Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer more fluent and natural by reducing filler words like 'uh' and 'um'. Also, use correct grammar and sentence structure, for example, 'the school has implemented some strict rules' and 'students must wear a uniform'. Avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. The school has implemented some strict rules. Firstly, students must wear a uniform to school. Secondly, students are not allowed to talk during class to maintain focus.

Gợi ý: Focus on clear and grammatically correct sentences. Use linking words like 'because' or 'therefore' to connect ideas logically. Provide specific reasons and avoid incomplete sentences. For example, explain how rules help students concentrate and improve their grades.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think students benefit from having rules because they help maintain order in class. For example, not allowing talking during lessons helps students stay focused, which can lead to better academic performance and higher test scores.

Gợi ý: Try to use more precise vocabulary and avoid filler words. Use correct expressions like 'put their heart and soul into teaching'. Also, structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have had many dedicated teachers who put their heart and soul into teaching. They spend a lot of time preparing lessons to help students understand the material better.

Gợi ý: Work on clarity and grammar. Avoid filler words and incomplete thoughts. Explain your opinion clearly with reasons and examples. For instance, say 'I prefer fewer rules because students can feel more comfortable and focus better on their studies.'

Ví dụ: I prefer having fewer rules at school because it allows students to feel more comfortable and relaxed. This helps them concentrate better and perform well in their tasks.

Gợi ý: Improve sentence structure and grammar. Use past tense consistently and avoid filler words. Provide specific details about the teacher's strictness and how it affected you.

Ví dụ: Yes, when I was in grade 11, my math teacher was very strict. He had many rules in his classroom, which made my friends and me feel scared and worried during math lessons.

Gợi ý: Make your answer more fluent and grammatically correct. Use linking words to explain your opinion clearly. For example, 'I wouldn't because rules help maintain discipline and respect in school.'

Ví dụ: No, I wouldn't like to work in a rule-free school because having some rules helps keep students calm and ensures they listen and respect their teachers.

× Uh firstly, uh student, uh must wear a uniform to school uh.

✓ Uh firstly, uh students, uh must wear a uniform to school uh.

The noun 'student' should be plural 'students' because the sentence refers to all students in general, not just one. Using the plural form matches the context of school rules applying to multiple students.

× Second, uh student don't talk uh to in class when uh studying, I think to.

✓ Second, uh students don't talk uh in class when uh studying, I think so.

The noun 'student' should be plural 'students' to refer to all students. Also, 'don't' is correct for plural subjects. The phrase 'talk to in class' is incorrect; it should be 'talk in class'. The phrase 'I think to' is incorrect and should be 'I think so'.

× Well, in my opinion, a student don't allow to talk in class, uh, that helps students stay focused and organized in class.

✓ Well, in my opinion, students aren't allowed to talk in class, uh, that helps students stay focused and organized in class.

The phrase 'a student don't allow' is incorrect. 'A student' is singular, so 'don't' should be 'doesn't', but the sentence is better expressed in passive voice: 'students aren't allowed'. This correctly conveys the rule applying to all students.

× I have seen many teacher, umm, who spend all the time to teach, uh, their students and, and they put uh, all the, their soul and their role, their hurt in uh, their lessons and make students, uh, understand the lesson more.

✓ I have seen many teachers, umm, who spend all the time to teach, uh, their students and, and they put uh, all their soul and their heart in uh, their lessons and make students, uh, understand the lesson more.

The noun 'teacher' should be plural 'teachers' because 'many' refers to more than one. Also, 'role' and 'hurt' are incorrect words here; the correct words are 'heart' and 'soul'.

× Actually, I prefer uh, having fewer rules at school. Uh, this is because, umm, students maybe have umm, comfortable uh, day or clap when studying.

✓ Actually, I prefer uh, having fewer rules at school. Uh, this is because, umm, students maybe have umm, a comfortable uh, day or class when studying.

The word 'clap' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'class'. Also, 'students maybe have' is awkward; 'students may have' is better but not a grammar problem listed here.

× Well, definitely, as you can remember when I was in grade 11, uh, my math teacher is really strict and uh, he have made has many uh, rules in back his class.

✓ Well, definitely, as you can remember when I was in grade 11, uh, my math teacher was really strict and uh, he has made many uh, rules in his class.

The verb 'have' should be 'has' to agree with the singular subject 'he'. Also, 'has many' is correct, but 'have made has many' is incorrect and redundant. The phrase 'in back his class' is incorrect; it should be 'in his class'.

× No I wouldn't. I think a school should have a few rules uh, to to uh, keep student calm and uh student uh must listen and umm be respect to teacher.

✓ No, I wouldn't. I think a school should have a few rules uh, to keep students calm and uh students uh must listen and umm be respectful to teachers.

The modal verb 'should' is used correctly. However, 'student' should be plural 'students' to match the context. Also, 'be respect' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'be respectful'. 'Teacher' should be plural 'teachers' to generalize.