Part 1
Giám khảo
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Thí sinh
Uh Invest would because uh, we are university students, so, so school, uh, raise for everyone. You must go to the classmate every day.
Giám khảo
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Thí sinh
No, I don't think a student would benefit for more risk because some students cannot cannot keep the rules, he say want to be the free.
Giám khảo
Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?
Thí sinh
Yes, I had a really teacher, my academic teacher. He is very friendship and teacher for my study. He tell me a lot of major knowledge.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?
Thí sinh
Uh, I like the least race school because the school has a lot of worries have some rates have not and you cannot to a management to their students. So you have make some enables rules for school.
Giám khảo
Have you ever had a really strict teacher?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have a really study teacher with my most teacher in my high school. He study me a lot of and I am very afraid for for he.
Giám khảo
Would you like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school?
Thí sinh
No, I don't like in a roofing school, uh, to, to work as a teacher because the roof is cool. Uh, the students can, is, is not too uh, amazement and uh, the student cannot sees the teachers lying.
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答不够清晰,语法和词汇使用错误较多,建议简洁明了地直接回答问题,并使用正确的词汇和句型。
Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules at my university. For example, students must attend classes every day to keep up with their studies.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 表达不够连贯,语法错误影响理解。建议使用连词连接观点,并用具体理由支持观点。
Ví dụ: No, I don't think students would benefit from more rules because some students might find it hard to follow them and prefer to have more freedom.
Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答缺乏流畅性和准确的词汇,建议使用更自然的表达和具体细节来描述老师的特点。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a very dedicated academic teacher who was friendly and always willing to help. He taught me a lot of important knowledge that helped me improve.
Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 回答混乱且难以理解,建议先明确表达观点,再用具体理由支持,注意语法和词汇的准确性。
Ví dụ: I prefer schools with fewer rules because too many rules can be stressful. However, some basic rules are necessary to manage students effectively.
Have you ever had a really strict teacher?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 表达不清楚且语法错误较多,建议用简单句子清晰描述老师的严格和自己的感受。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a very strict teacher in high school. He pushed me hard to study, and I was a bit afraid of him.
Would you like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答内容混乱且词汇错误严重,建议先明确表达观点,再用简单句子说明原因。
Ví dụ: No, I would not like to work in a school without rules because students might not respect teachers and it would be difficult to manage the class.
× You must go to the classmate every day.
✓ You must go to class every day.
这里的 'classmate' 是指同学,复数形式是 'classmates',但句意应为“上课”,所以应使用 'class'。这是单复数使用错误。
× No, I don't think a student would benefit for more risk because some students cannot cannot keep the rules, he say want to be the free.
✓ No, I don't think students would benefit from more rules because some students cannot keep the rules; they want to be free.
'would benefit for' 应为 'would benefit from',介词使用错误;'he say want to be the free' 主语和动词不一致,且表达不清,应改为 'they want to be free'。
× Yes, I had a really teacher, my academic teacher.
✓ Yes, I had a really dedicated teacher, my academic teacher.
'really' 是副词,后面应接形容词,缺少形容词 'dedicated',导致表达不完整。
× He is very friendship and teacher for my study.
✓ He is very friendly and a good teacher for my studies.
'friendship' 是名词,形容词应为 'friendly';'teacher for my study' 表达不自然,应为 'a good teacher for my studies'。
× He tell me a lot of major knowledge.
✓ He tells me a lot of important knowledge.
动词 'tell' 第三人称单数应加 's';'major knowledge' 不自然,改为 'important knowledge' 更合适。
× Uh, I like the least race school because the school has a lot of worries have some rates have not and you cannot to a management to their students.
✓ Uh, I like schools with fewer rules because some schools have many rules and some don't, and you cannot manage their students well.
'least race school' 词语错误,应为 'schools with fewer rules';'worries' 应为 'rules';句子结构混乱,需调整。
× So you have make some enables rules for school.
✓ So you have to make some necessary rules for the school.
'have make' 应为 'have to make',缺少情态动词;'enables rules' 词语错误,应为 'necessary rules'。
× Yes, I have a really study teacher with my most teacher in my high school.
✓ Yes, I had a really strict teacher, my main teacher in high school.
'really study teacher' 词语错误,应为 'really strict teacher';'with my most teacher' 不通顺,应为 'my main teacher'。
× He study me a lot of and I am very afraid for for he.
✓ He taught me a lot and I was very afraid of him.
'study' 应为过去式 'taught';'I am' 应为过去时 'I was';'afraid for he' 应为 'afraid of him',代词和介词使用错误。
× No, I don't like in a roofing school, uh, to, to work as a teacher because the roof is cool.
✓ No, I don't like working in a rule-free school as a teacher because the school is chaotic.
'roofing school' 词语错误,应为 'rule-free school';'don't like in' 结构错误,应为 'don't like working in'。
× Uh, the students can, is, is not too uh, amazement and uh, the student cannot sees the teachers lying.
✓ The students are not very disciplined, and they cannot respect the teachers.
'amazement' 用词错误,应为 'disciplined';'student cannot sees' 主谓不一致,应为 'students cannot see';'lying' 用词不当,应为 'respect'。