Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and redundancy. Try to make your sentences clear and concise, and avoid repeating the same idea. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically. For example, you can say: "Yes, there are several rules at my school. For instance, students cannot leave the classroom without the teacher's permission, and bringing phones or weapons is prohibited. These rules help the school management maintain discipline and prevent violations."

Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For instance, students cannot leave the classroom without the teacher's permission, and bringing phones or weapons is prohibited. These rules help the school management maintain discipline and prevent violations.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and has grammatical errors. Try to organize your ideas clearly and use linking words to explain your opinion. For example, you can say: "Yes, I believe students would benefit from having more rules because they can learn good manners. Moreover, if students follow the rules, it will be easier for the school management to maintain order."

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe students would benefit from having more rules because they can learn good manners. Moreover, if students follow the rules, it will be easier for the school management to maintain order.

Gợi ý: Your answer is confusing and contains many grammar mistakes. Try to speak clearly and organize your answer with a topic sentence and supporting details. Use correct verb tenses and pronouns. For example: "Yes, I have had many dedicated teachers who played an important role in my life. One of them was my chemistry teacher. He was very friendly and taught us not only chemistry but also good manners."

Ví dụ: Yes, I have had many dedicated teachers who played an important role in my life. One of them was my chemistry teacher. He was very friendly and taught us not only chemistry but also good manners.

Gợi ý: Your answer has some grammar errors and unclear phrases. Try to express your opinion clearly and use linking words. For example: "I prefer having more rules at school, but they should not be too strict. Strict rules can make students feel pressured, but reasonable rules encourage students to follow them willingly."

Ví dụ: I prefer having more rules at school, but they should not be too strict. Strict rules can make students feel pressured, but reasonable rules encourage students to follow them willingly.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and has grammar mistakes. Try to organize your answer with a topic sentence and supporting details, and avoid unnecessary repetition. For example: "Yes, I had a very strict teacher who taught us many things. Although she often scolded us, we remember her because she helped us learn a lot."

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a very strict teacher who taught us many things. Although she often scolded us, we remember her because she helped us learn a lot.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammar errors. Try to express your opinion clearly with correct sentence structure. For example: "Honestly, I would not like to work as a teacher in a school without rules because students might misbehave and not listen. Rules help students respect and understand teachers."

Ví dụ: Honestly, I would not like to work as a teacher in a school without rules because students might misbehave and not listen. Rules help students respect and understand teachers.

× Yes, there are many rules in school for a student.

✓ Yes, there are many rules in school for students.

The word 'student' should be plural 'students' because the rules apply to all students, not just one. Using the plural form correctly matches the context.

× Like there are rules like student cannot be get out, get out from class without the teacher permission or they can't bring any weapons or any phones in the school.

✓ For example, there are rules like students cannot leave the class without the teacher's permission, and they can't bring any weapons or phones to school.

The pronoun 'student' should be plural 'students' to agree with the context. Also, 'get out' is incorrect here; 'leave' is more appropriate. 'Teacher permission' needs possessive form 'teacher's permission'. 'Any phones in the school' should be 'phones to school' for correct preposition use.

× And it helps to manage, it helps management to manage the school.

✓ And it helps the management to manage the school.

The phrase 'helps management' needs the definite article 'the' before 'management' to specify the particular group managing the school.

× That's where they create the rules to avoid violations.

✓ That's why they create the rules to avoid violations.

The phrase 'That's where' is incorrect in this context; 'That's why' correctly explains the reason for creating rules.

× Yes, I do think that students can be benefit from more rules like they will learn etiquettes but more from student school will benefit for like if the students will follow their rules so management will manage their school students easily that's why.

✓ Yes, I do think that students can benefit from more rules because they will learn etiquettes. Also, the school will benefit if students follow the rules, so the management can manage the students easily.

The phrase 'can be benefit' is incorrect; it should be 'can benefit'. 'More from student school will benefit for like' is unclear and ungrammatical; it is corrected for clarity and grammar. 'Etiquettes' should be singular 'etiquette' or 'good manners' but kept as 'etiquettes' here for minimal change.

× Yeah, I have many really dedicated teacher because teachers had played very important role in my life.

✓ Yeah, I have many really dedicated teachers because teachers have played a very important role in my life.

The plural 'teachers' is needed to match 'many'. 'Had played' is past perfect tense, but present perfect 'have played' is more appropriate here to indicate experience up to now.

× But one of the main teacher serve a car which was a chemistry teacher.

✓ But one of the main teachers was a chemistry teacher.

'Teacher' should be plural 'teachers' because it is 'one of the main teachers'. 'Serve a car' is incorrect and removed as it is unclear.

× I will dedicate him a very good because he teaches everything like he was one of the friend.

✓ I will describe him as very good because he teaches everything and was like one of our friends.

'Dedicate him a very good' is incorrect; 'describe him as very good' is appropriate. 'One of the friend' should be 'one of our friends' for correct pronoun and plural form.

× Also he was very personal to us and have to tell us a lot of etiquettes and make her understand more and I had.

✓ Also, he was very personal to us and told us a lot about etiquettes and helped us understand more.

'Have to tell' should be past tense 'told'. 'Make her understand' is incorrect; it should be 'helped us understand'. 'I had' is incomplete and removed.

× I prefer that there should be more rules at school but it's rules should be not strict because strict rules make the students like in pressure but the rules which are not district it will make a student to follow it and like they will like to follow it.

✓ I prefer that there should be more rules at school but the rules should not be strict because strict rules make the students feel pressured. Rules that are not strict will make students want to follow them.

'It's rules' is incorrect; should be 'the rules'. 'Like in pressure' is incorrect; 'feel pressured' is correct. 'District' is a misspelling of 'strict'. 'Make a student to follow it' should be 'make students want to follow them' for correct plural and verb form.

× Yeah, we had really strict 9.

✓ Yeah, we had a really strict teacher.

'9' is likely a typo or mishearing; corrected to 'teacher' to make sense. Also, 'a really strict teacher' is singular and correct.

× She was a very strict teacher. She had taught a lot of things to us, but she was very sick.

✓ She was a very strict teacher. She taught a lot of things to us, but she was very strict.

'Had taught' is past perfect but simple past 'taught' is more appropriate here. 'She was very sick' is likely a mishearing; corrected to 'she was very strict' to match context.

× She taunts us a lot and scold us a lot, but we remember it because she was a very strict teacher and she made us learn many things.

✓ She taunted us a lot and scolded us a lot, but we remember it because she was a very strict teacher and she made us learn many things.

'Taunts' and 'scold' should be past tense 'taunted' and 'scolded' to match past context.

× Truly, I will don't like to work as a teacher in a rule play school because if there will be no rules, the students will misbehave with teachers and don't listen to the teachers, but there will be rules.

✓ Truly, I would not like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school because if there were no rules, the students would misbehave with teachers and not listen to them, but if there are rules,

'Will don't like' is incorrect; 'would not like' is correct modal verb usage. 'Rule play school' is corrected to 'rule-free school'. Conditional sentences require 'if there were' and 'would' for hypothetical situations.

× The student respect teachers and do understand the teacher.

✓ The students respect teachers and understand the teacher.

'Student' should be plural 'students' to match context. 'Do understand' is simplified to 'understand' for natural usage.

× But rule fairy school will I don't I will don't like to work in a as a teacher in.

✓ But in a rule-free school, I would not like to work as a teacher.

The sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. Corrected to a clear sentence with proper modal verb and word order.