Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors, which affects naturalness and effectiveness. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, use correct vocabulary, and avoid redundancy. For example, clearly state the main rule and explain the consequence with linking words.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For instance, students must attend all their classes, and if they skip too many, they will be punished by their teachers.

Gợi ý: Your answer is vague and lacks coherence. Use linking words to organize your ideas and provide specific reasons or examples. Also, avoid filler words and speak more confidently.

Ví dụ: I think it depends on the type of rules. If the rules help students learn better, they can be beneficial. However, too many rules might only serve the interests of teachers or administrators, which may not help students.

Gợi ý: Your answer shows the main idea but is unclear due to grammar and vocabulary mistakes. Use simple, correct sentences and provide specific examples to support your answer.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a teacher who was very dedicated. She always prepared extra materials and spent time helping students after class, which really motivated us to learn.

Gợi ý: Your answer expresses your opinion but is unclear and contains grammar errors. Use a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons, using linking words to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: I prefer fewer rules at school because it allows me to focus more on practical skills. This way, I can better prepare for life after graduation.

Gợi ý: Your answer is confusing and contains many errors. Try to clearly state your experience with strict teachers and explain how their strictness affected you or others, using linking words for clarity.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have had some strict teachers, especially when grading assignments. Their strictness helped students take their work more seriously.

Gợi ý: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Provide a clear opinion with reasons and examples, using linking words to organize your response and avoid hesitation sounds.

Ví dụ: No, I would not like to work in a rule-free school because without rules, it would be difficult to maintain discipline and control over students.

× Uh, my basic guru is doing all ski cross data you should take and they will if you skip many crosses and uh, you will get punished from your teacher.

✓ Uh, my basic guru is doing all ski cross data you should take and they will if you skip many classes and uh, you will get punished by your teacher.

The word 'crosses' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'classes' to refer to school sessions. Also, the phrase 'punished from your teacher' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'by' to indicate the agent performing the action.

× Uh, my basic guru is doing all ski cross data you should take and they will if you skip many crosses and uh, you will get punished from your teacher.

✓ Uh, my basic guru is doing all ski cross data you should take and they will if you skip many classes and uh, you will get punished by your teacher.

The preposition 'from' is incorrectly used with 'punished'; the correct preposition is 'by' to indicate who is administering the punishment.

× It depends on the rules, uh, benefiting to students or not many rules, they're benefiting to managers, teachers or administration traders and uh, you know it hard to say.

✓ It depends on the rules, uh, whether they benefit students or not. Many rules benefit managers, teachers, or administration staff, and uh, you know, it's hard to say.

The pronoun 'they' was missing to refer to 'rules', and 'benefiting to' is incorrect; the correct form is 'benefit' without 'to'. Also, 'administration traders' is likely a misphrasing; 'administration staff' is more appropriate.

× Yes, I used to have our a mini teacher who's who are very dedicated to their UH students and the work and they pull a lot of UH pension to their work and uh, they help a lot of UH students as well.

✓ Yes, I used to have a teacher who was very dedicated to their students and their work. They put a lot of passion into their work and uh, they help a lot of students as well.

The sentence had unclear pronouns and unnecessary words like 'our a mini' and 'who's who are'. 'Pull a lot of UH pension' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'put a lot of passion'. Also, 'UH' seems unnecessary or unclear and was removed for clarity.

× I prefer to have less rules so that I can spend more time on preparing A practical stuff instead of like uh, they required by only school so that I can just better to face uh after I graduate from school.

✓ I prefer to have fewer rules so that I can spend more time preparing practical stuff instead of just what is required by the school so that I can better face challenges after I graduate from school.

'Less rules' is incorrect; 'fewer rules' is used for countable nouns like 'rules'. 'Preparing A practical stuff' is incorrect; 'practical stuff' is uncountable and does not need 'A'. The sentence was restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, uh, there are few of uh teachers who are very restricted and that they are restricted on scoring to their student, especially about the assignment. So it's also how helpful for taking serious.

✓ Yes, uh, there are a few teachers who are very strict and they are strict when scoring their students, especially regarding assignments. So it's also helpful for taking things seriously.

'Restricted' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'strict'. 'Restricted on scoring to their student' is incorrect; it should be 'strict when scoring their students'. The last sentence was unclear and corrected for meaning and grammar.

× Uh, no. Firstly, roof you ruse free school can, uh, bring some disadvantage. For example, uh, lose the control to the student and uh, so.

✓ Uh, no. Firstly, a rule-free school can, uh, bring some disadvantages. For example, it can lose control over the students and, uh, so on.

'Roof you ruse free school' is a mishearing or typo; it should be 'rule-free school'. 'Bring some disadvantage' should be plural 'disadvantages'. 'Lose the control to the student' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'lose control over the students'. The sentence was completed for clarity.