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Part 1

Giám khảo

Are there any rules for students at your school?

Thí sinh

Yes, there are so many terrible and awful rules in my school and I can't stand it. These rules are uncomfortable for me and I hate them. I want to kill these Rose.

Giám khảo

Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?

Thí sinh

No, I don't think so. Uh be uh, because the rules, umm will control students and kill their mind and uh, stop of the development. So I don't uh, it's useless.

Giám khảo

Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?

Thí sinh

Yes, he is my aunt teacher and he's so, uh, he has enough patience to teach me and uh, often in covered with me and uh, I felt so comfortable and happy.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?

Thí sinh

Sure, that is fewer rules because the favorites can improve ourself and give our some free time and we can take a break, yes?

Giám khảo

Have you ever had a really strict teacher?

Thí sinh

Yes, he's a math teacher and he always angry and I don't like him uh, because he's so strict.

Giám khảo

Would you like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school?

Thí sinh

Yes, sure. No any rules, no any controls. And I feel it's so good and comfortable and fit me and I feel it's so relaxed.

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Part 1

Are there any rules for students at your school?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 回答中表达了强烈的情绪,但用词不当且有语法错误,且内容重复,缺乏具体细节。建议使用更自然、礼貌的表达,避免情绪化词汇,并提供具体的规则例子。

Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules at my school, such as dress code and attendance policies. Some of them feel a bit strict, but I understand they are meant to maintain order.

Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?

Điểm: 35.0

Gợi ý: 回答中有许多语气词和语法错误,表达不够清晰。建议减少语气词,使用连贯的句子,并具体说明规则如何影响学生发展。

Ví dụ: No, I don't think more rules would help. Too many rules can limit students' creativity and freedom, which are important for their growth.

Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和不自然的表达,且缺乏具体细节。建议改进语法,减少语气词,并具体描述老师的行为。

Ví dụ: Yes, my aunt is a dedicated teacher. She is very patient and always takes time to explain difficult topics, which made me feel comfortable and motivated.

Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 回答语法错误较多,表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子,明确表达观点,并具体说明少规则带来的好处。

Ví dụ: I prefer fewer rules because it allows students to have more free time and relax, which helps improve our overall well-being.

Have you ever had a really strict teacher?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误和语气词较多,表达不够自然。建议使用更准确的时态和形容词,并具体说明老师严格的表现。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a math teacher who was very strict and often raised his voice, which made the class quite stressful.

Would you like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误和重复表达较多,缺乏具体理由。建议使用连贯句子,具体说明无规则学校的优点。

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to work in a school without strict rules because it would create a relaxed environment where both teachers and students feel comfortable.

Ngữ pháp

Singular and plural issue

× I want to kill these Rose.

I want to kill these rules.

这里的名词“Rose”应为复数形式“rules”,因为前文提到的是“rules”,且句中指代多个规则。单复数错误导致句意不清。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× and uh, often in covered with me

and uh, often covered me

短语“in covered with me”是不正确的搭配,应去掉介词“in”和“with”,直接用“covered me”表示“经常关心我”。

Singular and plural issue

× that is fewer rules because the favorites can improve ourself and give our some free time

that is fewer rules because the favorites can improve ourselves and give us some free time

“ourself”应为复数反身代词“ourselves”,“our”应为宾格代词“us”,以匹配复数主语和宾语。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× and give our some free time

and give us some free time

“our”是形容词性物主代词,不能用作宾语,正确用法是宾格代词“us”。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× he always angry

he is always angry

“angry”是形容词,需用系动词“is”连接主语和表语,表示状态。

Incorrect use of quantifiers

× No any rules, no any controls.

No rules, no controls.

“No any”是错误的双重否定表达,应去掉“any”,直接用“No rules”表示否定。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

AngryIrate; Heated; Lose one's temper
ComfortablePleasant; Cozy; Loose; Leisurely
FitSuitable; Healthy; Equip; Join; Match
FreeWithout charge; Unencumbered by; Vacant; Independent; On the loose
GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
HappyCheerful; Glad; Fortunate
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
TerribleDreadful; Repulsive; Severe; Unkind
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