Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo
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Part 1
Giám khảo
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Thí sinh
While currently I'm not in a school anymore, I just recently completed my university. But when I was in my school years there were some very strict rules relating to dress code and the amount of breaks you can take or the amount of time those breaks can last. So there were definitely some very strict rules.
Giám khảo
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Thí sinh
Yes, I personally believe that rules are crucial for students, especially during their school years, but they there should only be rules where there are necessary. Everything shouldn't be governed by rules. So I believe rules relating to a dress code or the number of breaks you can take or the way you should be talking to your peers are all extremely important rules that a school needs to have.
Giám khảo
Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?
Thí sinh
Yes, during my school years, I've had numerous teachers who were extremely dedicated to their work. One teacher that I can think of was Miss Shella. She used to teach me when I was in playgroup. She was extremely kind. She was, uh, very graceful and the way she spoke to me was very soft. And thus I still remember her too.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?
Thí sinh
I think it depends at some places. In some areas, rules are necessary. For example, rules relating to dress code, or rules relating to the number of breaks you can take, or rules relating to how you should be communicating to your teachers or your peers. But a lot of rules can make it extremely overwhelming.
Giám khảo
Have you ever had a really strict teacher?
Thí sinh
Yes, my Urdu teacher during my A levels was very strict with us, but as I'm growing older, I understand her point of view. Uh, she had very strict ideas about certain things in life and I feel like in our society, the way she was thinking was very relevant and we should have listened to her. I, I feel like she was, uh, definitely right.
Giám khảo
Would you like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school?
Thí sinh
Well for me personally I don't think that would be the best job. I personally am a rule follower and I feel a school where there are no rules would mean that the environment would be chaotic and the students would be not very well behaved, so no.
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Part 1
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear but could be more concise and directly focused on the question. Avoid redundancy by not repeating the same idea twice. Also, try to use linking words to improve coherence and add a bit more specific detail about the rules.
Ví dụ: When I was at school, there were strict rules about the dress code and the duration and number of breaks students could take. These rules helped maintain discipline and order throughout the school day.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant and well-structured but could be improved by avoiding minor grammatical errors and using linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, try to be more specific about why certain rules are important.
Ví dụ: I believe that students benefit from having essential rules, such as those about dress code, break times, and respectful communication, because these help create a positive and orderly learning environment.
Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?
Điểm: 78.0Gợi ý: Your answer is good but could be more concise and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide more specific examples of the teacher's dedication.
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a very dedicated teacher called Miss Shella when I was in playgroup. She was kind and spoke gently, which made me feel comfortable and eager to learn. Her dedication left a lasting impression on me.
Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?
Điểm: 82.0Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and relevant but could be improved by using linking words to better connect your points and by avoiding repetition. Also, try to express your opinion more directly at the beginning.
Ví dụ: I prefer a balanced approach to school rules. While essential rules about dress code, breaks, and communication are necessary, having too many rules can be overwhelming for students.
Have you ever had a really strict teacher?
Điểm: 77.0Gợi ý: Your answer is thoughtful but could be more fluent by avoiding filler words like 'uh' and repeated words. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide more specific examples of her strictness and why you now appreciate it.
Ví dụ: Yes, my Urdu teacher during A levels was very strict, especially about discipline and respect. However, as I have grown older, I realise her strictness was important and relevant to our society, and I appreciate her approach now.
Would you like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and relevant but could be improved by avoiding repetition and using linking words to make your reasoning more coherent. Also, try to use a wider range of vocabulary to express your ideas.
Ví dụ: Personally, I wouldn't like to work in a school without rules because I believe that without clear guidelines, the environment would become chaotic and students might behave poorly.
Ngữ pháp
× Yes, I personally believe that rules are crucial for students, especially during their school years, but they there should only be rules where there are necessary.
✓ Yes, I personally believe that rules are crucial for students, especially during their school years, but there should only be rules where they are necessary.
The pronouns 'they' and 'there' were incorrectly used together causing confusion. The correct structure is 'there should only be rules where they are necessary' to properly refer to 'rules'. This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.
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