. In my university, for example, we must go to dietary before 10:00.
Giám khảo
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Thí sinh
I think it depends on the situation that time. For example if we go out for trip then we go to the school so late.
Giám khảo
Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?
Thí sinh
Yes, she is my math teacher she usually go to the school at 7:00 then she.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?
Thí sinh
Having more rules can better to manage ups at school, but actually I don't like too much rules because I like freedom.
Giám khảo
Have you ever had a really strict teacher?
Thí sinh
No, all of my teacher are kindness. They are very. Lovely and motivated.
Giám khảo
Would you like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school?
Thí sinh
Actually, no. I think it is difficult to manage the students in a rue free school because we don't have some moral to teach them.
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题,例如“go to dietary”应为“go to the dining hall”。建议使用更准确的词汇,并且回答可以更完整一些。
Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules at my university. For example, students must arrive at the dining hall before 10:00 to have breakfast.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答语法和表达不清晰,缺少连贯性。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅,并且明确表达观点。
Ví dụ: I think it depends on the situation. For instance, if we go on a trip, we might return to school late, so more flexible rules could be beneficial.
Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且语法错误较多,缺少细节和连贯性。建议补充完整句子,使用正确时态,并提供更多细节。
Ví dụ: Yes, my math teacher is very dedicated. She usually arrives at school at 7:00 a.m. to prepare lessons and help students.
Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 表达不够自然,存在语法错误,如“better to manage ups”应为“better manage things”。建议简化句子结构,表达清晰。
Ví dụ: I think having more rules can help manage the school better, but I prefer fewer rules because I value my freedom.
Have you ever had a really strict teacher?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 语法错误明显,如“teacher are kindness”应为“teachers are kind”。句子不连贯,建议使用完整句子并注意主谓一致。
Ví dụ: No, I have never had a really strict teacher. All my teachers are kind, lovely, and motivated.
Would you like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 存在拼写错误“rue”应为“rule”,表达不够准确。建议使用更准确的词汇,并且句子结构更清晰。
Ví dụ: Actually, no. I think it would be difficult to manage students in a rule-free school because there would be no moral guidelines to teach them.
× In my university, for example, we must go to dietary before 10:00.
✓ In my university, for example, we must go to the dining hall before 10:00.
这里'dietary'用词不当,应使用'dining hall'表示食堂。虽然不属于语法错误,但为了表达准确需要更正。
× I think it depends on the situation that time.
✓ I think it depends on the situation at that time.
句子中'that time'前缺少介词'at',导致句子结构不完整。应加上介词使表达完整。
× For example if we go out for trip then we go to the school so late.
✓ For example, if we go out for a trip, then we go to school very late.
缺少冠词'a'在'for trip'前,且'so late'应改为'very late'更符合习惯表达。句子中缺少逗号分隔条件状语。
× Yes, she is my math teacher she usually go to the school at 7:00 then she.
✓ Yes, she is my math teacher. She usually goes to school at 7:00.
主语是第三人称单数,谓语动词go应加-s变为goes。句子缺少标点符号,导致表达不清。
× Having more rules can better to manage ups at school, but actually I don't like too much rules because I like freedom.
✓ Having more rules can better manage things at school, but actually I don't like too many rules because I like freedom.
'too much rules'中'rules'是可数名词,应使用'too many'。'to manage ups'表达不清,改为'manage things'更合适。
× No, all of my teacher are kindness.
✓ No, all of my teachers are kind.
'teacher'应为复数'teachers','kindness'是名词,需用形容词'kind'来描述老师的性格。
× They are very. Lovely and motivated.
✓ They are very lovely and motivated.
句中'Very.'后有不必要的句号,导致句子断裂,应去掉句号使句子连贯。
× Actually, no. I think it is difficult to manage the students in a rue free school because we don't have some moral to teach them.
✓ Actually, no. I think it is difficult to manage the students in a rule-free school because we don't have morals to teach them.
'rue free'拼写错误,应为'rule-free'。'some moral'用法不当,'moral'应复数'morals'表示道德规范。